写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D8
「2026 云南昆明十中教育集团期中改编」
一位英国网友Richard在网络上发了一个交友帖子，他想结交一位中国朋友。假如你是李华，请你阅读他的帖子并用英语给他写一封信。
Making New Friends
Hi, I am Richard Miller. I am 13 years old. I want to make friends with you. How old are you? Can you tell me something about yourself and your favourite things? Do you want to be my friend?
注意:1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数70左右;
2.文章中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Richard,
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
「2026 云南昆明十中教育集团期中改编」
一位英国网友Richard在网络上发了一个交友帖子，他想结交一位中国朋友。假如你是李华，请你阅读他的帖子并用英语给他写一封信。
Making New Friends
Hi, I am Richard Miller. I am 13 years old. I want to make friends with you. How old are you? Can you tell me something about yourself and your favourite things? Do you want to be my friend?
注意:1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数70左右;
2.文章中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend. Now let me tell you more about myself.
I'm also 13 years old, just like you! I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city.
I have some favourites. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案：第5课时 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend. Now let me tell you more about myself.
I'm also 13 years old, just like you! I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city.
I have some favourites. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. It's great to know that you want to have a new friend. I'd like to. Now I'd like to introduce myself first.
I'm a boy of your age. I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing, the capital of China. It is a beautiful city with lots of places of interest.
There are a lot of things I like best. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue because it can make me calm. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books. The hobbies can make me happy.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
基础版范文
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend. Now let me tell you more about myself.
I'm also 13 years old, just like you! I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city.
I have some favourites. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. It's great to know that you want to have a new friend. I'd like to. Now I'd like to introduce myself first.
I'm a boy of your age. I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing, the capital of China. It is a beautiful city with lots of places of interest.
There are a lot of things I like best. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue because it can make me calm. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books. The hobbies can make me happy.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：作为李华给英国网友Richard回信，需回应他帖子中的问题（年龄、自身情况、最喜欢的事物），同时符合书信格式、词数要求（70左右）且不能出现真实姓名和校名。解题思路：1. 开头问候并表明想做朋友的意愿；2. 依次介绍自己的年龄、居住地、最喜欢的食物、颜色、爱好等内容；3. 结尾表达期待回信的心情，确保语言流畅，符合英语书信规范。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤：1. 开头：用“Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend.”问候并点明交友意愿；2. 主体：回答Richard的问题，说明自己的年龄（13岁）、居住地（如北京），再介绍最喜欢的食物（牛肉面）、颜色（蓝色）、爱好（篮球、听音乐、读书）；3. 结尾：用“That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.”过渡后，加上期待回信的句子，符合书信格式。
【答案】
基础版范文：
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend. Now let me tell you more about myself.
I'm also 13 years old, just like you! I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city.
I have some favourites. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、自我介绍类作文
【点评】
本题为日常交友主题的英语书信写作题，贴近学生生活，考查学生运用英语进行信息组织和日常交流的能力，要求学生掌握书信格式及基础的自我介绍表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：作为李华给英国网友Richard回信，需回应他帖子中的问题（年龄、自身情况、最喜欢的事物），同时符合书信格式、词数要求（70左右）且不能出现真实姓名和校名。解题思路：1. 开头问候并表明想做朋友的意愿；2. 依次介绍自己的年龄、居住地、最喜欢的食物、颜色、爱好等内容；3. 结尾表达期待回信的心情，确保语言流畅，符合英语书信规范。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤：1. 开头：用“Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend.”问候并点明交友意愿；2. 主体：回答Richard的问题，说明自己的年龄（13岁）、居住地（如北京），再介绍最喜欢的食物（牛肉面）、颜色（蓝色）、爱好（篮球、听音乐、读书）；3. 结尾：用“That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.”过渡后，加上期待回信的句子，符合书信格式。
【答案】
基础版范文：
Dear Richard,
Hi! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to be your new friend. Now let me tell you more about myself.
I'm also 13 years old, just like you! I come from Nanjing, but now I live in Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city.
I have some favourites. My favourite food is beef noodles. My favourite colour is blue. I like sports and my favourite sport is basketball. I like listening to music. I also like reading books.
That's all about me. I think we can be good friends.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、自我介绍类作文
【点评】
本题为日常交友主题的英语书信写作题，贴近学生生活，考查学生运用英语进行信息组织和日常交流的能力，要求学生掌握书信格式及基础的自我介绍表达。
【难度系数】
0.6