九、书面表达。
请根据所给提示和思维导图发挥想象，写一篇短文，介绍蒂姆的幸福生活。要求：1.语句通顺，书写美观；2.50词左右，可适当补充；3.注意单词拼写、字母大小写等。
My happy life
Hello! I’m Tim. This is my happy life.
To have a happy life, we should
Let’s enjoy every day and live a happy life.
请根据所给提示和思维导图发挥想象，写一篇短文，介绍蒂姆的幸福生活。要求：1.语句通顺，书写美观；2.50词左右，可适当补充；3.注意单词拼写、字母大小写等。
My happy life
Hello! I’m Tim. This is my happy life.
To have a happy life, we should
keep safe. We should go swimming in the swimming pool. We shouldn’t run on the stairs. We should have some good habits too. We should put school things in order. We should listen to teachers carefully. We also should have some nice hobbies to feel good. I feel good when I play football with my friends.
.Let’s enjoy every day and live a happy life.
答案：参考范文：
My happy life
Hello! I’m Tim. This is my happy life.
To have a happy life, we should keep safe. We should go swimming in the swimming pool. We shouldn’t run on the stairs. We should have some good habits too. We should put school things in order. We should listen to teachers carefully. We also should have some nice hobbies to feel good. I feel good when I play football with my friends.
Let’s enjoy every day and live a happy life.
My happy life
Hello! I’m Tim. This is my happy life.
To have a happy life, we should keep safe. We should go swimming in the swimming pool. We shouldn’t run on the stairs. We should have some good habits too. We should put school things in order. We should listen to teachers carefully. We also should have some nice hobbies to feel good. I feel good when I play football with my friends.
Let’s enjoy every day and live a happy life.
解析：
【分析】
本题要求写介绍蒂姆幸福生活的短文，需结合给定的三个提示（安全规则、好习惯、好爱好），50词左右，语句通顺。解题思路：先承接开头，分别从安全规则（举泳池游泳、不跑楼梯等例子）、好习惯（举整理学习用品、认真听课等例子）、好爱好（举和朋友踢足球等例子）三个方面展开，最后收尾，确保符合字数和拼写要求。
【解析】
根据题目要求，围绕三个提示点组织内容：首先说明要遵守安全规则，如在泳池游泳、不在楼梯奔跑；接着介绍好习惯，如整理学习用品、认真听老师讲课；再提及好爱好，如和朋友踢足球；最后收尾呼吁享受生活，形成完整短文。
【答案】
My happy life
Hello! I’m Tim. This is my happy life.
To have a happy life, we should keep safe. We should go swimming in the swimming pool. We shouldn’t run on the stairs. We should have some good habits too. We should put school things in order. We should listen to teachers carefully. We also should have some nice hobbies to feel good. I feel good when I play football with my friends.
Let’s enjoy every day and live a happy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；词汇运用；简单句写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目提示，结构清晰，涵盖安全规则、好习惯、好爱好三个核心要点，语句通顺，符合字数要求，是适合学生模仿的基础书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求写介绍蒂姆幸福生活的短文，需结合给定的三个提示（安全规则、好习惯、好爱好），50词左右，语句通顺。解题思路：先承接开头，分别从安全规则（举泳池游泳、不跑楼梯等例子）、好习惯（举整理学习用品、认真听课等例子）、好爱好（举和朋友踢足球等例子）三个方面展开，最后收尾，确保符合字数和拼写要求。
【解析】
根据题目要求，围绕三个提示点组织内容：首先说明要遵守安全规则，如在泳池游泳、不在楼梯奔跑；接着介绍好习惯，如整理学习用品、认真听老师讲课；再提及好爱好，如和朋友踢足球；最后收尾呼吁享受生活，形成完整短文。
【答案】
My happy life
Hello! I’m Tim. This is my happy life.
To have a happy life, we should keep safe. We should go swimming in the swimming pool. We shouldn’t run on the stairs. We should have some good habits too. We should put school things in order. We should listen to teachers carefully. We also should have some nice hobbies to feel good. I feel good when I play football with my friends.
Let’s enjoy every day and live a happy life.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；词汇运用；简单句写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目提示，结构清晰，涵盖安全规则、好习惯、好爱好三个核心要点，语句通顺，符合字数要求，是适合学生模仿的基础书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.7