写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D16
「2026 浙江宁波鄞州十三校期中联考」
假如你是李华,本周五下午,学校“校园开放日”要迎来一批英国小伙伴参观,学校计划从三个年级中各挑选一名学生负责接待,你很荣幸被选中。请你根据以下内容提示,用英文写一篇导游词,向来访的客人介绍你的校园。
内容提示:
• 先简单介绍你自己;
• 介绍你的学校并描述你最喜欢的一处地方(如图书馆、操场、花园等);
• 欢迎他们的到来,并邀请他们周末到你家做客。
要求:
1.条理清楚,意思连贯,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名;
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
Have a great day!
「2026 浙江宁波鄞州十三校期中联考」
假如你是李华,本周五下午,学校“校园开放日”要迎来一批英国小伙伴参观,学校计划从三个年级中各挑选一名学生负责接待,你很荣幸被选中。请你根据以下内容提示,用英文写一篇导游词,向来访的客人介绍你的校园。
内容提示:
• 先简单介绍你自己;
• 介绍你的学校并描述你最喜欢的一处地方(如图书馆、操场、花园等);
• 欢迎他们的到来,并邀请他们周末到你家做客。
要求:
1.条理清楚,意思连贯,书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实的校名、人名;
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7.
Have a great day!
答案：第5课时 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful. There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here. Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
进阶版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I'm 13 years old. I'm outgoing and active. I like not only reading books but also playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is a very big and beautiful school with some different buildings. There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library because it is a quiet place for reading books.
I hope you will fall in love with our school and have a good time here. Please come to my home if you are free on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
基础版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful. There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here. Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
进阶版范文
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I'm 13 years old. I'm outgoing and active. I like not only reading books but also playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is a very big and beautiful school with some different buildings. There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library because it is a quiet place for reading books.
I hope you will fall in love with our school and have a good time here. Please come to my home if you are free on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
解析：
【分析】本题要求写校园开放日的英文导游词，需按以下思路完成：首先补充开头未完成的自我介绍（结合给定班级，添加年龄、爱好）；接着介绍学校的整体情况及主要设施；然后描述最喜欢的校园场所（如图书馆）并说明喜欢的理由；最后发出周末到家里做客的邀请，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，无真实信息。
【解析】1. 补充自我介绍：在开头后添加年龄、爱好，如“I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.”；2. 介绍学校：说明学校的规模及主要建筑，如“Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful. There is a teaching building, a dining hall, a science building, a big playground and a nice library.”；3. 描述最喜欢的场所：选择图书馆，说明其特点，如“My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.”；4. 发出邀请：邀请对方周末到家里，如“Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.”；5. 衔接结尾，确保整体连贯，词数约70，符合要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful. There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here. Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、校园话题表达
【点评】本题为初中英语期中联考的写作题，围绕校园开放日的导游词展开，要求涵盖指定内容，注重基础表达的运用，考查学生的语言组织和内容整合能力，符合初中英语写作的常见考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 补充自我介绍：在开头后添加年龄、爱好，如“I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.”；2. 介绍学校：说明学校的规模及主要建筑，如“Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful. There is a teaching building, a dining hall, a science building, a big playground and a nice library.”；3. 描述最喜欢的场所：选择图书馆，说明其特点，如“My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.”；4. 发出邀请：邀请对方周末到家里，如“Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.”；5. 衔接结尾，确保整体连贯，词数约70，符合要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 7. I'm 13 years old. I like reading books and playing sports.
Welcome to our school! It is very big and beautiful. There is a teaching building, a dining hall and a science building in our school. We also have a big playground and a nice library. My favourite place is the library. It is a quiet place and I can read books there.
I hope you will have a good time here. Please come to my home on the weekend! You can meet my family and we can play games together.
Have a great day!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、校园话题表达
【点评】本题为初中英语期中联考的写作题，围绕校园开放日的导游词展开，要求涵盖指定内容，注重基础表达的运用，考查学生的语言组织和内容整合能力，符合初中英语写作的常见考查方向。
【难度系数】0.6