五、书面表达
学校健康俱乐部举行主题为“健康生活”的演讲比赛,假如你是赵阳,请根据提示,写一份演讲稿。词数70左右。

I’m Zhao Yang. I’m a member of the Health Club.
I hope everyone can have a healthy life.
学校健康俱乐部举行主题为“健康生活”的演讲比赛,假如你是赵阳,请根据提示,写一份演讲稿。词数70左右。
I’m Zhao Yang. I’m a member of the Health Club.
I hope everyone can have a healthy life.
答案:One possible version:
I'm Zhao Yang. I'm a member of the Health Club. I have a healthy life.
For breakfast, I always have an egg. I also eat some baozi and drink a glass of milk. For lunch, I have rice, vegetables and beef. For dinner, I have fish, noodles and fruit.
I get up early every day. I often do exercise in the morning. I also go swimming twice a week. I seldom play computer games because it's bad for my eyes.
I hope everyone can have a healthy life.
I'm Zhao Yang. I'm a member of the Health Club. I have a healthy life.
For breakfast, I always have an egg. I also eat some baozi and drink a glass of milk. For lunch, I have rice, vegetables and beef. For dinner, I have fish, noodles and fruit.
I get up early every day. I often do exercise in the morning. I also go swimming twice a week. I seldom play computer games because it's bad for my eyes.
I hope everyone can have a healthy life.
解析:
【分析】
本题要求以赵阳的身份撰写“健康生活”主题的演讲稿,需结合给定的饮食与生活方式提示完成。解题思路:1. 确定文章结构:开头点明身份与主题,中间分饮食、生活习惯两部分展开,结尾呼吁;2. 采用一般现在时描述日常习惯,将提示内容转化为通顺语句,适当补充合理词汇使内容连贯;3. 控制词数在70左右,确保覆盖所有提示信息,符合演讲稿的语气要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:① 开头:点明身份(赵阳,健康俱乐部成员),引出“健康生活”的主题;② 饮食部分:用“For breakfast/lunch/supper, I have...”结构,介绍三餐食物,补充少量合理词汇(如baozi、fruit)使内容丰富;③ 生活习惯部分:用“I get up early... I often do exercise... I also go swimming... I seldom play...”结构,介绍起床早、锻炼、每周游泳两次、少玩电脑游戏的习惯;④ 结尾:呼应主题,呼吁大家拥有健康生活。全程使用一般现在时,确保语句通顺,词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm Zhao Yang. I'm a member of the Health Club. I have a healthy life.
For breakfast, I always have an egg. I also eat some baozi and drink a glass of milk. For lunch, I have rice, vegetables and beef. For dinner, I have fish, noodles and fruit.
I get up early every day. I often do exercise in the morning. I also go swimming twice a week. I seldom play computer games because it's bad for my eyes.
I hope everyone can have a healthy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、健康话题词汇
【点评】
范文紧扣“健康生活”主题,结构清晰,完整覆盖提示信息,语言通顺自然,符合演讲稿的体裁要求,词数达标,是符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以赵阳的身份撰写“健康生活”主题的演讲稿,需结合给定的饮食与生活方式提示完成。解题思路:1. 确定文章结构:开头点明身份与主题,中间分饮食、生活习惯两部分展开,结尾呼吁;2. 采用一般现在时描述日常习惯,将提示内容转化为通顺语句,适当补充合理词汇使内容连贯;3. 控制词数在70左右,确保覆盖所有提示信息,符合演讲稿的语气要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:① 开头:点明身份(赵阳,健康俱乐部成员),引出“健康生活”的主题;② 饮食部分:用“For breakfast/lunch/supper, I have...”结构,介绍三餐食物,补充少量合理词汇(如baozi、fruit)使内容丰富;③ 生活习惯部分:用“I get up early... I often do exercise... I also go swimming... I seldom play...”结构,介绍起床早、锻炼、每周游泳两次、少玩电脑游戏的习惯;④ 结尾:呼应主题,呼吁大家拥有健康生活。全程使用一般现在时,确保语句通顺,词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm Zhao Yang. I'm a member of the Health Club. I have a healthy life.
For breakfast, I always have an egg. I also eat some baozi and drink a glass of milk. For lunch, I have rice, vegetables and beef. For dinner, I have fish, noodles and fruit.
I get up early every day. I often do exercise in the morning. I also go swimming twice a week. I seldom play computer games because it's bad for my eyes.
I hope everyone can have a healthy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时、健康话题词汇
【点评】
范文紧扣“健康生活”主题,结构清晰,完整覆盖提示信息,语言通顺自然,符合演讲稿的体裁要求,词数达标,是符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5