三、书面表达
请根据以下提示，以 “The story of ” 为题写一篇短文，介绍一位你所了解的永不放弃追求梦想的人。词数90左右，文章内容须包括以下要点：
请根据以下提示，以 “The story of ” 为题写一篇短文，介绍一位你所了解的永不放弃追求梦想的人。词数90左右，文章内容须包括以下要点：
答案：One possible version:
The story of Li Na
Li Na was a famous Chinese tennis player. When she was young, she loved tennis and trained very hard. However, at the age of 20, she had to stop playing because of a serious knee injury and heavy stress. The pain was terrible, and many people thought her tennis career was over. But Li Na never gave up hope.
She spent two years recovering. She did special exercises every day to strengthen her knee. There were times when she wanted to quit, but she told herself, "I must keep going." After getting better, she returned to the tennis court. At first, she lost many matches, but she didn't get discouraged. She analyzed her mistakes and practised even harder.
In 2011, Li Na won the French Open. She became the first Asian player to win a Grand Slam singles title. Her success inspired millions of people around the world. She once said, "Difficulties are not walls. They are just steps to help us grow stronger."
From her story, I have learnt that no matter what challenges we face, we should always keep going and never give up.
The story of Li Na
Li Na was a famous Chinese tennis player. When she was young, she loved tennis and trained very hard. However, at the age of 20, she had to stop playing because of a serious knee injury and heavy stress. The pain was terrible, and many people thought her tennis career was over. But Li Na never gave up hope.
She spent two years recovering. She did special exercises every day to strengthen her knee. There were times when she wanted to quit, but she told herself, "I must keep going." After getting better, she returned to the tennis court. At first, she lost many matches, but she didn't get discouraged. She analyzed her mistakes and practised even harder.
In 2011, Li Na won the French Open. She became the first Asian player to win a Grand Slam singles title. Her success inspired millions of people around the world. She once said, "Difficulties are not walls. They are just steps to help us grow stronger."
From her story, I have learnt that no matter what challenges we face, we should always keep going and never give up.
解析：
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：以“The story of ______”为题，介绍一位永不放弃追求梦想的人，需涵盖四个核心要点（面临的挑战、克服困难的方式、达成的目标、学到的启示），词数90左右。思考时选择符合“永不放弃”主题的典型人物（如李娜），围绕四个要点组织内容：先点明人物身份，再叙述其面临的挑战，接着说明克服困难的过程，最后阐述达成的成就及启示，同时注意语言通顺、词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定写作对象：选李娜，她是符合“永不放弃追梦”主题的知名人物；2. 构建文章结构：开头介绍李娜的身份与爱好，中间叙述她面临的挑战及克服过程，结尾说明她的成就与启示；3. 语言运用：用一般过去式叙述经历，准确表达“坚持不放弃”的核心，控制词数在90左右，确保涵盖所有要求要点。
【答案】
One possible version:
The story of Li Na
Li Na was a famous Chinese tennis player. When she was young, she loved tennis and trained very hard. However, at the age of 20, she had to stop playing because of a serious knee injury and heavy stress. The pain was terrible, and many people thought her tennis career was over. But Li Na never gave up hope.
She spent two years recovering. She did special exercises every day to strengthen her knee. There were times when she wanted to quit, but she told herself, "I must keep going." After getting better, she returned to the tennis court. At first, she lost many matches, but she didn't get discouraged. She analyzed her mistakes and practised even harder.
In 2011, Li Na won the French Open. She became the first Asian player to win a Grand Slam singles title. Her success inspired millions of people around the world. She once said, "Difficulties are not walls. They are just steps to help us grow stronger."
From her story, I have learnt that no matter what challenges we face, we should always keep going and never give up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物记叙文写作
【点评】
范文选取李娜的真实事例，紧扣“永不放弃追求梦想”的主题，结构清晰，内容完整，涵盖题目要求的所有要点，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作要求：以“The story of ______”为题，介绍一位永不放弃追求梦想的人，需涵盖四个核心要点（面临的挑战、克服困难的方式、达成的目标、学到的启示），词数90左右。思考时选择符合“永不放弃”主题的典型人物（如李娜），围绕四个要点组织内容：先点明人物身份，再叙述其面临的挑战，接着说明克服困难的过程，最后阐述达成的成就及启示，同时注意语言通顺、词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定写作对象：选李娜，她是符合“永不放弃追梦”主题的知名人物；2. 构建文章结构：开头介绍李娜的身份与爱好，中间叙述她面临的挑战及克服过程，结尾说明她的成就与启示；3. 语言运用：用一般过去式叙述经历，准确表达“坚持不放弃”的核心，控制词数在90左右，确保涵盖所有要求要点。
【答案】
One possible version:
The story of Li Na
Li Na was a famous Chinese tennis player. When she was young, she loved tennis and trained very hard. However, at the age of 20, she had to stop playing because of a serious knee injury and heavy stress. The pain was terrible, and many people thought her tennis career was over. But Li Na never gave up hope.
She spent two years recovering. She did special exercises every day to strengthen her knee. There were times when she wanted to quit, but she told herself, "I must keep going." After getting better, she returned to the tennis court. At first, she lost many matches, but she didn't get discouraged. She analyzed her mistakes and practised even harder.
In 2011, Li Na won the French Open. She became the first Asian player to win a Grand Slam singles title. Her success inspired millions of people around the world. She once said, "Difficulties are not walls. They are just steps to help us grow stronger."
From her story, I have learnt that no matter what challenges we face, we should always keep going and never give up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、人物记叙文写作
【点评】
范文选取李娜的真实事例，紧扣“永不放弃追求梦想”的主题，结构清晰，内容完整，涵盖题目要求的所有要点，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5