八、书面表达
音乐是无国界的语言，能传递情感、治愈心灵，也能陪伴我们度过不同的时光。请你结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你喜欢的音乐形式、一次与音乐相关的经历，以及音乐带给你的感受。词数90左右。
Music plays an important role in my life.
音乐是无国界的语言，能传递情感、治愈心灵，也能陪伴我们度过不同的时光。请你结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你喜欢的音乐形式、一次与音乐相关的经历，以及音乐带给你的感受。词数90左右。
Music plays an important role in my life.
答案：One possible version:
Music plays an important role in my life. My favourite kind of music is classical music.
I still remember that when I first started playing the piano, I felt excited. I enjoyed the beautiful music when I played the piano. However, as time went by, my fingers got tired. I felt bored and wanted to give up. "My dear, music makes us feel relaxed. We should enjoy it," Mother said. Then I kept playing the piano and practised even harder. I found myself enjoying the world of music. I felt relaxed and happy.
From this experience, I have learnt that "Where there is a will, there is a way." Music plays an important role in my life. It not only brings me pleasure but also shapes my character.
Music plays an important role in my life. My favourite kind of music is classical music.
I still remember that when I first started playing the piano, I felt excited. I enjoyed the beautiful music when I played the piano. However, as time went by, my fingers got tired. I felt bored and wanted to give up. "My dear, music makes us feel relaxed. We should enjoy it," Mother said. Then I kept playing the piano and practised even harder. I found myself enjoying the world of music. I felt relaxed and happy.
From this experience, I have learnt that "Where there is a will, there is a way." Music plays an important role in my life. It not only brings me pleasure but also shapes my character.
解析：
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需介绍喜欢的音乐形式、一次与音乐相关的亲身经历、音乐带来的感受，词数90左右。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头句，点明自己喜欢的音乐类型；2. 选取一次具体的亲身经历（如学习乐器的经历），体现音乐的陪伴与成长；3. 总结音乐的意义，呼应开头，同时注意控制词数，保证语句通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】1. 承接开头，点明喜欢的音乐：My favourite kind of music is classical music. 2. 叙述经历：回忆初学钢琴的兴奋，后来因手指疲惫想放弃，妈妈鼓励“音乐让我们放松，要享受它”，坚持后感受到音乐的美好；3. 总结：点明音乐不仅带来快乐，还塑造性格，呼应开头，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Music plays an important role in my life. My favourite kind of music is classical music.
I still remember that when I first started playing the piano, I felt excited. I enjoyed the beautiful music when I played the piano. However, as time went by, my fingers got tired. I felt bored and wanted to give up. "My dear, music makes us feel relaxed. We should enjoy it," Mother said. Then I kept playing the piano and practised even harder. I found myself enjoying the world of music. I felt relaxed and happy.
From this experience, I have learnt that "Where there is a will, there is a way." Music plays an important role in my life. It not only brings me pleasure but also shapes my character.
【知识点】英语书面表达、英语记叙文写作
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰完整，内容结合自身真实经历，语言流畅自然，准确传达了音乐的意义，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的英语短文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 承接开头，点明喜欢的音乐：My favourite kind of music is classical music. 2. 叙述经历：回忆初学钢琴的兴奋，后来因手指疲惫想放弃，妈妈鼓励“音乐让我们放松，要享受它”，坚持后感受到音乐的美好；3. 总结：点明音乐不仅带来快乐，还塑造性格，呼应开头，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Music plays an important role in my life. My favourite kind of music is classical music.
I still remember that when I first started playing the piano, I felt excited. I enjoyed the beautiful music when I played the piano. However, as time went by, my fingers got tired. I felt bored and wanted to give up. "My dear, music makes us feel relaxed. We should enjoy it," Mother said. Then I kept playing the piano and practised even harder. I found myself enjoying the world of music. I felt relaxed and happy.
From this experience, I have learnt that "Where there is a will, there is a way." Music plays an important role in my life. It not only brings me pleasure but also shapes my character.
【知识点】英语书面表达、英语记叙文写作
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰完整，内容结合自身真实经历，语言流畅自然，准确传达了音乐的意义，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的英语短文。
【难度系数】0.6