第5课时 主题写作专项 练写作 答案D8
主题词网
优选词汇
个人信息
· name
· Chinese name
· first name
· family name
· last name
· middle name
· full name
· information
· English name
· phone number
学校
· school
· lesson
· grade
· subject
· class teacher
· class
· classmate
· at school
· middle school
· have classes/lessons
爱好
· run
· swim
· play games
· sing
· paint
· play sports
· dance
· read books
· play tennis
· play the guitar
· watch TV
· play football
· play the piano
· listen to music
· play basketball
写作实例
→审主题 →审人称：以第一人称为主 →审时态：一般现在时
假设你是北京阳光中学（Sunshine Middle School）七年级学生李华，今天你要参加学校举办的主题为“This is me!”的演讲比赛。请写一篇自我介绍的演讲稿，内容包括个人信息和爱好等。
注意：1. 必须包含上述要点，可以适当发挥想象；
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数70左右。
在写作之前，仔细阅读所给的内容提示（包括文字、图表等），明确要写的内容，确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等，理顺思路，确定主旨。在动笔写作之前，如果有时间，可以列出写作提纲，以避免遗漏要点。
主题词网
优选词汇
个人信息
· name
· Chinese name
· first name
· family name
· last name
· middle name
· full name
· information
· English name
· phone number
学校
· school
· lesson
· grade
· subject
· class teacher
· class
· classmate
· at school
· middle school
· have classes/lessons
爱好
· run
· swim
· play games
· sing
· paint
· play sports
· dance
· read books
· play tennis
· play the guitar
· watch TV
· play football
· play the piano
· listen to music
· play basketball
写作实例
→审主题 →审人称：以第一人称为主 →审时态：一般现在时
假设你是北京阳光中学（Sunshine Middle School）七年级学生李华，今天你要参加学校举办的主题为“This is me!”的演讲比赛。请写一篇自我介绍的演讲稿，内容包括个人信息和爱好等。
注意：1. 必须包含上述要点，可以适当发挥想象；
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数70左右。
在写作之前，仔细阅读所给的内容提示（包括文字、图表等），明确要写的内容，确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等，理顺思路，确定主旨。在动笔写作之前，如果有时间，可以列出写作提纲，以避免遗漏要点。
答案：Hello everyone!
I'd like to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a Grade 7 student in Sunshine Middle School. There are three people in my family. Now I live with my parents in Beijing. I have different hobbies. I like playing basketball after class. I also like reading books in my free time.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
I'd like to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a Grade 7 student in Sunshine Middle School. There are three people in my family. Now I live with my parents in Beijing. I have different hobbies. I like playing basketball after class. I also like reading books in my free time.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
解析：
【分析】
本题是英语主题写作题，主题为“This is me!”的自我介绍演讲稿。解题思路：1. 审题：确定体裁为演讲稿，人称用第一人称，时态为一般现在时；2. 结构：按照给定的“开头-中间-结尾”框架写作，开头开篇点题，中间详细描述个人信息与爱好，结尾总结并发出邀请；3. 选词：从给定优选词汇中选合适词汇，覆盖所有要求要点，适当发挥，控制词数70左右。
【解析】
1. 开头：用高分句式“I'd like to introduce myself to you.”开篇点题；
2. 中间：依次介绍个人信息：姓名Li Hua、年龄13岁、学校Sunshine Middle School七年级、家庭3人、和父母住北京；再写爱好，选play basketball和read books，符合给定词汇；
3. 结尾：用“This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?”总结并发出邀请，确保要点全覆盖，时态正确，用词恰当。
【答案】
Hello everyone!
I'd like to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a Grade 7 student in Sunshine Middle School. There are three people in my family. Now I live with my parents in Beijing. I have different hobbies. I like playing basketball after class. I also like reading books in my free time.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
【知识点】
英语写作、自我介绍类作文
【点评】
本文结构清晰，覆盖所有要求要点，用词准确，符合演讲稿格式，是一篇优秀的自我介绍范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语主题写作题，主题为“This is me!”的自我介绍演讲稿。解题思路：1. 审题：确定体裁为演讲稿，人称用第一人称，时态为一般现在时；2. 结构：按照给定的“开头-中间-结尾”框架写作，开头开篇点题，中间详细描述个人信息与爱好，结尾总结并发出邀请；3. 选词：从给定优选词汇中选合适词汇，覆盖所有要求要点，适当发挥，控制词数70左右。
【解析】
1. 开头：用高分句式“I'd like to introduce myself to you.”开篇点题；
2. 中间：依次介绍个人信息：姓名Li Hua、年龄13岁、学校Sunshine Middle School七年级、家庭3人、和父母住北京；再写爱好，选play basketball和read books，符合给定词汇；
3. 结尾：用“This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?”总结并发出邀请，确保要点全覆盖，时态正确，用词恰当。
【答案】
Hello everyone!
I'd like to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I am a Grade 7 student in Sunshine Middle School. There are three people in my family. Now I live with my parents in Beijing. I have different hobbies. I like playing basketball after class. I also like reading books in my free time.
This is me. Do you want to make friends with me?
【知识点】
英语写作、自我介绍类作文
【点评】
本文结构清晰，覆盖所有要求要点，用词准确，符合演讲稿格式，是一篇优秀的自我介绍范文。
【难度系数】
0.5