主题写作专项 练写作 答案D27 拍照批改
主题词网
未来生活
角度 · traffic · transport system · education · industry · medical service · outer space
变化 · take over · replace · disappear · shall · pass · run low on sth.
看法 · different from · influence · develop · depend on · make sure · meet one’s needs
感受 · quite worse · positive · challenging · creative · impossible · valuable
写作实例
审主题
近期,某英文报开辟了“畅想未来”的专栏。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图提示,以“Life in the Future”为题,写一篇说明文向该专栏投稿,从不同角度畅谈你对未来生活的展望。
审时态:以一般将来时为主 审人称:第一、三人称
要求:1.内容包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;3.词数不少于80。
审词数
Life in the Future
写作支架
开头 — 第一段:开门见山,引出话题
中间 — 第二段:从不同的方面介绍自己对未来的一些预测
结尾 — 第三段:归纳总结,表达看法
I think life in the future will it is today. (高分句式1) Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be , but will be so that there will be . (高分句式2)
Besides, it’s possible for people to on the sea or in outer space. (高分句式3)
As for education, robots will and students just need to . And more kids will , because .
What’s more, there are and we’ll have better .
We never know what will happen in the future. (高分句式4) But it depends on to .
优秀范文
Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all¹, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that² there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides¹, it’s possible for people to build² houses on the sea or in outer space. As for¹ education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more¹, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make³ it better.
亮点评析
①用First of all、Besides、As for和What’s more使文章的逻辑清晰,有条理;
②用so that引导的状语从句及it’s+adj.+for sb. to do sth.结构预测了将来可能发生的事情;
③用it depends on...to do sth.号召人们为了将来的美好生活而努力。
主题词网
未来生活
角度 · traffic · transport system · education · industry · medical service · outer space
变化 · take over · replace · disappear · shall · pass · run low on sth.
看法 · different from · influence · develop · depend on · make sure · meet one’s needs
感受 · quite worse · positive · challenging · creative · impossible · valuable
写作实例
审主题
近期,某英文报开辟了“畅想未来”的专栏。假如你是李华,请根据以下思维导图提示,以“Life in the Future”为题,写一篇说明文向该专栏投稿,从不同角度畅谈你对未来生活的展望。
审时态:以一般将来时为主 审人称:第一、三人称
要求:1.内容包含以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;3.词数不少于80。
审词数
Life in the Future
写作支架
开头 — 第一段:开门见山,引出话题
中间 — 第二段:从不同的方面介绍自己对未来的一些预测
结尾 — 第三段:归纳总结,表达看法
I think life in the future will it is today. (高分句式1) Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be , but will be so that there will be . (高分句式2)
Besides, it’s possible for people to on the sea or in outer space. (高分句式3)
As for education, robots will and students just need to . And more kids will , because .
What’s more, there are and we’ll have better .
We never know what will happen in the future. (高分句式4) But it depends on to .
优秀范文
Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all¹, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that² there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides¹, it’s possible for people to build² houses on the sea or in outer space. As for¹ education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more¹, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make³ it better.
亮点评析
①用First of all、Besides、As for和What’s more使文章的逻辑清晰,有条理;
②用so that引导的状语从句及it’s+adj.+for sb. to do sth.结构预测了将来可能发生的事情;
③用it depends on...to do sth.号召人们为了将来的美好生活而努力。
答案： 写作支架填空答案
1. be quite different from
2. more people in the cities
3. the transport system
4. more efficient
5. fewer traffic accidents
6. build houses
7. replace teachers
8. study on computers
9. do sport at home with AI
10. there's a smart AI system in every house
11. service robots to do housework for people
12. health care technology
13. us
14. make it better
完整优秀范文
# Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides, it’s possible for people to build houses on the sea or in outer space. As for education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make it better.
1. be quite different from
2. more people in the cities
3. the transport system
4. more efficient
5. fewer traffic accidents
6. build houses
7. replace teachers
8. study on computers
9. do sport at home with AI
10. there's a smart AI system in every house
11. service robots to do housework for people
12. health care technology
13. us
14. make it better
完整优秀范文
# Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides, it’s possible for people to build houses on the sea or in outer space. As for education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make it better.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题，要求以李华的身份为英文报“畅想未来”专栏投稿，题目为《Life in the Future》。解题思路如下：1. 审题：确定时态以一般将来时为主，人称用第一、第三人称，需涵盖给定的所有提示信息（角度类：交通、运输系统、教育、工业、医疗、外太空；变化类：take over、replace等；看法类、感受类），词数不少于80；2. 结构搭建：按写作支架分为三段，开头引出话题，中间分角度阐述未来预测，结尾总结表达看法；3. 内容填充：用逻辑连接词串联各角度，确保每个提示点都被覆盖，同时运用高分句式提升写作质量。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：明确主题为“未来生活”，时态以一般将来时为主，人称灵活使用，需包含所有给定的思维导图提示内容；
2. 结构布局：
开头段：用高分句式引出未来与现在不同的话题，符合写作支架要求；
中间段：用First of all、Besides等连接词分角度展开：①交通运输：运输系统更高效减少事故；②居住：可在海上或外太空建房；③教育：机器人代替老师，学生通过电脑学习，AI辅助运动；④医疗：服务机器人做家务，医疗技术更先进；
结尾段：用高分句式总结，呼应看法类提示；
3. 支架填空：根据范文内容对应填写，确保与范文一致，完整覆盖所有提示信息。
【答案】
写作支架填空答案：
1. be quite different from
2. more people in the cities
3. the transport system
4. more efficient
5. fewer traffic accidents
6. build houses
7. replace teachers
8. study on computers
9. do sport at home with AI
10. there’s a smart AI system in every house
11. service robots to do housework for people
12. health care technology
13. us
14. make it better
完整优秀范文：
# Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides, it’s possible for people to build houses on the sea or in outer space. As for education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make it better.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般将来时运用、主题式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“未来生活”主题，结构清晰，用逻辑连接词使内容连贯；涵盖所有给定提示信息，时态正确，运用了so that、it’s + adj. + for sb. to do sth.等高分句式，语言通顺，符合专栏投稿要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语主题写作题，要求以李华的身份为英文报“畅想未来”专栏投稿，题目为《Life in the Future》。解题思路如下：1. 审题：确定时态以一般将来时为主，人称用第一、第三人称，需涵盖给定的所有提示信息（角度类：交通、运输系统、教育、工业、医疗、外太空；变化类：take over、replace等；看法类、感受类），词数不少于80；2. 结构搭建：按写作支架分为三段，开头引出话题，中间分角度阐述未来预测，结尾总结表达看法；3. 内容填充：用逻辑连接词串联各角度，确保每个提示点都被覆盖，同时运用高分句式提升写作质量。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：明确主题为“未来生活”，时态以一般将来时为主，人称灵活使用，需包含所有给定的思维导图提示内容；
2. 结构布局：
开头段：用高分句式引出未来与现在不同的话题，符合写作支架要求；
中间段：用First of all、Besides等连接词分角度展开：①交通运输：运输系统更高效减少事故；②居住：可在海上或外太空建房；③教育：机器人代替老师，学生通过电脑学习，AI辅助运动；④医疗：服务机器人做家务，医疗技术更先进；
结尾段：用高分句式总结，呼应看法类提示；
3. 支架填空：根据范文内容对应填写，确保与范文一致，完整覆盖所有提示信息。
【答案】
写作支架填空答案：
1. be quite different from
2. more people in the cities
3. the transport system
4. more efficient
5. fewer traffic accidents
6. build houses
7. replace teachers
8. study on computers
9. do sport at home with AI
10. there’s a smart AI system in every house
11. service robots to do housework for people
12. health care technology
13. us
14. make it better
完整优秀范文：
# Life in the Future
I think life in the future will be quite different from it is today. Here are some predictions.
First of all, there will be more people in the cities, but the transport system will be more efficient so that there will be fewer traffic accidents. Besides, it’s possible for people to build houses on the sea or in outer space. As for education, robots will replace teachers and students just need to study on computers. And more kids will do sport at home with AI, because there’s a smart AI system in every house. What’s more, there are service robots to do housework for people and we’ll have better health care technology. Machines can meet our needs for medical and health care.
We never know what will happen in the future. But it depends on us to make it better.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般将来时运用、主题式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“未来生活”主题，结构清晰，用逻辑连接词使内容连贯；涵盖所有给定提示信息，时态正确，运用了so that、it’s + adj. + for sb. to do sth.等高分句式，语言通顺，符合专栏投稿要求，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6