第5课时 主题写作专项 练写作 答案D25
主题词网
优选词汇
类型 介绍社团
art club science club drama club music club chess club
ping-pong club dance club cooking club book club nature club
活动
play Chinese chess act out play the drums play musical instruments
play the guitar play the violin climb trees talk about books
read books take photos discover wildlife collect plants and insects
写作实例
审时态:一般现在时 审主题
假设你们学校的社团现在正在开展招募新成员的工作。你是烹饪社团(Cooking Club)的负责人,请根据以下提示内容,用英语写一则招新广告,呼吁喜欢烹饪的学生加入你们的社团。
要点提示:1.介绍社团的基本信息;
2.列举加入社团的一些基本条件;
3.告知联系方式。
写作要求:1.必须包含上述信息,可适当发挥想象,增加细节信息;
2.词数70左右。 审词数
写作支架

写作文时,要尽量让文章的开头有吸引力。比如,描述爱好时,不要总是以“My hobby is...”开头,可以使用疑问句开头,以吸引读者兴趣。如:Do you want to know about my hobby?
教材原文 优秀范文
初中英语 七年级上册 人教版
P56 Do you love Chinese food?
P56 Can you cook?
P56 Join us in Room 303 at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays.
The Cooking Club Wants You!
The cooking club is very popular in our school. There are 20 members in the club now. Now we need some new members.①
Do you love Chinese food? Can you cook? ② Do you want to learn to cook Chinese food? If your answers are “yes” ③, please join our club. Join us in Room 303 at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays.
If you want to know more information ③, please call Nancy at 456-8854.
①
② 语法 作
③ 的 色
亮点评析
①点明写作目的。
②将本单元的语法(情态动词的用法)自然地融入写作中。
③条件状语从句的使用为本文增色不少。
主题词网
优选词汇
类型 介绍社团
art club science club drama club music club chess club
ping-pong club dance club cooking club book club nature club
活动
play Chinese chess act out play the drums play musical instruments
play the guitar play the violin climb trees talk about books
read books take photos discover wildlife collect plants and insects
写作实例
审时态:一般现在时 审主题
假设你们学校的社团现在正在开展招募新成员的工作。你是烹饪社团(Cooking Club)的负责人,请根据以下提示内容,用英语写一则招新广告,呼吁喜欢烹饪的学生加入你们的社团。
要点提示:1.介绍社团的基本信息;
2.列举加入社团的一些基本条件;
3.告知联系方式。
写作要求:1.必须包含上述信息,可适当发挥想象,增加细节信息;
2.词数70左右。 审词数
写作支架
写作文时,要尽量让文章的开头有吸引力。比如,描述爱好时,不要总是以“My hobby is...”开头,可以使用疑问句开头,以吸引读者兴趣。如:Do you want to know about my hobby?
教材原文 优秀范文
初中英语 七年级上册 人教版
P56 Do you love Chinese food?
P56 Can you cook?
P56 Join us in Room 303 at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays.
The Cooking Club Wants You!
The cooking club is very popular in our school. There are 20 members in the club now. Now we need some new members.①
Do you love Chinese food? Can you cook? ② Do you want to learn to cook Chinese food? If your answers are “yes” ③, please join our club. Join us in Room 303 at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays.
If you want to know more information ③, please call Nancy at 456-8854.
①
② 语法 作
③ 的 色
亮点评析
①点明写作目的。
②将本单元的语法(情态动词的用法)自然地融入写作中。
③条件状语从句的使用为本文增色不少。
答案:The Cooking Club Wants You!
The cooking club is very popular in our school. There are 20 members in the club now. Now we need some new members.
Do you love Chinese food? Can you cook? Do you want to learn to cook Chinese food? If your answers are "yes", please join our club. Join us in Room 303 at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays.
If you want to know more information, please call Nancy at 456-8854.
The cooking club is very popular in our school. There are 20 members in the club now. Now we need some new members.
Do you love Chinese food? Can you cook? Do you want to learn to cook Chinese food? If your answers are "yes", please join our club. Join us in Room 303 at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays.
If you want to know more information, please call Nancy at 456-8854.
解析:
【分析】首先明确写作主题为烹饪社团招新广告,需按要求分为三个部分:开头介绍社团基本信息(含社团受欢迎程度、现有成员数、招新需求),中间列举加入条件(通过疑问句吸引目标人群,结合条件状语从句),结尾告知联系方式。需使用一般现在时,运用高分句式(疑问句、条件状语从句),词数控制在70左右,确保涵盖所有要点并适当补充细节。
【解析】第一步,确定标题为“The Cooking Club Wants You!”;第二步,开头介绍社团基本信息:说明烹饪社团在学校很受欢迎,现有20名成员,需要招募新成员;第三步,中间用三个疑问句明确加入条件:是否喜欢中餐、是否会做饭、是否想学做中餐,若答案为“是”则加入,同时补充活动时间地点;第四步,结尾告知联系方式:联系Nancy,电话为456-8854。
【答案】The Cooking Club Wants You!
The cooking club is very popular in our school. There are 20 members in the club now. Now we need some new members.
Do you love Chinese food? Can you cook? Do you want to learn to cook Chinese food? If your answers are "yes", please join our club. Join us in Room 303 at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays.
If you want to know more information, please call Nancy at 456-8854.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,一般现在时,条件状语从句
【点评】本文结构清晰,涵盖招新广告的全部要点,运用疑问句吸引读者,条件状语从句提升句式多样性,符合七年级英语写作要求,语言简洁流畅。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】第一步,确定标题为“The Cooking Club Wants You!”;第二步,开头介绍社团基本信息:说明烹饪社团在学校很受欢迎,现有20名成员,需要招募新成员;第三步,中间用三个疑问句明确加入条件:是否喜欢中餐、是否会做饭、是否想学做中餐,若答案为“是”则加入,同时补充活动时间地点;第四步,结尾告知联系方式:联系Nancy,电话为456-8854。
【答案】The Cooking Club Wants You!
The cooking club is very popular in our school. There are 20 members in the club now. Now we need some new members.
Do you love Chinese food? Can you cook? Do you want to learn to cook Chinese food? If your answers are "yes", please join our club. Join us in Room 303 at 4:30 p.m. on Wednesdays.
If you want to know more information, please call Nancy at 456-8854.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,一般现在时,条件状语从句
【点评】本文结构清晰,涵盖招新广告的全部要点,运用疑问句吸引读者,条件状语从句提升句式多样性,符合七年级英语写作要求,语言简洁流畅。
【难度系数】0.6