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八、书面表达
健康的生活方式对我们的生活有很大的好处。请以“How to keep healthy”为题,根据所给信息写一篇短文。

注意:
1. 包含所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 词数70左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
How to keep healthy
Healthy lifestyles make a big difference to our lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?








If we follow these tips, we will live a healthy life.
答案:One possible version:
How to keep healthy
Healthy lifestyles make a big difference to our lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?
First, I think we should have a healthy diet. Always eat healthy food. And drink more water and milk instead of Coke or juice.
Second, exercise is important to us. We can jog every day. Don't spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games.
Third, we can have good habits. We should wash our hands before eating and shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere.
Finally, we should try to be happy. We should change our way of thinking when we feel angry or sad.
If we follow these tips, we will live a healthy life.
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“How to keep healthy”,要求结合给定思维导图的核心要点(饮食、锻炼、生活习惯),适当补充健康相关内容,词数约70,开头和结尾已给出。解题思路:首先明确需覆盖的思维导图要点:饮食(健康食物、饮品选择)、锻炼(慢跑、减少久坐娱乐)、习惯(饭前洗手、不乱扔垃圾);再补充合理的健康建议(如保持情绪愉悦)完善内容;接着用First、Second等连接词梳理结构,使文章条理清晰;最后用简单英语组织语句,确保符合词数、语法正确。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 承接已给问句,用First引出饮食建议:说明要吃健康食物,多喝水和牛奶,少喝可乐等不健康饮品;2. 用Second引出锻炼建议:提到每天慢跑,不要花太多时间看电视或玩电脑游戏;3. 用Third引出生活习惯建议:强调饭前洗手,不随地扔垃圾;4. 用Finally补充情绪管理建议:保持开心,调整负面情绪;5. 检查内容是否覆盖所有要点,词数是否符合要求,语句通顺后衔接已给结尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to keep healthy
Healthy lifestyles make a big difference to our lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?
First, I think we should have a healthy diet. Always eat healthy food. And drink more water and milk instead of Coke or juice.
Second, exercise is important to us. We can jog every day. Don't spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games.
Third, we can have good habits. We should wash our hands before eating and shouldn't throw rubbish everywhere.
Finally, we should try to be happy. We should change our way of thinking when we feel angry or sad.
If we follow these tips, we will live a healthy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题英语表达、连词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点,适当补充情绪管理的健康建议,结构清晰、逻辑连贯,使用合适的连接词,语言简洁通顺,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
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