九、书面表达。
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，我校正在举行题为“My neighbourhood”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图完成一篇英文征文稿。要求：1. 必须包含思维导图中的所有内容，并适当发挥；2. 条理清晰、语法正确，不得出现真实姓名和住址；3. 不少于5句话。
My neighbourhood
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，我校正在举行题为“My neighbourhood”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图完成一篇英文征文稿。要求：1. 必须包含思维导图中的所有内容，并适当发挥；2. 条理清晰、语法正确，不得出现真实姓名和住址；3. 不少于5句话。
My neighbourhood
I live in a nice neighbourhood. My neighbours are very kind and helpful. They often look after old people. When someone is sick, they usually take that person to the hospital. I also help my neighbours. I often water the flowers for them.
I feel very happy and safe living here. I love my neighbourhood.
答案：参考范文：
My neighbourhood
I live in a nice neighbourhood. My neighbours are very kind and helpful. They often look after old people. When someone is sick, they usually take that person to the hospital. I also help my neighbours. I often water the flowers for them. I feel very happy and safe living here. I love my neighbourhood.
My neighbourhood
I live in a nice neighbourhood. My neighbours are very kind and helpful. They often look after old people. When someone is sick, they usually take that person to the hospital. I also help my neighbours. I often water the flowers for them. I feel very happy and safe living here. I love my neighbourhood.
解析：
【分析】
这是一道英文话题书面表达题，要求围绕“My neighbourhood”主题，结合思维导图的四个核心要点（邻居的特点、邻居助人的两个实例、自己为邻居做的一个实例、对社区的感受）完成征文。解题思路为：先明确各要点的英文表达，再将要点串联成通顺的语句，确保语法正确、内容完整，符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明居住的社区：I live in a nice neighbourhood.
2. 描述邻居的特点：My neighbours are very kind and helpful.
3. 列举邻居助人的两个例子：They often look after old people. When someone is sick, they usually take that person to the hospital.
4. 说明自己为邻居做的事：I also help my neighbours. I often water the flowers for them.
5. 表达对社区的感受：I feel very happy and safe living here. I love my neighbourhood.
将以上内容按逻辑顺序串联，形成完整的短文，满足不少于5句话的要求，且覆盖所有思维导图要点。
【答案】
My neighbourhood
I live in a nice neighbourhood. My neighbours are very kind and helpful. They often look after old people. When someone is sick, they usually take that person to the hospital. I also help my neighbours. I often water the flowers for them. I feel very happy and safe living here. I love my neighbourhood.
【知识点】
英文书面表达、话题作文、思维导图写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要求，例子具体生动，情感真挚自然，语句通顺，语法正确，符合初中英语写作的规范，很好地呼应了“远亲不如近邻”的主题。
【难度系数】
0.4
这是一道英文话题书面表达题，要求围绕“My neighbourhood”主题，结合思维导图的四个核心要点（邻居的特点、邻居助人的两个实例、自己为邻居做的一个实例、对社区的感受）完成征文。解题思路为：先明确各要点的英文表达，再将要点串联成通顺的语句，确保语法正确、内容完整，符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明居住的社区：I live in a nice neighbourhood.
2. 描述邻居的特点：My neighbours are very kind and helpful.
3. 列举邻居助人的两个例子：They often look after old people. When someone is sick, they usually take that person to the hospital.
4. 说明自己为邻居做的事：I also help my neighbours. I often water the flowers for them.
5. 表达对社区的感受：I feel very happy and safe living here. I love my neighbourhood.
将以上内容按逻辑顺序串联，形成完整的短文，满足不少于5句话的要求，且覆盖所有思维导图要点。
【答案】
My neighbourhood
I live in a nice neighbourhood. My neighbours are very kind and helpful. They often look after old people. When someone is sick, they usually take that person to the hospital. I also help my neighbours. I often water the flowers for them. I feel very happy and safe living here. I love my neighbourhood.
【知识点】
英文书面表达、话题作文、思维导图写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要求，例子具体生动，情感真挚自然，语句通顺，语法正确，符合初中英语写作的规范，很好地呼应了“远亲不如近邻”的主题。
【难度系数】
0.4