写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D12
「2026浙江宁波鄞州十三校期中联考」
假如你是李华,你所在班级的英语课上组织了一场“最美家庭（The Most Beautiful Family）”的评选活动。请根据以下提示,向英语老师写一封推荐信,推荐你的家庭。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名,注意人称;
2.必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for “The Most Beautiful Family” in our class.
Yours,
Li Hua
「2026浙江宁波鄞州十三校期中联考」
假如你是李华,你所在班级的英语课上组织了一场“最美家庭（The Most Beautiful Family）”的评选活动。请根据以下提示,向英语老师写一封推荐信,推荐你的家庭。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名,注意人称;
2.必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
3.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
4.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for “The Most Beautiful Family” in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports.
My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：第5课时 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is a tall and strong man with short black hair. He is outgoing and talented in playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind. She loves cooking delicious meals for us when she is free. I am a student who loves sports. I often play sports with my classmates after school.
There are a lot of fun things we do together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
基础版范文
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶版范文
Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is a tall and strong man with short black hair. He is outgoing and talented in playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind. She loves cooking delicious meals for us when she is free. I am a student who loves sports. I often play sports with my classmates after school.
There are a lot of fun things we do together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】本题是英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给张老师写推荐信，推荐自己的家庭参加班级“最美家庭”评选。解题思路：1. 明确需涵盖的所有提示信息：家庭成员（父亲、母亲、自己）的基本信息（外貌、性格、兴趣）、一家人常共同参与的活动、对家人的感情；2. 结合已给出的书信开头结尾，中间按“介绍家庭成员→列举共同活动→表达家庭情感”的逻辑展开；3. 注意使用第一人称，不出现真实人名，保证语句通顺、要点完整，词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，介绍家庭成员：说明家庭共三人，分别描述父亲的外貌、性格与兴趣，母亲的外貌、性格与爱好，以及自己的基本情况；2. 列举一家人常做的活动，如周末散步、看电影等；3. 表达对家庭的热爱，完成书信。
【答案】Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、家庭主题写作、英语应用文表达
【点评】本题围绕“最美家庭”主题考察英语书信写作，要求整合给定信息，是初中英语典型的基础写作题，注重语言连贯性与要点完整性，符合日常教学的写作训练要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，介绍家庭成员：说明家庭共三人，分别描述父亲的外貌、性格与兴趣，母亲的外貌、性格与爱好，以及自己的基本情况；2. 列举一家人常做的活动，如周末散步、看电影等；3. 表达对家庭的热爱，完成书信。
【答案】Dear Ms Zhang,
I would like to recommend my family for "The Most Beautiful Family" in our class.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is outgoing and likes playing sports. My mother is a beautiful lady with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am a student and I love to play sports.
We often do something together. For example, on weekends we often go for a walk in the park. We also watch movies together.
I love my family. I love my parents a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、家庭主题写作、英语应用文表达
【点评】本题围绕“最美家庭”主题考察英语书信写作，要求整合给定信息，是初中英语典型的基础写作题，注重语言连贯性与要点完整性，符合日常教学的写作训练要求。
【难度系数】0.5