经典例题
学校正举办主题为“My pocket money”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的要点写一篇短文谈谈中学生如何使用自己的零花钱。
【要点】1. 中学生是否应该有零花钱？
2. 你平时是如何使用零花钱的？
3. 怎样更好地管理你自己的零花钱？
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括要点中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 词数80左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
学校正举办主题为“My pocket money”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的要点写一篇短文谈谈中学生如何使用自己的零花钱。
【要点】1. 中学生是否应该有零花钱？
2. 你平时是如何使用零花钱的？
3. 怎样更好地管理你自己的零花钱？
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括要点中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 词数80左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
答案：My pocket money
I think middle school students should have pocket money, and it can help us form a good view of money.
I usually spend my pocket money on stationery and useful story books. Sometimes I buy tasty snacks for myself, and I also take out a little money to help students in poor areas.
To manage my pocket money better, I will make a clear spending plan every month, and save part of my money instead of buying all kinds of useless things. I will never waste money.
I think middle school students should have pocket money, and it can help us form a good view of money.
I usually spend my pocket money on stationery and useful story books. Sometimes I buy tasty snacks for myself, and I also take out a little money to help students in poor areas.
To manage my pocket money better, I will make a clear spending plan every month, and save part of my money instead of buying all kinds of useless things. I will never waste money.
解析：
【分析】这是一篇英语征文，主题为“My pocket money”，需覆盖三个核心要点：1. 明确中学生是否应拥有零花钱并说明理由；2. 阐述自身使用零花钱的具体方式；3. 提出更好管理零花钱的方法。写作时需注意表达连贯、语法正确，词数控制在80左右，适当发挥且不偏离要点。
【解析】首先开篇表明观点：中学生应该有零花钱，因为它能帮助我们形成良好的金钱观；接着说明自身使用零花钱的情况：通常花在文具和有用的故事书上，偶尔买美味的零食，还会拿出一点钱帮助贫困地区的学生；最后提出管理方法：制定清晰的月度消费计划，储蓄部分钱，不买各种无用的东西，绝不浪费钱。
【答案】My pocket money
I think middle school students should have pocket money, and it can help us form a good view of money.
I usually spend my pocket money on stationery and useful story books. Sometimes I buy tasty snacks for myself, and I also take out a little money to help students in poor areas.
To manage my pocket money better, I will make a clear spending plan every month, and save part of my money instead of buying all kinds of useless things. I will never waste money.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；要点整合写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，结构清晰，语言通顺自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先开篇表明观点：中学生应该有零花钱，因为它能帮助我们形成良好的金钱观；接着说明自身使用零花钱的情况：通常花在文具和有用的故事书上，偶尔买美味的零食，还会拿出一点钱帮助贫困地区的学生；最后提出管理方法：制定清晰的月度消费计划，储蓄部分钱，不买各种无用的东西，绝不浪费钱。
【答案】My pocket money
I think middle school students should have pocket money, and it can help us form a good view of money.
I usually spend my pocket money on stationery and useful story books. Sometimes I buy tasty snacks for myself, and I also take out a little money to help students in poor areas.
To manage my pocket money better, I will make a clear spending plan every month, and save part of my money instead of buying all kinds of useless things. I will never waste money.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；要点整合写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，结构清晰，语言通顺自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】0.6
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇话题作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 我通常把零花钱花费在零食上。
2. 充分地使用钱确实是重要的。
3. 假如人们需要我的帮助，我将尽力向他们伸出援助之手。
高分范文
I think students should have some pocket money because sometimes we need to buy some necessities and develop the skill in managing money as well.
I usually spend my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost much money. Besides, I often buy my favourite things such as books and CDs.
In my opinion, it is really important to make good use of the money. Above all, making plans is a good idea. In this way, I can think about if I spend the money properly. Secondly, it's necessary to save some money. You don't know when you need money.
If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.
实战演练
假如在英语课上，老师请你们就“Lucky Money(压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论，但你认为同学们对“Hobbies(爱好)”更感兴趣，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的要点和要求，写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你的理由。
【要点】1. Why do you like talking about hobbies?
2. What's your reason for not talking about lucky money?
【要求】1. 发言稿须包括所有要点内容，可适当发挥。
2. 发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 词数：60—80。
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is
1. 本文是一篇话题作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
遣词造句
1. 我通常把零花钱花费在零食上。
2. 充分地使用钱确实是重要的。
3. 假如人们需要我的帮助，我将尽力向他们伸出援助之手。
高分范文
I think students should have some pocket money because sometimes we need to buy some necessities and develop the skill in managing money as well.
I usually spend my pocket money on snacks. School things also cost much money. Besides, I often buy my favourite things such as books and CDs.
In my opinion, it is really important to make good use of the money. Above all, making plans is a good idea. In this way, I can think about if I spend the money properly. Secondly, it's necessary to save some money. You don't know when you need money.
If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.
实战演练
假如在英语课上，老师请你们就“Lucky Money(压岁钱)”这个话题分组进行讨论，但你认为同学们对“Hobbies(爱好)”更感兴趣，建议老师更换话题。请你根据下面的要点和要求，写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你的理由。
【要点】1. Why do you like talking about hobbies?
2. What's your reason for not talking about lucky money?
【要求】1. 发言稿须包括所有要点内容，可适当发挥。
2. 发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 词数：60—80。
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is
easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal.
What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
答案：[遣词造句]
1. I usually spend my pocket money on snacks.
2. It is really important to make good use of the money.
3. If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.
实战演练
One possible version
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
1. I usually spend my pocket money on snacks.
2. It is really important to make good use of the money.
3. If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.
实战演练
One possible version
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语发言稿写作题，要求将讨论话题从“压岁钱”更换为“爱好”，需包含两个核心要点：一是喜欢聊爱好的原因，二是不适合聊压岁钱的原因。解题思路为：1. 承接已给开头，阐述聊爱好的优势（简单有趣、人人有爱好可分享、带来快乐放松）；2. 说明聊压岁钱的弊端（太私人、并非所有人都有、易让部分人不适）；3. 总结观点，确保符合词数、时态（一般现在时）及无真实信息的要求。
【解析】
步骤1：承接开头句，说明聊爱好的好处：It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
步骤2：阐述不适合聊压岁钱的原因：Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
步骤3：总结观点：So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
全程使用一般现在时，涵盖所有要点，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题理由阐述
【点评】
本文符合发言稿格式，涵盖所有写作要点，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，准确表达了更换话题的理由，适合初中英语写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语发言稿写作题，要求将讨论话题从“压岁钱”更换为“爱好”，需包含两个核心要点：一是喜欢聊爱好的原因，二是不适合聊压岁钱的原因。解题思路为：1. 承接已给开头，阐述聊爱好的优势（简单有趣、人人有爱好可分享、带来快乐放松）；2. 说明聊压岁钱的弊端（太私人、并非所有人都有、易让部分人不适）；3. 总结观点，确保符合词数、时态（一般现在时）及无真实信息的要求。
【解析】
步骤1：承接开头句，说明聊爱好的好处：It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
步骤2：阐述不适合聊压岁钱的原因：Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
步骤3：总结观点：So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
全程使用一般现在时，涵盖所有要点，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his or her own hobbies, like playing ball games, listening to music and drawing. Hobbies can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about our hobbies.
Lucky money, however, isn't a proper topic for us, because it's too personal. What's more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.
So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题理由阐述
【点评】
本文符合发言稿格式，涵盖所有写作要点，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，准确表达了更换话题的理由，适合初中英语写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.3