六、书面表达
为丰富学生的校园生活,阳光中学开设了丰富多彩的社团活动。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的要求,写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。
Club
SWIMMING
4:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m. Tuesday
4:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m.
4:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m. Thursday
4:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m. Friday
Please let others know:
Which club would you like to join? Why do you want to join this club? What do you want to get from the club?
Dear all,
I would like to join
Thanks for listening!
为丰富学生的校园生活,阳光中学开设了丰富多彩的社团活动。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的要求,写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。
Club
SWIMMING
4:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m. Tuesday
4:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m.
4:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m. Thursday
4:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m. Friday
Please let others know:
Which club would you like to join? Why do you want to join this club? What do you want to get from the club?
Dear all,
I would like to join
Thanks for listening!
答案：One possible version:
Dear all,
I would like to join the Music Club. I like listening to all kinds of music. When I am sad, music can make me happy. I also like singing. I often sing different songs on my way home after school. Singing songs makes me a cheerful boy.
If I can join the Music Club, I can meet some new people. I can talk about music with them and I think we will become good friends. To me, life will be colourful if I become a member of the Music Club.
Thanks for listening!
Dear all,
I would like to join the Music Club. I like listening to all kinds of music. When I am sad, music can make me happy. I also like singing. I often sing different songs on my way home after school. Singing songs makes me a cheerful boy.
If I can join the Music Club, I can meet some new people. I can talk about music with them and I think we will become good friends. To me, life will be colourful if I become a member of the Music Club.
Thanks for listening!
解析：
【分析】本题要求写一篇70词左右的演讲稿，需明确回答三个核心问题：选择哪个俱乐部、选择的原因、想从俱乐部获得什么。解题思路：1. 先从表格给出的四个俱乐部中确定一个（本题参考答案选音乐俱乐部）；2. 围绕“自身对音乐的喜爱、音乐的作用”说明选择原因；3. 围绕“社交、丰富生活”说明想从俱乐部获得的内容；4. 遵循演讲稿格式，语言简洁流畅，控制字数。
【解析】按照演讲稿格式，开头称呼Dear all，先表明想加入音乐俱乐部，接着说明选择原因：喜欢各类音乐，难过时音乐能让自己开心，自身也爱唱歌；再说明想从俱乐部获得的内容：认识新朋友、交流音乐、让生活多彩；最后以Thanks for listening!结尾，组织语言时保证语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear all,
I would like to join the Music Club. I like listening to all kinds of music. When I am sad, music can make me happy. I also like singing. I often sing different songs on my way home after school. Singing songs makes me a cheerful boy.
If I can join the Music Club, I can meet some new people. I can talk about music with them and I think we will become good friends. To me, life will be colourful if I become a member of the Music Club.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达；演讲稿写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，清晰回应了三个核心问题，语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿格式，字数达标，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照演讲稿格式，开头称呼Dear all，先表明想加入音乐俱乐部，接着说明选择原因：喜欢各类音乐，难过时音乐能让自己开心，自身也爱唱歌；再说明想从俱乐部获得的内容：认识新朋友、交流音乐、让生活多彩；最后以Thanks for listening!结尾，组织语言时保证语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear all,
I would like to join the Music Club. I like listening to all kinds of music. When I am sad, music can make me happy. I also like singing. I often sing different songs on my way home after school. Singing songs makes me a cheerful boy.
If I can join the Music Club, I can meet some new people. I can talk about music with them and I think we will become good friends. To me, life will be colourful if I become a member of the Music Club.
Thanks for listening!
【知识点】英语书面表达；演讲稿写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，清晰回应了三个核心问题，语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿格式，字数达标，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6