四、书面表达
阳光中学面向八年级学生增设了DIY社团。假如你是张华,想加入该社团。请根据下面的提示写一则申请书,80词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Class 1, Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY Club.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
阳光中学面向八年级学生增设了DIY社团。假如你是张华,想加入该社团。请根据下面的提示写一则申请书,80词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chairperson,
I’m Zhang Hua in Class 1, Grade 8. I’d like to join the DIY Club.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
答案:One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Zhang Hua in Class 1, Grade 8. I'd like to join the DIY Club.
I like making things by myself in my free time, like paper-cuts and small clay figures. I'm patient enough to make them step by step. I believe if I join the club, I can make more friends who share the same interests. We can talk about our ideas and learn from each other.
Not long ago, I made a model plane for my little brother. I spent days collecting materials and making it. Seeing his big smile when he got it, I was full of joy.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Zhang Hua in Class 1, Grade 8. I'd like to join the DIY Club.
I like making things by myself in my free time, like paper-cuts and small clay figures. I'm patient enough to make them step by step. I believe if I join the club, I can make more friends who share the same interests. We can talk about our ideas and learn from each other.
Not long ago, I made a model plane for my little brother. I spent days collecting materials and making it. Seeing his big smile when he got it, I was full of joy.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以张华的身份撰写加入DIY社团的申请书,需覆盖三个核心要点:一是自我介绍(包含兴趣、性格等),二是加入DIY社团的目的,三是分享一次DIY经历。写作时需紧扣要点,语言通顺,控制在80词左右,结合已给开头补充内容即可。
【解析】1. 首先完成自我介绍:说明自己的DIY兴趣(如制作剪纸、小泥塑),体现自己耐心的性格;2. 接着阐述加入社团的目的:结交有相同兴趣的朋友,互相交流学习;3. 最后分享一次DIY经历:比如为弟弟制作模型飞机,看到弟弟开心的感受。按照该结构组织语言,确保要点齐全,语法正确,符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Zhang Hua in Class 1, Grade 8. I'd like to join the DIY Club.
I like making things by myself in my free time, like paper-cuts and small clay figures. I'm patient enough to make them step by step. I believe if I join the club, I can make more friends who share the same interests. We can talk about our ideas and learn from each other.
Not long ago, I made a model plane for my little brother. I spent days collecting materials and making it. Seeing his big smile when he got it, I was full of joy.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、应用文写作
【点评】本题考查八年级学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求结合给定要点完成内容,语言需准确连贯,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 首先完成自我介绍:说明自己的DIY兴趣(如制作剪纸、小泥塑),体现自己耐心的性格;2. 接着阐述加入社团的目的:结交有相同兴趣的朋友,互相交流学习;3. 最后分享一次DIY经历:比如为弟弟制作模型飞机,看到弟弟开心的感受。按照该结构组织语言,确保要点齐全,语法正确,符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I'm Zhang Hua in Class 1, Grade 8. I'd like to join the DIY Club.
I like making things by myself in my free time, like paper-cuts and small clay figures. I'm patient enough to make them step by step. I believe if I join the club, I can make more friends who share the same interests. We can talk about our ideas and learn from each other.
Not long ago, I made a model plane for my little brother. I spent days collecting materials and making it. Seeing his big smile when he got it, I was full of joy.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、应用文写作
【点评】本题考查八年级学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求结合给定要点完成内容,语言需准确连贯,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6