九、书面表达。
请你以 “My favourite festival” 为题,根据思维导图提示,写一篇短文描述你最喜爱的节日。
要求:1. 语句通顺,表达清晰,书写规范;2. 不少于 5 句话。

My favourite festival
请你以 “My favourite festival” 为题,根据思维导图提示,写一篇短文描述你最喜爱的节日。
要求:1. 语句通顺,表达清晰,书写规范;2. 不少于 5 句话。
My favourite festival
答案:参考范文:
My favourite festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is in January or February. Before the festival, my family and I clean our house and put fu on our doors. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, we always get together and have a big dinner. On Chinese New Year’s Day, I watch a lion dance and visit my grandparents. I like this festival because it’s fun.
My favourite festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is in January or February. Before the festival, my family and I clean our house and put fu on our doors. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, we always get together and have a big dinner. On Chinese New Year’s Day, I watch a lion dance and visit my grandparents. I like this festival because it’s fun.
解析:
【分析】
要完成这篇书面表达,需紧扣题目要求和思维导图提示:首先确定自己最喜爱的节日,再依次回答思维导图中的核心问题(节日是什么、时间、做什么、吃什么、喜欢的原因等),最后将这些内容用通顺连贯的英语句子串联,确保语句符合语法、表达清晰,且满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
根据思维导图的提示,围绕“My favourite festival”展开写作:
1. 开篇点明最喜欢的节日:My favourite festival is the Spring Festival.
2. 说明节日时间:It is in January or February.
3. 描述节日相关活动:Before the festival, my family and I clean our house and put fu on our doors. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, we always get together and have a big dinner. On Chinese New Year’s Day, I watch a lion dance and visit my grandparents.
4. 说明喜欢的原因:I like this festival because it’s fun.
将上述内容整合,形成符合要求的短文,保证语句通顺、信息完整。
【答案】
My favourite festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is in January or February. Before the festival, my family and I clean our house and put fu on our doors. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, we always get together and have a big dinner. On Chinese New Year’s Day, I watch a lion dance and visit my grandparents. I like this festival because it’s fun.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;节日话题写作
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕给定思维导图信息组织英语语言的能力,结合生活中熟悉的节日话题,既考查语言运用能力,也便于学生结合自身经历展开写作,符合初中英语书面表达的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.5
要完成这篇书面表达,需紧扣题目要求和思维导图提示:首先确定自己最喜爱的节日,再依次回答思维导图中的核心问题(节日是什么、时间、做什么、吃什么、喜欢的原因等),最后将这些内容用通顺连贯的英语句子串联,确保语句符合语法、表达清晰,且满足不少于5句话的要求。
【解析】
根据思维导图的提示,围绕“My favourite festival”展开写作:
1. 开篇点明最喜欢的节日:My favourite festival is the Spring Festival.
2. 说明节日时间:It is in January or February.
3. 描述节日相关活动:Before the festival, my family and I clean our house and put fu on our doors. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, we always get together and have a big dinner. On Chinese New Year’s Day, I watch a lion dance and visit my grandparents.
4. 说明喜欢的原因:I like this festival because it’s fun.
将上述内容整合,形成符合要求的短文,保证语句通顺、信息完整。
【答案】
My favourite festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is in January or February. Before the festival, my family and I clean our house and put fu on our doors. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, we always get together and have a big dinner. On Chinese New Year’s Day, I watch a lion dance and visit my grandparents. I like this festival because it’s fun.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;节日话题写作
【点评】
本题考查学生围绕给定思维导图信息组织英语语言的能力,结合生活中熟悉的节日话题,既考查语言运用能力,也便于学生结合自身经历展开写作,符合初中英语书面表达的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.5