三、书面表达
假设你的新班长是艾瑞克(Eric),请写一篇英语短文来介绍他。短文包括他的个性品质及事例,他的兴趣爱好和特长,以及他适合的职业和未来梦想。词数90左右。
✔ Personal qualities: confident, clever, hard-working ...
✔ Hobbies: singing, playing basketball ...
✔ Suitable jobs: diplomat (外交官), teacher ...
假设你的新班长是艾瑞克(Eric),请写一篇英语短文来介绍他。短文包括他的个性品质及事例,他的兴趣爱好和特长,以及他适合的职业和未来梦想。词数90左右。
✔ Personal qualities: confident, clever, hard-working ...
✔ Hobbies: singing, playing basketball ...
✔ Suitable jobs: diplomat (外交官), teacher ...
答案：One possible version:
My new monitor
My new monitor named Eric has many strong qualities for this position.
Firstly, he is very confident. He is never afraid of voicing his ideas and he can do anything well if he tries his best. He is very clever. He has won several science competitions in recent years. Moreover, he is so hard-working that he has devoted lots of time to doing class projects. If we are absent from school, he will help us with our lessons.
He not only is a good monitor but also has a lot of talent. He can sing very well and is also in our school basketball team. He always takes an active part in all kinds of school activities.
He has excellent communication skills and is able to work well with others. I think he is suitable to be a diplomat and will work for our country when he grows up.
My new monitor
My new monitor named Eric has many strong qualities for this position.
Firstly, he is very confident. He is never afraid of voicing his ideas and he can do anything well if he tries his best. He is very clever. He has won several science competitions in recent years. Moreover, he is so hard-working that he has devoted lots of time to doing class projects. If we are absent from school, he will help us with our lessons.
He not only is a good monitor but also has a lot of talent. He can sing very well and is also in our school basketball team. He always takes an active part in all kinds of school activities.
He has excellent communication skills and is able to work well with others. I think he is suitable to be a diplomat and will work for our country when he grows up.
解析：
【分析】
本题要求写一篇介绍新班长艾瑞克的英语短文，需涵盖三个核心内容：1.个性品质（自信、聪明、勤奋等，需搭配具体事例）；2.兴趣爱好与特长（唱歌、打篮球等）；3.适合的职业及未来梦想。解题思路为：先点明介绍对象（新班长Eric），再分模块阐述各要点，每个要点补充具体事例让内容充实，最后控制词数在90左右，确保语言通顺、符合英语写作规范。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1.开头直接点明新班长是Eric，引出介绍主题；2.个性品质部分：分别说明自信（敢表达想法、尽力能做好）、聪明（近年获多项科学竞赛奖）、勤奋（花时间做班级项目，帮助缺课同学补功课），用事例支撑品质；3.兴趣爱好部分：介绍他唱歌好、在校篮球队，积极参与各类学校活动；4.职业与梦想部分：结合他的沟通能力，说明适合做外交官，未来梦想是为国家工作；5.调整语句，控制词数，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My new monitor
My new monitor named Eric has many strong qualities for this position.
Firstly, he is very confident. He is never afraid of voicing his ideas and he can do anything well if he tries his best. He is very clever. He has won several science competitions in recent years. Moreover, he is so hard-working that he has devoted lots of time to doing class projects. If we are absent from school, he will help us with our lessons.
He not only is a good monitor but also has a lot of talent. He can sing very well and is also in our school basketball team. He always takes an active part in all kinds of school activities.
He has excellent communication skills and is able to work well with others. I think he is suitable to be a diplomat and will work for our country when he grows up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作、英语要点拓展
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目所有要求，涵盖了指定的个性品质、兴趣爱好、适合职业及未来梦想，每个要点均有具体事例支撑，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇标准的优秀书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇介绍新班长艾瑞克的英语短文，需涵盖三个核心内容：1.个性品质（自信、聪明、勤奋等，需搭配具体事例）；2.兴趣爱好与特长（唱歌、打篮球等）；3.适合的职业及未来梦想。解题思路为：先点明介绍对象（新班长Eric），再分模块阐述各要点，每个要点补充具体事例让内容充实，最后控制词数在90左右，确保语言通顺、符合英语写作规范。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1.开头直接点明新班长是Eric，引出介绍主题；2.个性品质部分：分别说明自信（敢表达想法、尽力能做好）、聪明（近年获多项科学竞赛奖）、勤奋（花时间做班级项目，帮助缺课同学补功课），用事例支撑品质；3.兴趣爱好部分：介绍他唱歌好、在校篮球队，积极参与各类学校活动；4.职业与梦想部分：结合他的沟通能力，说明适合做外交官，未来梦想是为国家工作；5.调整语句，控制词数，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My new monitor
My new monitor named Eric has many strong qualities for this position.
Firstly, he is very confident. He is never afraid of voicing his ideas and he can do anything well if he tries his best. He is very clever. He has won several science competitions in recent years. Moreover, he is so hard-working that he has devoted lots of time to doing class projects. If we are absent from school, he will help us with our lessons.
He not only is a good monitor but also has a lot of talent. He can sing very well and is also in our school basketball team. He always takes an active part in all kinds of school activities.
He has excellent communication skills and is able to work well with others. I think he is suitable to be a diplomat and will work for our country when he grows up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物介绍类写作、英语要点拓展
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目所有要求，涵盖了指定的个性品质、兴趣爱好、适合职业及未来梦想，每个要点均有具体事例支撑，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇标准的优秀书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.6