七、书面表达
为了让同学们感受生命的价值,有意义地学习和生活,成为有用之人,你校英语社团决定举办主题为“My meaningful life”的征文活动。请你根据下面的图示及要求,结合自身经历及感悟,写一篇英语短文投稿,至少选择2-3方面陈述。词数90左右。
My meaningful life
Life is a long journey. In order to live a meaningful life,
为了让同学们感受生命的价值,有意义地学习和生活,成为有用之人,你校英语社团决定举办主题为“My meaningful life”的征文活动。请你根据下面的图示及要求,结合自身经历及感悟,写一篇英语短文投稿,至少选择2-3方面陈述。词数90左右。
My meaningful life
Life is a long journey. In order to live a meaningful life,
答案：One possible version:
My meaningful life
Life is a long journey. In order to live a meaningful life, I have been trying my best to make every day count.
First, I put more effort into my studies. I not only focus on my homework, but also read widely in my spare time. Last term, I won first prize in the school English reading competition, which made me realize that knowledge can make me more confident and outgoing.
Besides, I realize the importance of independence. I try to overcome difficulties by myself, like getting along well with my classmates, balancing my studies and hobbies and so on. When I successfully finished a school project on my own, I felt a strong sense of achievement. This helps me face challenges bravely.
Moreover, I take part in volunteering activities actively. Last month, I volunteered at a community centre to teach elderly people how to use their smartphones. Seeing their smiling faces when they learnt to make video calls to their families made me feel satisfied.
In short, a meaningful life is built on hard work, independence and volunteering. I will keep moving forward to make my life more meaningful.
My meaningful life
Life is a long journey. In order to live a meaningful life, I have been trying my best to make every day count.
First, I put more effort into my studies. I not only focus on my homework, but also read widely in my spare time. Last term, I won first prize in the school English reading competition, which made me realize that knowledge can make me more confident and outgoing.
Besides, I realize the importance of independence. I try to overcome difficulties by myself, like getting along well with my classmates, balancing my studies and hobbies and so on. When I successfully finished a school project on my own, I felt a strong sense of achievement. This helps me face challenges bravely.
Moreover, I take part in volunteering activities actively. Last month, I volunteered at a community centre to teach elderly people how to use their smartphones. Seeing their smiling faces when they learnt to make video calls to their families made me feel satisfied.
In short, a meaningful life is built on hard work, independence and volunteering. I will keep moving forward to make my life more meaningful.
解析：
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My meaningful life”，需围绕图示中的“Study、Independence、Volunteering”等2-3个方面展开，结合自身经历，词数90左右。解题思路：1. 开头点题，说明要过有意义的生活；2. 分述选取的要点，每个要点搭配具体个人经历（如学习获奖、独立完成项目、志愿活动）；3. 结尾总结，升华主题，呼应“有意义的生活”的核心。
【解析】按照书面表达的规范结构，先引出主题，再分三个方面阐述：学习上努力并获奖，体会知识带来的自信；学会独立，自己克服困难完成项目，获得成就感；参加志愿活动，教老人使用手机，收获满足感，最后总结有意义的生活源于这些方面，完成全文写作。
【答案】One possible version:
My meaningful life
Life is a long journey. In order to live a meaningful life, I have been trying my best to make every day count.
First, I put more effort into my studies. I not only focus on my homework, but also read widely in my spare time. Last term, I won first prize in the school English reading competition, which made me realize that knowledge can make me more confident and outgoing.
Besides, I realize the importance of independence. I try to overcome difficulties by myself, like getting along well with my classmates, balancing my studies and hobbies and so on. When I successfully finished a school project on my own, I felt a strong sense of achievement. This helps me face challenges bravely.
Moreover, I take part in volunteering activities actively. Last month, I volunteered at a community centre to teach elderly people how to use their smartphones. Seeing their smiling faces when they learnt to make video calls to their families made me feel satisfied.
In short, a meaningful life is built on hard work, independence and volunteering. I will keep moving forward to make my life more meaningful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、主题作文、思维导图写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图提示，要求学生围绕“有意义的生活”主题，选取要点并结合自身经历写作，既考查英语语言运用能力，又引导学生思考生活的价值，贴合学生生活实际，是一道综合性较强的书面表达题。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照书面表达的规范结构，先引出主题，再分三个方面阐述：学习上努力并获奖，体会知识带来的自信；学会独立，自己克服困难完成项目，获得成就感；参加志愿活动，教老人使用手机，收获满足感，最后总结有意义的生活源于这些方面，完成全文写作。
【答案】One possible version:
My meaningful life
Life is a long journey. In order to live a meaningful life, I have been trying my best to make every day count.
First, I put more effort into my studies. I not only focus on my homework, but also read widely in my spare time. Last term, I won first prize in the school English reading competition, which made me realize that knowledge can make me more confident and outgoing.
Besides, I realize the importance of independence. I try to overcome difficulties by myself, like getting along well with my classmates, balancing my studies and hobbies and so on. When I successfully finished a school project on my own, I felt a strong sense of achievement. This helps me face challenges bravely.
Moreover, I take part in volunteering activities actively. Last month, I volunteered at a community centre to teach elderly people how to use their smartphones. Seeing their smiling faces when they learnt to make video calls to their families made me feel satisfied.
In short, a meaningful life is built on hard work, independence and volunteering. I will keep moving forward to make my life more meaningful.
【知识点】英语书面表达、主题作文、思维导图写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图提示，要求学生围绕“有意义的生活”主题，选取要点并结合自身经历写作，既考查英语语言运用能力，又引导学生思考生活的价值，贴合学生生活实际，是一道综合性较强的书面表达题。
【难度系数】0.6