经典例题
(2025·江苏淮安初二集团期中)假如你是八年级(1)班的李华,你想加入你们学校的DIY俱乐部。你需要给俱乐部负责人李老师用英文写一封申请信,内容必须包含以下要点。
【要点】1.你的特长是什么?
2.你的一次DIY经历是怎样的?
3.你的希望是什么?
【要求】1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear Mr Li,
I'm Li Hua from Class One, Grade Eight. I want to join the DIY Club. I'm writing to introduce myself.
I really hope I can be a member of you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2025·江苏淮安初二集团期中)假如你是八年级(1)班的李华,你想加入你们学校的DIY俱乐部。你需要给俱乐部负责人李老师用英文写一封申请信,内容必须包含以下要点。
【要点】1.你的特长是什么?
2.你的一次DIY经历是怎样的?
3.你的希望是什么?
【要求】1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear Mr Li,
I'm Li Hua from Class One, Grade Eight. I want to join the DIY Club. I'm writing to introduce myself.
I really hope I can be a member of you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:I am good at making all kinds of small handcrafts and I always enjoy turning old daily things into new fancy items. Last month, I made a paper photo album as my mom's birthday gift. I stuck colourful paper on the cover and filled it with our family photos, and my mom was really excited when she received it. I hope to learn more DIY skills in the club and create more interesting works with other members.
解析:
【分析】本题为初二英语应用文写作题,要求以八年级(1)班李华的身份给DIY俱乐部负责人李老师写申请信,需覆盖三个核心要点:个人DIY特长、一次具体的DIY经历、加入俱乐部的希望,同时需符合80词左右的要求,开头和结尾已给出,写作时要注意语言简洁、要点齐全,不得出现真实人名、校名等信息。
【解析】写作时,首先点明个人DIY特长(擅长制作各类小手工,喜欢将旧日用品改造为新奇物品);接着具体描述DIY经历(上个月给妈妈制作纸相册作为生日礼物,用彩纸装饰封面并放入家庭照片,妈妈收到后很开心);最后说明加入俱乐部的希望(在俱乐部学习更多DIY技能,和其他成员创作更多有趣作品),确保三个要点全部覆盖,语言符合初中英语水平,词数达标。
【答案】I am good at making all kinds of small handcrafts and I always enjoy turning old daily things into new fancy items. Last month, I made a paper photo album as my mom's birthday gift. I stuck colourful paper on the cover and filled it with our family photos, and my mom was really excited when she received it. I hope to learn more DIY skills in the club and create more interesting works with other members.
【知识点】英文应用文写作、DIY话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题是初中英语期中测试常见的应用文写作题型,要求清晰,围绕给定要点展开,语言难度适中,考察学生的英语写作组织能力和话题表达能力,符合初二学生的学习要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时,首先点明个人DIY特长(擅长制作各类小手工,喜欢将旧日用品改造为新奇物品);接着具体描述DIY经历(上个月给妈妈制作纸相册作为生日礼物,用彩纸装饰封面并放入家庭照片,妈妈收到后很开心);最后说明加入俱乐部的希望(在俱乐部学习更多DIY技能,和其他成员创作更多有趣作品),确保三个要点全部覆盖,语言符合初中英语水平,词数达标。
【答案】I am good at making all kinds of small handcrafts and I always enjoy turning old daily things into new fancy items. Last month, I made a paper photo album as my mom's birthday gift. I stuck colourful paper on the cover and filled it with our family photos, and my mom was really excited when she received it. I hope to learn more DIY skills in the club and create more interesting works with other members.
【知识点】英文应用文写作、DIY话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】本题是初中英语期中测试常见的应用文写作题型,要求清晰,围绕给定要点展开,语言难度适中,考察学生的英语写作组织能力和话题表达能力,符合初二学生的学习要求。
【难度系数】0.6
写作指导
1. 本文是一封申请信。
2. 时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
3. 根据提示内容写出申请加入DIY俱乐部的原因,可适当增加细节。
写作模板

开篇点题 → I'm Li Hua...I want to join the DIY Club...
↓
详细介绍 → I am good at making handicrafts and...
I made a sandwich for my mum on her birthday...
↓
收篇结尾 → I really hope I can be a member of you.
1. 本文是一封申请信。
2. 时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
3. 根据提示内容写出申请加入DIY俱乐部的原因,可适当增加细节。
写作模板
开篇点题 → I'm Li Hua...I want to join the DIY Club...
↓
详细介绍 → I am good at making handicrafts and...
I made a sandwich for my mum on her birthday...
↓
收篇结尾 → I really hope I can be a member of you.
答案:Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in our school. I want to join the DIY Club very much.
I am good at making handicrafts and I show great interest in all kinds of DIY work. I always spend my free time making different DIY works at home. Last month, I made a colorful paper shelf to put my small books, and it helps me keep my desk clean and tidy now. I also made a fruit sandwich for my mum on her birthday last week, she was very happy and said it was the most special gift she got that day. I hope I can learn more new DIY skills in the club, and I also want to share my own DIY ideas with other members.
I really hope I can be a member of you. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I'm Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in our school. I want to join the DIY Club very much.
I am good at making handicrafts and I show great interest in all kinds of DIY work. I always spend my free time making different DIY works at home. Last month, I made a colorful paper shelf to put my small books, and it helps me keep my desk clean and tidy now. I also made a fruit sandwich for my mum on her birthday last week, she was very happy and said it was the most special gift she got that day. I hope I can learn more new DIY skills in the club, and I also want to share my own DIY ideas with other members.
I really hope I can be a member of you. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求写一封申请加入DIY俱乐部的信,解题思路需遵循给定的“开篇点题-详细介绍-收篇结尾”结构:1. 开篇点题:先进行自我介绍,明确表达申请加入DIY俱乐部的意愿;2. 详细介绍:结合提示内容,说明自身擅长手工制作的特点,补充具体的DIY经历(如制作纸书架、给妈妈做三明治的细节),体现DIY能力与兴趣;3. 收篇结尾:再次表达加入的希望,补充期待回复的礼貌用语,完善申请信格式。同时注意时态:介绍自身能力用一般现在时,讲述过往DIY经历用一般过去时。
【解析】
按照申请信的格式与要求,写作步骤如下:1. 开头写称呼“Dear Sir/Madam,”;2. 开篇点题:自我介绍并明确申请意愿,如“I'm Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in our school. I want to join the DIY Club very much.”;3. 详细介绍:先说明DIY能力与兴趣,如“I am good at making handicrafts and I show great interest in all kinds of DIY work. I always spend my free time making different DIY works at home.”,再补充具体经历(用一般过去时),如“Last month, I made a colorful paper shelf to put my small books, and it helps me keep my desk clean and tidy now. I also made a fruit sandwich for my mum on her birthday last week, she was very happy and said it was the most special gift she got that day.”,最后说明加入俱乐部的目的,如“I hope I can learn more new DIY skills in the club, and I also want to share my own DIY ideas with other members.”;4. 收篇结尾:再次表达加入希望并补充期待回复的礼貌语,如“I really hope I can be a member of you. I am looking forward to your reply.”;5. 落款写“Yours sincerely, Li Hua”。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in our school. I want to join the DIY Club very much.
I am good at making handicrafts and I show great interest in all kinds of DIY work. I always spend my free time making different DIY works at home. Last month, I made a colorful paper shelf to put my small books, and it helps me keep my desk clean and tidy now. I also made a fruit sandwich for my mum on her birthday last week, she was very happy and said it was the most special gift she got that day. I hope I can learn more new DIY skills in the club, and I also want to share my own DIY ideas with other members.
I really hope I can be a member of you. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语时态运用
【点评】
本题考查初中英语应用文写作能力,要求结合模板完成申请信,结构清晰,内容充实,补充了合理细节,符合申请信的格式与语言要求,能有效考查学生的英语基础应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求写一封申请加入DIY俱乐部的信,解题思路需遵循给定的“开篇点题-详细介绍-收篇结尾”结构:1. 开篇点题:先进行自我介绍,明确表达申请加入DIY俱乐部的意愿;2. 详细介绍:结合提示内容,说明自身擅长手工制作的特点,补充具体的DIY经历(如制作纸书架、给妈妈做三明治的细节),体现DIY能力与兴趣;3. 收篇结尾:再次表达加入的希望,补充期待回复的礼貌用语,完善申请信格式。同时注意时态:介绍自身能力用一般现在时,讲述过往DIY经历用一般过去时。
【解析】
按照申请信的格式与要求,写作步骤如下:1. 开头写称呼“Dear Sir/Madam,”;2. 开篇点题:自我介绍并明确申请意愿,如“I'm Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in our school. I want to join the DIY Club very much.”;3. 详细介绍:先说明DIY能力与兴趣,如“I am good at making handicrafts and I show great interest in all kinds of DIY work. I always spend my free time making different DIY works at home.”,再补充具体经历(用一般过去时),如“Last month, I made a colorful paper shelf to put my small books, and it helps me keep my desk clean and tidy now. I also made a fruit sandwich for my mum on her birthday last week, she was very happy and said it was the most special gift she got that day.”,最后说明加入俱乐部的目的,如“I hope I can learn more new DIY skills in the club, and I also want to share my own DIY ideas with other members.”;4. 收篇结尾:再次表达加入希望并补充期待回复的礼貌语,如“I really hope I can be a member of you. I am looking forward to your reply.”;5. 落款写“Yours sincerely, Li Hua”。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in our school. I want to join the DIY Club very much.
I am good at making handicrafts and I show great interest in all kinds of DIY work. I always spend my free time making different DIY works at home. Last month, I made a colorful paper shelf to put my small books, and it helps me keep my desk clean and tidy now. I also made a fruit sandwich for my mum on her birthday last week, she was very happy and said it was the most special gift she got that day. I hope I can learn more new DIY skills in the club, and I also want to share my own DIY ideas with other members.
I really hope I can be a member of you. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语时态运用
【点评】
本题考查初中英语应用文写作能力,要求结合模板完成申请信,结构清晰,内容充实,补充了合理细节,符合申请信的格式与语言要求,能有效考查学生的英语基础应用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5