写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D21
「2026 辽宁抚顺望花期末改编」
假设你是李辉,你的英国笔友 Tom 发来邮件,想了解你最喜欢的学科。请给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的学科是什么;2.你为什么喜欢这门学科;3.这门学科对你的帮助。
注意:
1.词数 70 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;3.信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
「2026 辽宁抚顺望花期末改编」
假设你是李辉,你的英国笔友 Tom 发来邮件,想了解你最喜欢的学科。请给他写一封回信。
内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的学科是什么;2.你为什么喜欢这门学科;3.这门学科对你的帮助。
注意:
1.词数 70 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;3.信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. Why do I like this subject? There are three reasons. First, art is easy and relaxing. Second, art is interesting. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao is a good teacher and she is kind to everyone.
Art helps me a lot. I am good at painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I win some painting prizes. Art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
答案：第5课时 主题写作专项
基础版范文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. Why do I like this subject? There are three reasons. First, art is easy and relaxing. Second, art is interesting. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao is a good teacher and she is kind to everyone.
Art helps me a lot. I am good at painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I win some painting prizes. Art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
进阶版范文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. There are three reasons why I like this subject. First, art is easy and relaxing. I always feel relaxed when I have art. Second, art is interesting. Art brings me so much pleasure. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao is a good teacher and she is friendly to all her students.
Art helps me a lot in many ways. For example, I do well in painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I win some painting prizes because of my ability in art. All in all, art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
基础版范文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. Why do I like this subject? There are three reasons. First, art is easy and relaxing. Second, art is interesting. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao is a good teacher and she is kind to everyone.
Art helps me a lot. I am good at painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I win some painting prizes. Art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
进阶版范文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. There are three reasons why I like this subject. First, art is easy and relaxing. I always feel relaxed when I have art. Second, art is interesting. Art brings me so much pleasure. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao is a good teacher and she is friendly to all her students.
Art helps me a lot in many ways. For example, I do well in painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I win some painting prizes because of my ability in art. All in all, art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
解析：
【分析】本题要求给笔友Tom写一封回信，介绍自己最喜欢的学科，需涵盖三个核心内容：点明最喜欢的学科、说明喜欢的原因、阐述该学科的帮助。解题思路：① 利用已给的书信开头和结尾，补充中间内容；② 选择易展开的学科（如艺术）；③ 围绕三个要点组织内容，原因可从学科特点、老师因素等入手，帮助可从个人能力提升、品格塑造等方面说明；④ 控制词数在70左右，避免真实信息，保证语言连贯。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 点明最喜欢的学科：直接说明“My favourite subject is art.”；2. 分点阐述喜欢的原因：从学科轻松有趣、老师友善等角度说明；3. 说明学科的帮助：提及绘画能力提升、获奖、塑造品格；4. 调整语言使内容连贯，符合书信语气，完成回信。
【答案】Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. Why do I like this subject? There are three reasons. First, art is easy and relaxing. Second, art is interesting. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao is a good teacher and she is kind to everyone.
Art helps me a lot. I am good at painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I win some painting prizes. Art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】英语书信写作；个人喜好主题写作
【点评】本题为期末改编的书信写作题，要求明确，涵盖所有题目要点，范文结构完整，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，适合学生练习书信写作的基本格式与要点组织。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】写作步骤：1. 点明最喜欢的学科：直接说明“My favourite subject is art.”；2. 分点阐述喜欢的原因：从学科轻松有趣、老师友善等角度说明；3. 说明学科的帮助：提及绘画能力提升、获奖、塑造品格；4. 调整语言使内容连贯，符合书信语气，完成回信。
【答案】Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I'm happy to tell you about my favourite subject.
My favourite subject is art. Why do I like this subject? There are three reasons. First, art is easy and relaxing. Second, art is interesting. Third, my art teacher, Ms Zhao is a good teacher and she is kind to everyone.
Art helps me a lot. I am good at painting with the help of Ms Zhao. I win some painting prizes. Art helps me become a better person.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】英语书信写作；个人喜好主题写作
【点评】本题为期末改编的书信写作题，要求明确，涵盖所有题目要点，范文结构完整，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，适合学生练习书信写作的基本格式与要点组织。
【难度系数】0.3