三、书面表达
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,电视台将举办题为 “The person I want to thank” 的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。词数90左右。

The person I want to thank
Good afternoon, everyone. It’s a great honour for me to speak here. In my life, many people have helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to thank most is
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近,电视台将举办题为 “The person I want to thank” 的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友……),请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。词数90左右。
The person I want to thank
Good afternoon, everyone. It’s a great honour for me to speak here. In my life, many people have helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to thank most is
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
答案:One possible version:
The person I want to thank
Good afternoon, everyone. It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my life, many people have helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to thank most is my English teacher, Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair and always wears a smile on her face. She is not only caring but also trustworthy. I often tell her when something worries me. She listens attentively and understands my thoughts quite well. What's more, she always encourages me to face difficulties bravely and gives me useful advice. That means a lot to me.
She is also kind and helpful. She often helps me with my English. I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and felt down. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help plays a very important role in my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
The person I want to thank
Good afternoon, everyone. It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my life, many people have helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to thank most is my English teacher, Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair and always wears a smile on her face. She is not only caring but also trustworthy. I often tell her when something worries me. She listens attentively and understands my thoughts quite well. What's more, she always encourages me to face difficulties bravely and gives me useful advice. That means a lot to me.
She is also kind and helpful. She often helps me with my English. I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and felt down. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help plays a very important role in my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
解析:
【分析】
首先明确演讲稿主题为“The person I want to thank”,需结合流程图的三个模块展开:1. 介绍(人物外貌、性格等);2. 相关经历(具体事例);3. 人物带来的影响。解题时先确定要感谢的对象,再依次围绕三个模块组织内容,注意词数要求,语言需符合演讲稿的礼貌语气,确保内容连贯贴合主题。
【解析】
1. 开头点明要感谢的人物(如英语老师);
2. 介绍部分:描述人物外貌与性格特点;
3. 经历部分:举具体事例体现人物的帮助;
4. 影响部分:说明人物对自己的积极影响;
5. 结尾礼貌致谢,完成演讲稿。
【答案】
The person I want to thank
Good afternoon, everyone. It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my life, many people have helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to thank most is my English teacher, Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair and always wears a smile on her face. She is not only caring but also trustworthy. I often tell her when something worries me. She listens attentively and understands my thoughts quite well. What's more, she always encourages me to face difficulties bravely and gives me useful advice. That means a lot to me.
She is also kind and helpful. She often helps me with my English. I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and felt down. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help plays a very important role in my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、人物描写
【点评】
本题考查学生根据给定结构完成英语演讲稿的能力,既要求学生掌握基础的英语表达,也需要结合具体事例传递真情实感,是对英语综合运用能力的考查。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确演讲稿主题为“The person I want to thank”,需结合流程图的三个模块展开:1. 介绍(人物外貌、性格等);2. 相关经历(具体事例);3. 人物带来的影响。解题时先确定要感谢的对象,再依次围绕三个模块组织内容,注意词数要求,语言需符合演讲稿的礼貌语气,确保内容连贯贴合主题。
【解析】
1. 开头点明要感谢的人物(如英语老师);
2. 介绍部分:描述人物外貌与性格特点;
3. 经历部分:举具体事例体现人物的帮助;
4. 影响部分:说明人物对自己的积极影响;
5. 结尾礼貌致谢,完成演讲稿。
【答案】
The person I want to thank
Good afternoon, everyone. It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my life, many people have helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to thank most is my English teacher, Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair and always wears a smile on her face. She is not only caring but also trustworthy. I often tell her when something worries me. She listens attentively and understands my thoughts quite well. What's more, she always encourages me to face difficulties bravely and gives me useful advice. That means a lot to me.
She is also kind and helpful. She often helps me with my English. I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and felt down. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help plays a very important role in my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作、人物描写
【点评】
本题考查学生根据给定结构完成英语演讲稿的能力,既要求学生掌握基础的英语表达,也需要结合具体事例传递真情实感,是对英语综合运用能力的考查。
【难度系数】
0.5