初中英语 八年级上册 人教版
主题写作专项 练写作 答案D8
主题词网
优选词汇
动作 · decorate · cover · paint · stick · add…to… · pack up · hang up
物品 · poster · curtain · rug · scissors · glue · photo frame · fairy light
区域 · apartment · bedroom · balcony · bathroom · kitchen · dining room · living room
风格 · bright · comfortable · colorful · warm · modern · tidy · traditional
写作实例
→审人称:以第一人称为主
一个舒适、美观的居住环境能给自己和家人带来愉悦的心情。假如你是李明,想邀请你的好朋友迈克来帮忙装饰房间。请你根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。
→审时态:以一般现在时为主
要点提示:说明写信的目的,即邀请朋友帮忙装饰房间;列举出需要朋友帮忙的具体事项,如购买鲜花、制作海报等;表达你对朋友帮忙的期待。 →审主题
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥,使邮件内容丰富、合理;
2.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 →审词数
Dear Mike,
How are you? I’m writing to ask for your help with something really important to me.
Best regards,
Li Ming
写作支架
优秀范文
Dear Mike, How are you? I'm writing to ask for your help with something really important to me. I want to decorate my room to make it more comfortable and more beautiful①. Could you please help me with a few things?
First②, I’d like you to buy some fresh flowers. They can add a touch of nature to③ the room. Also②, we can make a poster together and hang it up③ in my room. It will be creative and fun. What’s more②, we’ll need to go shopping for some materials. Don’t forget to③ bring a pair of scissors, some glue, and a brush, and if you have any paper-cuts or a painting that you think would look nice, please bring them along③, too.
I’d really appreciate your help.④ If⑤ you’re available this weekend, let me know. I’m sure we’ll have a great time and make my room look amazing. Thanks a lot!
Best regards, Li Ming
亮点评析
①用不定式及“make +it(形式宾语)+宾补”结构点明装饰房间的目的；
②用衔接词First、Also及What’s more有条理地说明需要帮忙的具体事项；
③信件主体部分灵活运用动词短语add…to、hang…up、Don’t forget to…及bring…along等，体现作者丰富的语言功底；
④用固定句式“I’d really appreciate…”表达感谢；
⑤用if条件句委婉提出请求，确定具体时间。
主题写作专项 练写作 答案D8
主题词网
优选词汇
动作 · decorate · cover · paint · stick · add…to… · pack up · hang up
物品 · poster · curtain · rug · scissors · glue · photo frame · fairy light
区域 · apartment · bedroom · balcony · bathroom · kitchen · dining room · living room
风格 · bright · comfortable · colorful · warm · modern · tidy · traditional
写作实例
→审人称:以第一人称为主
一个舒适、美观的居住环境能给自己和家人带来愉悦的心情。假如你是李明,想邀请你的好朋友迈克来帮忙装饰房间。请你根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。
→审时态:以一般现在时为主
要点提示:说明写信的目的,即邀请朋友帮忙装饰房间;列举出需要朋友帮忙的具体事项,如购买鲜花、制作海报等;表达你对朋友帮忙的期待。 →审主题
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥,使邮件内容丰富、合理;
2.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。 →审词数
Dear Mike,
How are you? I’m writing to ask for your help with something really important to me.
Best regards,
Li Ming
写作支架
优秀范文
Dear Mike, How are you? I'm writing to ask for your help with something really important to me. I want to decorate my room to make it more comfortable and more beautiful①. Could you please help me with a few things?
First②, I’d like you to buy some fresh flowers. They can add a touch of nature to③ the room. Also②, we can make a poster together and hang it up③ in my room. It will be creative and fun. What’s more②, we’ll need to go shopping for some materials. Don’t forget to③ bring a pair of scissors, some glue, and a brush, and if you have any paper-cuts or a painting that you think would look nice, please bring them along③, too.
I’d really appreciate your help.④ If⑤ you’re available this weekend, let me know. I’m sure we’ll have a great time and make my room look amazing. Thanks a lot!
Best regards, Li Ming
亮点评析
①用不定式及“make +it(形式宾语)+宾补”结构点明装饰房间的目的；
②用衔接词First、Also及What’s more有条理地说明需要帮忙的具体事项；
③信件主体部分灵活运用动词短语add…to、hang…up、Don’t forget to…及bring…along等，体现作者丰富的语言功底；
④用固定句式“I’d really appreciate…”表达感谢；
⑤用if条件句委婉提出请求，确定具体时间。
答案：I want to decorate my room to make it more comfortable and more beautiful. Could you please help me with a few things?
First, I’d like you to buy some fresh flowers. They can add a touch of nature to the room. Also, we can make a poster together and hang it up in my room. It will be creative and fun. What’s more, we’ll need to go shopping for some materials. Don’t forget to bring a pair of scissors, some glue, and a brush, and if you have any paper-cuts or a painting that you think would look nice, please bring them along, too.
I’d really appreciate your help. If you’re available this weekend, let me know. I’m sure we’ll have a great time and make my room look amazing. Thanks a lot!
First, I’d like you to buy some fresh flowers. They can add a touch of nature to the room. Also, we can make a poster together and hang it up in my room. It will be creative and fun. What’s more, we’ll need to go shopping for some materials. Don’t forget to bring a pair of scissors, some glue, and a brush, and if you have any paper-cuts or a painting that you think would look nice, please bring them along, too.
I’d really appreciate your help. If you’re available this weekend, let me know. I’m sure we’ll have a great time and make my room look amazing. Thanks a lot!
解析：
【分析】这是一封邀请朋友帮忙装饰房间的英文邮件，需遵循书信的开头、中间、结尾结构：开头点明写信目的（邀请帮忙装饰房间），中间分点说明具体帮忙事项（用First、Also、What’s more等衔接词），结尾表达感谢并确定时间。要使用给定的动作、物品、风格词汇，注意人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时），确保内容连贯，符合邮件格式。
【解析】首先，开头部分明确要装饰的对象（room）和目的（更舒适美观），请求帮忙；中间部分用First、Also、What’s more分点说明具体事项：买鲜花、制作海报、采购材料，还提醒携带工具和喜欢的装饰物品；结尾用固定句式表达感谢，确定时间（this weekend），表达期待。写作时运用给定动词短语（add…to…、hang up等），使语言丰富，结构清晰，满足词数要求。
【答案】I want to decorate my room to make it more comfortable and more beautiful. Could you please help me with a few things?
First, I’d like you to buy some fresh flowers. They can add a touch of nature to the room. Also, we can make a poster together and hang it up in my room. It will be creative and fun. What’s more, we’ll need to go shopping for some materials. Don’t forget to bring a pair of scissors, some glue, and a brush, and if you have any paper-cuts or a painting that you think would look nice, please bring them along, too.
I’d really appreciate your help. If you’re available this weekend, let me know. I’m sure we’ll have a great time and make my room look amazing. Thanks a lot!
【知识点】英文书信写作、邀请类邮件、动词短语运用
【点评】本文结构清晰，以“邀请帮忙—具体事项—感谢期待”为脉络，用衔接词使逻辑连贯；运用“make + it + 宾补”“I’d really appreciate…”等高分句式，语言丰富，符合八年级英语写作要求，内容贴合主题，细节具体。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先，开头部分明确要装饰的对象（room）和目的（更舒适美观），请求帮忙；中间部分用First、Also、What’s more分点说明具体事项：买鲜花、制作海报、采购材料，还提醒携带工具和喜欢的装饰物品；结尾用固定句式表达感谢，确定时间（this weekend），表达期待。写作时运用给定动词短语（add…to…、hang up等），使语言丰富，结构清晰，满足词数要求。
【答案】I want to decorate my room to make it more comfortable and more beautiful. Could you please help me with a few things?
First, I’d like you to buy some fresh flowers. They can add a touch of nature to the room. Also, we can make a poster together and hang it up in my room. It will be creative and fun. What’s more, we’ll need to go shopping for some materials. Don’t forget to bring a pair of scissors, some glue, and a brush, and if you have any paper-cuts or a painting that you think would look nice, please bring them along, too.
I’d really appreciate your help. If you’re available this weekend, let me know. I’m sure we’ll have a great time and make my room look amazing. Thanks a lot!
【知识点】英文书信写作、邀请类邮件、动词短语运用
【点评】本文结构清晰，以“邀请帮忙—具体事项—感谢期待”为脉络，用衔接词使逻辑连贯；运用“make + it + 宾补”“I’d really appreciate…”等高分句式，语言丰富，符合八年级英语写作要求，内容贴合主题，细节具体。
【难度系数】0.6