五、书面表达
假如你是张华,收到了校长室发来的学生意见调查表。请你认真阅读这份调查表,并结合自己的实际情况和想法,给校长室写一封100字左右的回信。

Dear headmaster,
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
假如你是张华,收到了校长室发来的学生意见调查表。请你认真阅读这份调查表,并结合自己的实际情况和想法,给校长室写一封100字左右的回信。
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food.
My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
答案:Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以张华的身份给校长室写回信,需结合调查表的三个问题(学校图书馆、食堂食物、老师学业帮助)及额外建议,完成100词左右的书信。解题思路:1. 遵循英文书信格式,开头点明写信目的是提建议;2. 对应调查表的三个问题,结合自身实际给出肯定或否定的回答,并补充合理建议;3. 增加调查表外的合理建议,结尾表达对学校生活改善的期望,确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照英文书信结构写作:1. 开头说明写信目的是给学校生活提建议;2. 回应调查表问题:①肯定图书馆现代化,建议增加周刊和报纸;②表示喜欢食堂食物,建议增加本地菜;③肯定老师的帮助,感谢其支持;3. 补充额外建议:增加更多社团;4. 结尾表达希望建议有助于改善学校生活。
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语书面表达、建议表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生校园生活,考查学生运用英语进行实用写作的能力,要求紧扣题目要求,内容贴合调查表,语言通顺自然,符合书信规范。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题,要求以张华的身份给校长室写回信,需结合调查表的三个问题(学校图书馆、食堂食物、老师学业帮助)及额外建议,完成100词左右的书信。解题思路:1. 遵循英文书信格式,开头点明写信目的是提建议;2. 对应调查表的三个问题,结合自身实际给出肯定或否定的回答,并补充合理建议;3. 增加调查表外的合理建议,结尾表达对学校生活改善的期望,确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照英文书信结构写作:1. 开头说明写信目的是给学校生活提建议;2. 回应调查表问题:①肯定图书馆现代化,建议增加周刊和报纸;②表示喜欢食堂食物,建议增加本地菜;③肯定老师的帮助,感谢其支持;3. 补充额外建议:增加更多社团;4. 结尾表达希望建议有助于改善学校生活。
【答案】
Dear headmaster,
I'm writing to make some suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
Our library is modern and new. However, I don't think we have enough reading materials in it. Can we have some weekly magazines and newspapers to help us know what's happening in the world? I like the food in our dining hall, but I suggest that it should provide more local food. My teachers are all kind and patient to us. With their support and help, I can learn all my subjects well. Moreover, I hope there will be more clubs for us to choose from.
I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语书面表达、建议表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生校园生活,考查学生运用英语进行实用写作的能力,要求紧扣题目要求,内容贴合调查表,语言通顺自然,符合书信规范。
【难度系数】
0.5