七、书面表达
学校的自然俱乐部正在招募新成员,假如你是李平,请根据以下提示写一封申请信,80词左右。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Club.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
学校的自然俱乐部正在招募新成员,假如你是李平,请根据以下提示写一封申请信,80词左右。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Club.
My name is Li Ping, a student in Grade 8. I'm really interested in nature. I often go for hikes at weekends and enjoy the beauty of flowers, trees and animals. They are so amazing!
But now, there are lots of environmental problems, like pollution in some areas. I feel sad about that. I want to take action to make a difference. I once joined a volunteer group to pick up plastic bottles in the mountains. I think I can do more as a member of the Nature Club.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
答案：One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Club. My name is Li Ping, a student in Grade 8. I'm really interested in nature. I often go for hikes at weekends and enjoy the beauty of flowers, trees and animals. They are so amazing!
But now, there are lots of environmental problems, like pollution in some areas. I feel sad about that. I want to take action to make a difference. I once joined a volunteer group to pick up plastic bottles in the mountains. I think I can do more as a member of the Nature Club.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Club. My name is Li Ping, a student in Grade 8. I'm really interested in nature. I often go for hikes at weekends and enjoy the beauty of flowers, trees and animals. They are so amazing!
But now, there are lots of environmental problems, like pollution in some areas. I feel sad about that. I want to take action to make a difference. I once joined a volunteer group to pick up plastic bottles in the mountains. I think I can do more as a member of the Nature Club.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达（申请信），需根据给定的三个提示板块（个人信息、环境问题、积极行动）补充申请信内容。首先，开头已给出，先介绍个人基本信息（姓名、年级等），接着说明关注的环境问题，最后讲述自己参与过的环保行动，表达加入俱乐部的意愿，确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 补充个人信息：说明姓名、年级，表达对自然的兴趣；
2. 提及环境问题：举例说明存在的环境问题，表达惋惜；
3. 说明积极行动：讲述自己参与过的环保志愿活动，表明加入俱乐部后能做更多贡献；
4. 整合内容，使语句通顺，符合申请信的格式和语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Club. My name is Li Ping, a student in Grade 8. I'm really interested in nature. I often go for hikes at weekends and enjoy the beauty of flowers, trees and animals. They are so amazing!
But now, there are lots of environmental problems, like pollution in some areas. I feel sad about that. I want to take action to make a difference. I once joined a volunteer group to pick up plastic bottles in the mountains. I think I can do more as a member of the Nature Club.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保话题写作、申请信格式
【点评】
该申请信结构清晰，覆盖了题目要求的三个核心板块，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的要求，准确表达了加入俱乐部的意愿，内容贴合主题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达（申请信），需根据给定的三个提示板块（个人信息、环境问题、积极行动）补充申请信内容。首先，开头已给出，先介绍个人基本信息（姓名、年级等），接着说明关注的环境问题，最后讲述自己参与过的环保行动，表达加入俱乐部的意愿，确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 补充个人信息：说明姓名、年级，表达对自然的兴趣；
2. 提及环境问题：举例说明存在的环境问题，表达惋惜；
3. 说明积极行动：讲述自己参与过的环保志愿活动，表明加入俱乐部后能做更多贡献；
4. 整合内容，使语句通顺，符合申请信的格式和语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Nature Club. My name is Li Ping, a student in Grade 8. I'm really interested in nature. I often go for hikes at weekends and enjoy the beauty of flowers, trees and animals. They are so amazing!
But now, there are lots of environmental problems, like pollution in some areas. I feel sad about that. I want to take action to make a difference. I once joined a volunteer group to pick up plastic bottles in the mountains. I think I can do more as a member of the Nature Club.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保话题写作、申请信格式
【点评】
该申请信结构清晰，覆盖了题目要求的三个核心板块，语言通顺自然，符合初中英语写作的要求，准确表达了加入俱乐部的意愿，内容贴合主题。
【难度系数】
0.6