第5课时 主题写作专项 练写作 答案D12
主题词网
优选词汇
家庭成员
· grandparent · grandfather · grandmother · parent · father
· mother · aunt · uncle · sister · brother
· son · daughter · wife · husband · cousin
职业
· job · teacher · doctor · nurse · policeman
· manager · worker · driver · manager · actor
外貌
· handsome · beautiful · tall · short · thin
性格
· funny · kind · clever · friendly · helpful
写作实例
→审时态：一般现在时 →审主题 →审人称：以第一、三人称为主
今天班里组织了一项“我爱我家”的活动，该活动要求每名学生介绍自己的家人。请你根据自己的全家福，向全班同学介绍你的家人。
提示内容：1.介绍你的家庭成员，包括年龄和职业等；
2.表达你对家人的爱。
写作要求：1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数70左右。
写作支架
开头 开篇点题
中间 详细介绍家人
结尾 表达对家人的爱
教材原文
P33 This is my family photo.
P31 I have a brother and a sister.
P32 I love my big family.
P33 We love and help each other.
优秀范文
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all.①
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital.② This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute.③ They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.
亮点评析
①以I’d like to...句式点明主题。
②以并列句的结构介绍“我”爸爸的职业和工作地点。
③该句中的原因状语从句解释了“我”喜欢妹妹的原因。
主题词网
优选词汇
家庭成员
· grandparent · grandfather · grandmother · parent · father
· mother · aunt · uncle · sister · brother
· son · daughter · wife · husband · cousin
职业
· job · teacher · doctor · nurse · policeman
· manager · worker · driver · manager · actor
外貌
· handsome · beautiful · tall · short · thin
性格
· funny · kind · clever · friendly · helpful
写作实例
→审时态：一般现在时 →审主题 →审人称：以第一、三人称为主
今天班里组织了一项“我爱我家”的活动，该活动要求每名学生介绍自己的家人。请你根据自己的全家福，向全班同学介绍你的家人。
提示内容：1.介绍你的家庭成员，包括年龄和职业等；
2.表达你对家人的爱。
写作要求：1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数70左右。
写作支架
开头 开篇点题
中间 详细介绍家人
结尾 表达对家人的爱
教材原文
P33 This is my family photo.
P31 I have a brother and a sister.
P32 I love my big family.
P33 We love and help each other.
优秀范文
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all.①
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital.② This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute.③ They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.
亮点评析
①以I’d like to...句式点明主题。
②以并列句的结构介绍“我”爸爸的职业和工作地点。
③该句中的原因状语从句解释了“我”喜欢妹妹的原因。
答案：Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all.
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital. This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute. They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital. This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute. They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.
解析：
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“介绍家人”，要求使用一般现在时，以第一、三人称为主，词数约70词。按照写作支架分为三部分：开头用高分句式开篇点题；中间详细介绍全家福中的家人，依次说明爸爸的年龄、职业、工作单位，妈妈的年龄、职业、爱好，哥哥的名字、年龄，妹妹的名字、年龄及喜欢她的原因；结尾表达对家人的爱。需结合给定的家庭成员、职业等词汇，确保内容完整、语句通顺。
【解析】根据写作要求和支架，依次补全内容：开头用高分句式“I’d like to introduce my family to you all”开篇；中间点明是全家福并说明人数，依次介绍爸爸、妈妈、哥哥、妹妹的相关信息，最后说明哥哥妹妹是学生；结尾表达对家人的爱。
【答案】Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all.
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital. This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute. They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.
【知识点】英语写作、一般现在时运用、家庭成员表达
【点评】本文结构清晰，符合写作支架要求，运用高分句式开篇点题，详细介绍了家人的相关信息，结尾表达了对家人的爱，内容完整，语句通顺，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据写作要求和支架，依次补全内容：开头用高分句式“I’d like to introduce my family to you all”开篇；中间点明是全家福并说明人数，依次介绍爸爸、妈妈、哥哥、妹妹的相关信息，最后说明哥哥妹妹是学生；结尾表达对家人的爱。
【答案】Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my family to you all.
This is my family photo. You can see five people in the photo. This man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a doctor and he works for a big hospital. This woman is my mother. She is 38. She is an English teacher. She likes reading books. I have a brother and a sister. My brother is Li Di and he is 8 years old. My sister’s name is Li Ya. She is 6 years old. I like her because she looks very cute. They are both students.
I love my big family. We love and help each other.
【知识点】英语写作、一般现在时运用、家庭成员表达
【点评】本文结构清晰，符合写作支架要求，运用高分句式开篇点题，详细介绍了家人的相关信息，结尾表达了对家人的爱，内容完整，语句通顺，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】0.5