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根据下列提示,写一篇90词左右的英文报道。
1. 8月17日(星期日)发生了一次山崩(landslide)；
2.连续两天大雨后,山崩发生；
3.那天有个女孩和她母亲在家,她父亲下午到家,并叫她们赶快离开；
4.雨大,父亲劝告她们带好雨伞；
5.这时,房子突然开始摇晃,他们非常害怕,迅速跑开了；
6.第二天上午他们回到家时,女孩发现房子没有了,到处是碎玻璃和碎砖块,女孩感到很悲伤。
根据下列提示,写一篇90词左右的英文报道。
1. 8月17日(星期日)发生了一次山崩(landslide)；
2.连续两天大雨后,山崩发生；
3.那天有个女孩和她母亲在家,她父亲下午到家,并叫她们赶快离开；
4.雨大,父亲劝告她们带好雨伞；
5.这时,房子突然开始摇晃,他们非常害怕,迅速跑开了；
6.第二天上午他们回到家时,女孩发现房子没有了,到处是碎玻璃和碎砖块,女孩感到很悲伤。
There was a landslide on Sunday, 17th August. After two days of the heavy rain, the landslide happened.
A girl was at home with her mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and told them to leave their house.
Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. They got out quickly.
Suddenly, the building started shaking. They were frightened and ran away quickly.
The weather was really terrible. The following morning, they went back home.
The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere.
The girl felt very sad.
答案：One possible version:
There was a landslide on Sunday, 17th August. After two days of the heavy rain, the landslide happened.
A girl was at home with her mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and told them to leave their house. Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. They got out quickly.
Suddenly, the building started shaking. They were frightened and ran away quickly. The weather was really terrible. The following morning, they went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. The girl felt very sad.
There was a landslide on Sunday, 17th August. After two days of the heavy rain, the landslide happened.
A girl was at home with her mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and told them to leave their house. Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. They got out quickly.
Suddenly, the building started shaking. They were frightened and ran away quickly. The weather was really terrible. The following morning, they went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. The girl felt very sad.
解析：
【分析】
本题为要点式英文报道写作题，解题思路为：首先明确全文时态用一般过去时（叙述过去发生的事件）；接着梳理给定的6个提示要点，按时间逻辑顺序串联内容：先点明山崩的时间、诱因，再交代人物的状态与行动，然后描述山崩发生时的场景，最后说明次日回家的结果及女孩的感受；最后调整语句使逻辑通顺，控制词数在90左右，确保不遗漏要点。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：全文采用一般过去时，适配过去事件的叙述；
2. 整合要点：按时间线依次融入提示内容：①山崩时间（周日，8月17日）及原因（连续两天大雨后）；②人物情况（女孩与母亲在家，父亲下午回家叫她们撤离）；③父亲的提醒（带雨伞）；④山崩发生时的场景（房子摇晃，害怕跑开）；⑤次日回家的场景（房子消失，遍地碎玻璃砖块）；⑥女孩的感受（悲伤）；
3. 组织语言：将上述要点用连贯的英语连接，调整语句简洁通顺，符合报道的风格，控制词数约90词。
【答案】
One possible version:
There was a landslide on Sunday, 17th August. After two days of the heavy rain, the landslide happened.
A girl was at home with her mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and told them to leave their house. Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. Suddenly, the building started shaking. They were frightened and ran away quickly. The following morning, they went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. The girl felt very sad.
【知识点】
英文报道写作、一般过去时、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息、运用英语叙事的能力，要求准确覆盖所有提示要点，语言通顺且符合词数要求，是基础写作题型，适合学生练习要点式写作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为要点式英文报道写作题，解题思路为：首先明确全文时态用一般过去时（叙述过去发生的事件）；接着梳理给定的6个提示要点，按时间逻辑顺序串联内容：先点明山崩的时间、诱因，再交代人物的状态与行动，然后描述山崩发生时的场景，最后说明次日回家的结果及女孩的感受；最后调整语句使逻辑通顺，控制词数在90左右，确保不遗漏要点。
【解析】
1. 确定时态：全文采用一般过去时，适配过去事件的叙述；
2. 整合要点：按时间线依次融入提示内容：①山崩时间（周日，8月17日）及原因（连续两天大雨后）；②人物情况（女孩与母亲在家，父亲下午回家叫她们撤离）；③父亲的提醒（带雨伞）；④山崩发生时的场景（房子摇晃，害怕跑开）；⑤次日回家的场景（房子消失，遍地碎玻璃砖块）；⑥女孩的感受（悲伤）；
3. 组织语言：将上述要点用连贯的英语连接，调整语句简洁通顺，符合报道的风格，控制词数约90词。
【答案】
One possible version:
There was a landslide on Sunday, 17th August. After two days of the heavy rain, the landslide happened.
A girl was at home with her mum that day. Her dad came home in the afternoon and told them to leave their house. Because of the heavy rain, he advised them to bring umbrellas. Suddenly, the building started shaking. They were frightened and ran away quickly. The following morning, they went back home. The girl found there was no house at all. There were only pieces of glass and bricks everywhere. The girl felt very sad.
【知识点】
英文报道写作、一般过去时、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息、运用英语叙事的能力，要求准确覆盖所有提示要点，语言通顺且符合词数要求，是基础写作题型，适合学生练习要点式写作。
【难度系数】
0.5