「2026江苏南京二十九中月考」
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One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
注意:1.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入词数);2.须包含全部提示内容,可适当发挥。
One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Firstly, humans cut down forests and hunt animals, destroying habitats and even pushing some species to extinction. What’s worse, some people kill wild animals for their fur or bones to make money.
We need to protect wild animals because they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First, we can tell others about animal protection. Second, we should avoid buying products made from animals. Finally, we can plant trees to expand habitats to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
We need to protect wild animals because they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First, we can tell others about animal protection. Second, we should avoid buying products made from animals. Finally, we can plant trees to expand habitats to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
答案：One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Firstly¹, humans cut down forests² and hunt animals, destroying habitats² and even pushing some species to extinction². What’s worse¹, some people kill wild animals for their fur or bones to make money.
We need to protect wild animals because³ they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First¹, we can tell others about animal protection. Second¹, we should avoid buying products² made from animals. Finally¹, we can plant trees to expand habitats² to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together⁴ to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
亮点评析
① 用衔接词 Firstly、What’s worse、First、Second 及 Finally 有条不紊地点明野生动物所面临的问题及学生该做什么；
② 用 cut down forests、destroying habitats、pushing some species to extinction、avoid buying products、expand habitats 等动词短语点明人类的恶行和学生可以做的具体措施；
③用 because 引导原因状语从句点明保护野生动物的理由；
④用祈使句 Let’s do sth. 号召人们行动起来，积极保护野生动物。
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Firstly¹, humans cut down forests² and hunt animals, destroying habitats² and even pushing some species to extinction². What’s worse¹, some people kill wild animals for their fur or bones to make money.
We need to protect wild animals because³ they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First¹, we can tell others about animal protection. Second¹, we should avoid buying products² made from animals. Finally¹, we can plant trees to expand habitats² to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together⁴ to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
亮点评析
① 用衔接词 Firstly、What’s worse、First、Second 及 Finally 有条不紊地点明野生动物所面临的问题及学生该做什么；
② 用 cut down forests、destroying habitats、pushing some species to extinction、avoid buying products、expand habitats 等动词短语点明人类的恶行和学生可以做的具体措施；
③用 because 引导原因状语从句点明保护野生动物的理由；
④用祈使句 Let’s do sth. 号召人们行动起来，积极保护野生动物。
解析：
【分析】本题为英语话题作文，主题是“同一个地球，同一个家园”，要求围绕保护野生动物展开写作。解题思路：首先承接给定开头，先阐述野生动物因人类活动面临的问题；接着说明保护野生动物的原因；再提出学生可采取的具体保护措施；最后发出号召升华主题。写作时需运用衔接词梳理逻辑，确保词数达标、内容完整。
【解析】首先承接开头，用衔接词Firstly、What’s worse点明野生动物面临的问题：人类砍伐森林、猎杀动物，破坏栖息地甚至导致物种灭绝，部分人还为牟利猎杀动物获取皮毛或骨骼；然后用because引导原因状语从句说明保护野生动物的原因——它们在地球生态系统中发挥重要作用；接着用First、Second、Finally列举学生的具体做法：宣传保护知识、不买动物制品、植树扩大栖息地；最后用祈使句Let’s take action发出号召，升华主题。
【答案】One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Firstly, humans cut down forests and hunt animals, destroying habitats and even pushing some species to extinction. What’s worse, some people kill wild animals for their fur or bones to make money.
We need to protect wild animals because they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First, we can tell others about animal protection. Second, we should avoid buying products made from animals. Finally, we can plant trees to expand habitats to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
【知识点】英语话题写作、衔接词运用、环保主题表达
【点评】本文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，通过丰富的衔接词使文章条理分明，准确运用动词短语描述人类恶行与保护措施，原因状语从句和祈使句的运用增强了表达效果，符合题目对词数和内容的要求，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头，用衔接词Firstly、What’s worse点明野生动物面临的问题：人类砍伐森林、猎杀动物，破坏栖息地甚至导致物种灭绝，部分人还为牟利猎杀动物获取皮毛或骨骼；然后用because引导原因状语从句说明保护野生动物的原因——它们在地球生态系统中发挥重要作用；接着用First、Second、Finally列举学生的具体做法：宣传保护知识、不买动物制品、植树扩大栖息地；最后用祈使句Let’s take action发出号召，升华主题。
【答案】One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Firstly, humans cut down forests and hunt animals, destroying habitats and even pushing some species to extinction. What’s worse, some people kill wild animals for their fur or bones to make money.
We need to protect wild animals because they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First, we can tell others about animal protection. Second, we should avoid buying products made from animals. Finally, we can plant trees to expand habitats to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
【知识点】英语话题写作、衔接词运用、环保主题表达
【点评】本文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，通过丰富的衔接词使文章条理分明，准确运用动词短语描述人类恶行与保护措施，原因状语从句和祈使句的运用增强了表达效果，符合题目对词数和内容的要求，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】0.5