五、书面表达
请根据以下提示，以“My best friend”为题写一篇短文，介绍你最好的朋友。须包含所有要点，80词左右。
My best friend
请根据以下提示，以“My best friend”为题写一篇短文，介绍你最好的朋友。须包含所有要点，80词左右。
My best friend
答案：One possible version:
My best friend
My best friend is Daisy. She looks pretty with a small round face. She wears her long hair in a ponytail.
She is kind and helpful. She is ready to help others any time. She always gives up her seat to someone in need on the bus. Moreover, she is a cheerful girl. She cheers me up when I feel down. She can tell funny jokes to make me laugh. I never feel bored with her.
Daisy is such a great friend. I am sure our friendship will be endless.
My best friend
My best friend is Daisy. She looks pretty with a small round face. She wears her long hair in a ponytail.
She is kind and helpful. She is ready to help others any time. She always gives up her seat to someone in need on the bus. Moreover, she is a cheerful girl. She cheers me up when I feel down. She can tell funny jokes to make me laugh. I never feel bored with her.
Daisy is such a great friend. I am sure our friendship will be endless.
解析：
【分析】
本题要求以“My best friend”为题写80词左右的短文，需覆盖四个提示要点：1. 点明最好的朋友身份；2. 描述其外貌；3. 介绍其性格品质；4. 表达对朋友的看法。解题时需先梳理要点逻辑，用准确的英语词汇和句型串联内容，确保语句通顺、符合表达习惯，同时控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
写作时，第一步开头直接点明最好的朋友的名字；第二步描述外貌，使用“small round face”“long hair in a ponytail”等短语；第三步介绍品质，用“kind, helpful, cheerful”等形容词，结合具体事例支撑；第四步表达对朋友的评价，收尾升华内容，使整体完整连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My best friend
My best friend is Daisy. She looks pretty with a small round face. She wears her long hair in a ponytail.
She is kind and helpful. She is ready to help others any time. She always gives up her seat to someone in need on the bus. Moreover, she is a cheerful girl. She cheers me up when I feel down. She can tell funny jokes to make me laugh. I never feel bored with her.
Daisy is such a great friend. I am sure our friendship will be endless.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，人物介绍，形容词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，用词准确恰当，语句连贯自然，通过具体事例展现朋友的品质，符合初中英语写作的规范要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My best friend”为题写80词左右的短文，需覆盖四个提示要点：1. 点明最好的朋友身份；2. 描述其外貌；3. 介绍其性格品质；4. 表达对朋友的看法。解题时需先梳理要点逻辑，用准确的英语词汇和句型串联内容，确保语句通顺、符合表达习惯，同时控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
写作时，第一步开头直接点明最好的朋友的名字；第二步描述外貌，使用“small round face”“long hair in a ponytail”等短语；第三步介绍品质，用“kind, helpful, cheerful”等形容词，结合具体事例支撑；第四步表达对朋友的评价，收尾升华内容，使整体完整连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
My best friend
My best friend is Daisy. She looks pretty with a small round face. She wears her long hair in a ponytail.
She is kind and helpful. She is ready to help others any time. She always gives up her seat to someone in need on the bus. Moreover, she is a cheerful girl. She cheers me up when I feel down. She can tell funny jokes to make me laugh. I never feel bored with her.
Daisy is such a great friend. I am sure our friendship will be endless.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，人物介绍，形容词运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，用词准确恰当，语句连贯自然，通过具体事例展现朋友的品质，符合初中英语写作的规范要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5