第5课时 主题写作专项 练写作 答案D21
主题词网
优选词汇
科目
· Chinese
· art
· math/maths
· physics
· English
· chemistry
· history
· biology
· IT
· PE
感受
· boring
· interesting
· useful
· important
· difficult
· easy
· exciting
· favourite
· fun
· special
· hard
· relaxing
学校生活
· this term
· in class
· school life
· favourite subject
· go to class
· have classes
· have lessons
· school subject
写作实例
审时态:一般现在时 审主题 审人称:以第一人称为主
假如你是李婷，今天你收到了你的英国朋友Edward给你写的一封电子邮件。他在邮件中向你询问你今年在学校的学习情况，请根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信。
要点提示:1.简要介绍你周一到周五的上课情况，包括每天上几节课等；
2.介绍你最喜欢的学科，并解释最喜欢它的原因。
写作要求:1.必须包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数70左右。 审词数
教材原文
P48▶ I’m very busy this year.
P45▶ I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths.
P47▶ I like Chinese because it’s fun.
优秀范文
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.①
I’m very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but② my favourite is maths.③ I like it because② I think it is easy and interesting③. I also like Chinese because it’s fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
亮点评析
①以祈使句的结构引起下文。
②but 和 because体现了本单元的核心语法,本文将核心语法自然地融入书面表达中。
③并列句、原因状语从句和宾语从句的使用使全文句式丰富。
主题词网
优选词汇
科目
· Chinese
· art
· math/maths
· physics
· English
· chemistry
· history
· biology
· IT
· PE
感受
· boring
· interesting
· useful
· important
· difficult
· easy
· exciting
· favourite
· fun
· special
· hard
· relaxing
学校生活
· this term
· in class
· school life
· favourite subject
· go to class
· have classes
· have lessons
· school subject
写作实例
审时态:一般现在时 审主题 审人称:以第一人称为主
假如你是李婷，今天你收到了你的英国朋友Edward给你写的一封电子邮件。他在邮件中向你询问你今年在学校的学习情况，请根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信。
要点提示:1.简要介绍你周一到周五的上课情况，包括每天上几节课等；
2.介绍你最喜欢的学科，并解释最喜欢它的原因。
写作要求:1.必须包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数70左右。 审词数
教材原文
P48▶ I’m very busy this year.
P45▶ I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths.
P47▶ I like Chinese because it’s fun.
优秀范文
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.①
I’m very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but② my favourite is maths.③ I like it because② I think it is easy and interesting③. I also like Chinese because it’s fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
亮点评析
①以祈使句的结构引起下文。
②but 和 because体现了本单元的核心语法,本文将核心语法自然地融入书面表达中。
③并列句、原因状语从句和宾语从句的使用使全文句式丰富。
答案：1. 简要介绍你周一到周五的上课情况，包括每天上几节课等；
2. 介绍你最喜欢的学科，并解释最喜欢它的原因。
优秀范文
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.①
I’m very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but② my favourite is maths.③ I like it because② I think it is easy and interesting③. I also like Chinese because it’s fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
亮点评析
①以祈使句的结构引起下文。
②but 和 because体现了本单元的核心语法,本文将核心语法自然地融入书面表达中。
③并列句、原因状语从句和宾语从句的使用使全文句式丰富。
2. 介绍你最喜欢的学科，并解释最喜欢它的原因。
优秀范文
Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.①
I’m very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but② my favourite is maths.③ I like it because② I think it is easy and interesting③. I also like Chinese because it’s fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
亮点评析
①以祈使句的结构引起下文。
②but 和 because体现了本单元的核心语法,本文将核心语法自然地融入书面表达中。
③并列句、原因状语从句和宾语从句的使用使全文句式丰富。
解析：
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以李婷的身份给英国朋友Edward写回信，介绍自己的学校学习情况，时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。写作结构分为三部分：开头感谢来信并引出学校生活；中间先介绍周一到周五的上课时间、课时数量，再说明最喜欢的学科及原因；结尾询问对方的学校生活。需紧扣要点，适当发挥，词数控制在70左右。
【解析】1. 开头：用“Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.”引出主题，符合书信开头要求；2. 中间第一部分：说明上学时间为周一到周五，上午4节课、下午2节课，体现忙碌的状态，满足上课情况的要点；3. 中间第二部分：说明所有学科都喜欢，但最喜欢数学，原因是简单有趣，还补充喜欢语文的原因，丰富内容，符合最喜欢的学科及原因的要点；4. 结尾：用“Can you tell me about your school life?”自然结束，符合书信格式。
【答案】Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I’m very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths. I like it because I think it is easy and interesting. I also like Chinese because it’s fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
【知识点】英语书信写作；一般现在时；原因状语从句
【点评】本文紧扣题目要点，结构清晰，句式丰富，自然融入核心语法，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开头：用“Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.”引出主题，符合书信开头要求；2. 中间第一部分：说明上学时间为周一到周五，上午4节课、下午2节课，体现忙碌的状态，满足上课情况的要点；3. 中间第二部分：说明所有学科都喜欢，但最喜欢数学，原因是简单有趣，还补充喜欢语文的原因，丰富内容，符合最喜欢的学科及原因的要点；4. 结尾：用“Can you tell me about your school life?”自然结束，符合书信格式。
【答案】Dear Edward,
Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you something about my school life.
I’m very busy this year. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
I have a lot of subjects. I like all the subjects, but my favourite is maths. I like it because I think it is easy and interesting. I also like Chinese because it’s fun.
Can you tell me about your school life?
Yours,
Li Ting
【知识点】英语书信写作；一般现在时；原因状语从句
【点评】本文紧扣题目要点，结构清晰，句式丰富，自然融入核心语法，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】0.6