八、书面表达
学校英语杂志正在创建一个名为“Skills We’re Proud Of”的主题专栏,你决定投稿分享你学会的一项技能。写作内容须包括以下四点,词数80左右。

A skill I learnt
The skill I want to share is
学校英语杂志正在创建一个名为“Skills We’re Proud Of”的主题专栏,你决定投稿分享你学会的一项技能。写作内容须包括以下四点,词数80左右。
A skill I learnt
The skill I want to share is
答案:One possible version:
A skill I learnt
The skill I want to share is Chinese calligraphy.
I decided to learn it after visiting a cultural exhibition and being amazed by the beautiful artwork.
My learning process required a lot of practice.
The biggest difficulty was learning to hold the brush steady to create thin, smooth lines. I often made messy strokes at the beginning.
From this, I gained a valuable lesson in patience. I learnt that calm and repeated practice is the key to improvement.
In the future, I plan to continue practising. I also hope to write the Spring Festival couplets for my home.
A skill I learnt
The skill I want to share is Chinese calligraphy.
I decided to learn it after visiting a cultural exhibition and being amazed by the beautiful artwork.
My learning process required a lot of practice.
The biggest difficulty was learning to hold the brush steady to create thin, smooth lines. I often made messy strokes at the beginning.
From this, I gained a valuable lesson in patience. I learnt that calm and repeated practice is the key to improvement.
In the future, I plan to continue practising. I also hope to write the Spring Festival couplets for my home.
解析:
【分析】
本题是英语话题书面表达题,要求围绕“Skills We’re Proud Of”主题分享个人学会的一项技能,必须包含四个指定要点:技能是什么及学习原因、学习过程及遇到的困难、从经历中获得的非技能本身的重要收获、未来使用该技能的计划。解题时需先选一个具体易写的技能,再逐一对应四个要点组织内容,控制词数在80左右,确保语言通顺、符合英语表达习惯,涵盖所有要求要点。
【解析】
1. 确定技能为中国书法,说明学习原因:参观文化展览后被精美书法作品吸引,决定学习;
2. 描述学习过程:需要大量练习,遇到的困难是握笔不稳,初期常写出杂乱的线条;
3. 阐述收获:懂得耐心的重要性,平静且反复练习是进步的关键;
4. 说明未来计划:继续练习书法,还希望为家里写春节对联。
【答案】
One possible version:
A skill I learnt
The skill I want to share is Chinese calligraphy.
I decided to learn it after visiting a cultural exhibition and being amazed by the beautiful artwork.
My learning process required a lot of practice.
The biggest difficulty was learning to hold the brush steady to create thin, smooth lines. I often made messy strokes at the beginning.
From this, I gained a valuable lesson in patience. I learnt that calm and repeated practice is the key to improvement.
In the future, I plan to continue practising. I also hope to write the Spring Festival couplets for my home.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】
本题紧扣主题,要求清晰,考查学生围绕指定话题组织语言、表达个人经历的能力,需涵盖所有要点,语言简洁通顺即可完成,符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是英语话题书面表达题,要求围绕“Skills We’re Proud Of”主题分享个人学会的一项技能,必须包含四个指定要点:技能是什么及学习原因、学习过程及遇到的困难、从经历中获得的非技能本身的重要收获、未来使用该技能的计划。解题时需先选一个具体易写的技能,再逐一对应四个要点组织内容,控制词数在80左右,确保语言通顺、符合英语表达习惯,涵盖所有要求要点。
【解析】
1. 确定技能为中国书法,说明学习原因:参观文化展览后被精美书法作品吸引,决定学习;
2. 描述学习过程:需要大量练习,遇到的困难是握笔不稳,初期常写出杂乱的线条;
3. 阐述收获:懂得耐心的重要性,平静且反复练习是进步的关键;
4. 说明未来计划:继续练习书法,还希望为家里写春节对联。
【答案】
One possible version:
A skill I learnt
The skill I want to share is Chinese calligraphy.
I decided to learn it after visiting a cultural exhibition and being amazed by the beautiful artwork.
My learning process required a lot of practice.
The biggest difficulty was learning to hold the brush steady to create thin, smooth lines. I often made messy strokes at the beginning.
From this, I gained a valuable lesson in patience. I learnt that calm and repeated practice is the key to improvement.
In the future, I plan to continue practising. I also hope to write the Spring Festival couplets for my home.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】
本题紧扣主题,要求清晰,考查学生围绕指定话题组织语言、表达个人经历的能力,需涵盖所有要点,语言简洁通顺即可完成,符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6