八、书面表达（30分）
假设你是李华，你校上周日组织了以“自然探索与生态保护”为主题的野外考察活动。请根据以下要点给你的笔友写一封100词左右的英文邮件，分享当天的活动经历和感受。（所给内容不计入总词数）
要点：1. 时间：上周日下午；
2. 地点：崇明东滩鸟类国家级自然保护区（Chongming Dongtan National Nature Reserve）；
3. 活动：① 参观保护区；② 观察珍稀鸟类；③ 制作以“保护生态系统”为主题的海报；
4. 收获与感受。
Dear Saul，
How's everything going?
Best wishes，
Li Hua
假设你是李华，你校上周日组织了以“自然探索与生态保护”为主题的野外考察活动。请根据以下要点给你的笔友写一封100词左右的英文邮件，分享当天的活动经历和感受。（所给内容不计入总词数）
要点：1. 时间：上周日下午；
2. 地点：崇明东滩鸟类国家级自然保护区（Chongming Dongtan National Nature Reserve）；
3. 活动：① 参观保护区；② 观察珍稀鸟类；③ 制作以“保护生态系统”为主题的海报；
4. 收获与感受。
Dear Saul，
How's everything going?
Best wishes，
Li Hua
答案：Last Sunday afternoon, we had a field trip to Chongming Dongtan National Nature Reserve. It was an amazing experience!
We first took a tour of the nature reserve with a guide. Then we had a close look at some rare birds. It was wonderful to watch them flying around! After that, we joined some volunteers to make posters. We hope people will know more about the wetland through these posters.
It was a fun and meaningful day! I learned about the importance of the ecosystem and I felt proud to do something for our planet. But there is still much more to do. We should be as environment-friendly as possible in our daily lives to protect the ecosystem.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
We first took a tour of the nature reserve with a guide. Then we had a close look at some rare birds. It was wonderful to watch them flying around! After that, we joined some volunteers to make posters. We hope people will know more about the wetland through these posters.
It was a fun and meaningful day! I learned about the importance of the ecosystem and I felt proud to do something for our planet. But there is still much more to do. We should be as environment-friendly as possible in our daily lives to protect the ecosystem.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Saul写一封100词左右的英文邮件，分享上周日“自然探索与生态保护”野外考察的经历与感受。解题思路：1. 遵循邮件格式，开头已给出，结尾用指定祝福语，落款为Li Hua；2. 按时间顺序覆盖所有要点：时间（上周日下午）、地点（崇明东滩鸟类国家级自然保护区）、三项活动（参观保护区、观察珍稀鸟类、制作“保护生态系统”主题海报）；3. 补充合理的收获与感受，使内容完整；4. 使用恰当衔接词（如first、then）让行文流畅，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
写作时，先点明活动的时间和地点，再按顺序描述三项活动：首先跟随导游参观保护区，接着观察珍稀鸟类，之后和志愿者一起制作主题海报；最后表达收获——认识到生态系统的重要性，为保护地球做贡献的自豪感，以及呼吁日常环保的想法。注意使用第一人称，语言简洁自然，符合邮件的口语化表达，确保所有要点都被覆盖，词数约100词。
【答案】
Last Sunday afternoon, we had a field trip to Chongming Dongtan National Nature Reserve. It was an amazing experience!
We first took a tour of the nature reserve with a guide. Then we had a close look at some rare birds. It was wonderful to watch them flying around! After that, we joined some volunteers to make posters. We hope people will know more about the wetland through these posters.
It was a fun and meaningful day! I learned about the importance of the ecosystem and I felt proud to do something for our planet. But there is still much more to do. We should be as environment-friendly as possible in our daily lives to protect the ecosystem.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、要点整合、衔接词运用
【点评】
该范文严格遵循邮件格式，完整覆盖所有给定要点，采用时间顺序组织内容，逻辑清晰；语言流畅自然，情感真挚，既描述了活动经历，又表达了对生态保护的深刻感悟，符合李华的身份设定，是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Saul写一封100词左右的英文邮件，分享上周日“自然探索与生态保护”野外考察的经历与感受。解题思路：1. 遵循邮件格式，开头已给出，结尾用指定祝福语，落款为Li Hua；2. 按时间顺序覆盖所有要点：时间（上周日下午）、地点（崇明东滩鸟类国家级自然保护区）、三项活动（参观保护区、观察珍稀鸟类、制作“保护生态系统”主题海报）；3. 补充合理的收获与感受，使内容完整；4. 使用恰当衔接词（如first、then）让行文流畅，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
写作时，先点明活动的时间和地点，再按顺序描述三项活动：首先跟随导游参观保护区，接着观察珍稀鸟类，之后和志愿者一起制作主题海报；最后表达收获——认识到生态系统的重要性，为保护地球做贡献的自豪感，以及呼吁日常环保的想法。注意使用第一人称，语言简洁自然，符合邮件的口语化表达，确保所有要点都被覆盖，词数约100词。
【答案】
Last Sunday afternoon, we had a field trip to Chongming Dongtan National Nature Reserve. It was an amazing experience!
We first took a tour of the nature reserve with a guide. Then we had a close look at some rare birds. It was wonderful to watch them flying around! After that, we joined some volunteers to make posters. We hope people will know more about the wetland through these posters.
It was a fun and meaningful day! I learned about the importance of the ecosystem and I felt proud to do something for our planet. But there is still much more to do. We should be as environment-friendly as possible in our daily lives to protect the ecosystem.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、要点整合、衔接词运用
【点评】
该范文严格遵循邮件格式，完整覆盖所有给定要点，采用时间顺序组织内容，逻辑清晰；语言流畅自然，情感真挚，既描述了活动经历，又表达了对生态保护的深刻感悟，符合李华的身份设定，是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.6