写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D8
「2026 河南安阳四中月考」
诗人说：“所谓的家，不是房子，而是爱的总和。”假如你是李华，下周六是你的生日，你想把家里布置得温馨一些并举办一场小型家庭聚会，可任务繁多，你需要朋友的帮助。请你给好友 Tom 写一封邮件，内容如下：
1.说明你布置家的原因和计划；2.描述目前家里的状况；3.列出需要他帮忙做的具体家务，如打扫客厅、制作手工装饰等；4.约定见面的时间和地点。
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；2.词数不少于90，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
Hi! How’s it going?
Yours，
Li Hua
「2026 河南安阳四中月考」
诗人说：“所谓的家，不是房子，而是爱的总和。”假如你是李华，下周六是你的生日，你想把家里布置得温馨一些并举办一场小型家庭聚会，可任务繁多，你需要朋友的帮助。请你给好友 Tom 写一封邮件，内容如下：
1.说明你布置家的原因和计划；2.描述目前家里的状况；3.列出需要他帮忙做的具体家务，如打扫客厅、制作手工装饰等；4.约定见面的时间和地点。
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；2.词数不少于90，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
Hi! How’s it going?
I'm writing to ask for your help with my birthday party next Saturday. I want to decorate my home because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.
Now, my house is a bit messy. The furniture needs rearranging, and there's no decoration yet.
Could you please help me with the following tasks? First, clean the living room and move the sofa. Second, make some paper flowers and buy balloons to decorate the walls.
Finally, help me set the dining table and prepare some snacks.
Let's meet at my home at 10 a. m. next Saturday. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours，
Li Hua
答案：主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Tom,
Hi! How's it going?
I'm writing to ask for your help with my birthday party next Saturday. I want to decorate my home because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.
Now, my house is a bit messy. The furniture needs rearranging, and there's no decoration yet.
Could you please help me with the following tasks? First, clean the living room and move the sofa. Second, make some paper flowers and buy balloons to decorate the walls. Finally, help me set the dining table and prepare some snacks.
Let's meet at my home at 10 a. m. next Saturday. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Tom,
Hi! How's it going?
I'm writing to ask for your help with my birthday party next Saturday. I want to decorate my home to make it warm and comfortable because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.
Right now, my house is a bit messy, especially the living room and dining area. The furniture needs rearranging, and there's no decoration yet.
Could you please help me with the following tasks? First, let's clean the living room together and move the sofa to the corner. Second, make some paper flowers by hand and buy balloons to decorate the walls. Finally, help me set the dining table and prepare some snacks.
Let's meet at my home at 10 a.m. next Saturday. I'd really appreciate your help!
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Tom,
Hi! How's it going?
I'm writing to ask for your help with my birthday party next Saturday. I want to decorate my home because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.
Now, my house is a bit messy. The furniture needs rearranging, and there's no decoration yet.
Could you please help me with the following tasks? First, clean the living room and move the sofa. Second, make some paper flowers and buy balloons to decorate the walls. Finally, help me set the dining table and prepare some snacks.
Let's meet at my home at 10 a. m. next Saturday. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Tom,
Hi! How's it going?
I'm writing to ask for your help with my birthday party next Saturday. I want to decorate my home to make it warm and comfortable because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.
Right now, my house is a bit messy, especially the living room and dining area. The furniture needs rearranging, and there's no decoration yet.
Could you please help me with the following tasks? First, let's clean the living room together and move the sofa to the corner. Second, make some paper flowers by hand and buy balloons to decorate the walls. Finally, help me set the dining table and prepare some snacks.
Let's meet at my home at 10 a.m. next Saturday. I'd really appreciate your help!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题，需按要求完成：首先明确文体是求助信，格式要符合英文书信规范；其次梳理写作要点：1. 说明布置家的原因（生日聚会，家是爱的总和）和计划；2. 描述家里当前杂乱、无装饰的状况；3. 列出具体帮忙任务（打扫客厅、制作手工装饰等）；4. 约定见面的时间和地点。最后组织语言，确保语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】
写作时先点明写信目的是求助生日聚会的家布置，接着说明布置原因是家是爱的总和，计划让家温馨；然后描述家里现状（杂乱、家具需整理、无装饰）；再列出具体帮忙任务（打扫客厅、做纸花买气球、摆餐桌备零食）；最后约定周六上午10点在自家见面，表达期待。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
Hi! How's it going?
I'm writing to ask for your help with my birthday party next Saturday. I want to decorate my home because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.
Now, my house is a bit messy. The furniture needs rearranging, and there's no decoration yet.
Could you please help me with the following tasks? First, clean the living room and move the sofa. Second, make some paper flowers and buy balloons to decorate the walls. Finally, help me set the dining table and prepare some snacks.
Let's meet at my home at 10 a. m. next Saturday. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、主题写作
【点评】
本题结合“家”的主题考查英语书信写作，要求涵盖所有给定要点，语言连贯通顺，既考查学生的英语表达能力，又引导学生理解家的内涵，是常见的写作实战题。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书信写作题，需按要求完成：首先明确文体是求助信，格式要符合英文书信规范；其次梳理写作要点：1. 说明布置家的原因（生日聚会，家是爱的总和）和计划；2. 描述家里当前杂乱、无装饰的状况；3. 列出具体帮忙任务（打扫客厅、制作手工装饰等）；4. 约定见面的时间和地点。最后组织语言，确保语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】
写作时先点明写信目的是求助生日聚会的家布置，接着说明布置原因是家是爱的总和，计划让家温馨；然后描述家里现状（杂乱、家具需整理、无装饰）；再列出具体帮忙任务（打扫客厅、做纸花买气球、摆餐桌备零食）；最后约定周六上午10点在自家见面，表达期待。
【答案】
Dear Tom,
Hi! How's it going?
I'm writing to ask for your help with my birthday party next Saturday. I want to decorate my home because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.
Now, my house is a bit messy. The furniture needs rearranging, and there's no decoration yet.
Could you please help me with the following tasks? First, clean the living room and move the sofa. Second, make some paper flowers and buy balloons to decorate the walls. Finally, help me set the dining table and prepare some snacks.
Let's meet at my home at 10 a. m. next Saturday. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、主题写作
【点评】
本题结合“家”的主题考查英语书信写作，要求涵盖所有给定要点，语言连贯通顺，既考查学生的英语表达能力，又引导学生理解家的内涵，是常见的写作实战题。
【难度系数】
0.5