任务情境
人和动物共同生活在美丽的地球上,互相影响,互相依存。某英文报正在举办以“Saving Wild Animals”为题的征文活动,请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:
1. What danger do wild animals face?
2. Why do we have to protect wild animals?
3. As students, what action can we take to protect wild animals?
要求:
1. 必须包括提示中所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称和第三人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①最大的陆地动物
②与……有关联
③实际上
④出于这个原因
⑤为了;以便
⑥参与某事
⑦有……栖息
⑧在……中发挥作用
⑨……的象征
⑩重达……
2. 句型仿写
①Bees play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet.(教材p.36 1b)
句型:... play an important part in ...
仿写:野生动物在维护生态系统平衡中发挥了重要作用。
②Bees are also one of the most interesting animals in the world.(教材p.36 1b)
句型:主语+be+one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数.
仿写:野生动物是我们星球上最珍贵的财富之一。
③However, the number of bees is dropping, and scientists are worried.(教材p.36 1b)
句型:the number of ... is dropping
仿写:由于人类活动的影响,野生动物物种的数量正在急剧减少。
连句成篇
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger.
人和动物共同生活在美丽的地球上,互相影响,互相依存。某英文报正在举办以“Saving Wild Animals”为题的征文活动,请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示:
1. What danger do wild animals face?
2. Why do we have to protect wild animals?
3. As students, what action can we take to protect wild animals?
要求:
1. 必须包括提示中所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 80词左右,标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称和第三人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①最大的陆地动物
the biggest land animal
②与……有关联
be connected with/to
③实际上
in fact
④出于这个原因
for this reason
⑤为了;以便
in order to
⑥参与某事
play a part (in sth)
⑦有……栖息
be home to sb/sth
⑧在……中发挥作用
play a role (in)
⑨……的象征
a symbol of
⑩重达……
weigh up to/as much as ...
2. 句型仿写
①Bees play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet.(教材p.36 1b)
句型:... play an important part in ...
仿写:野生动物在维护生态系统平衡中发挥了重要作用。
Wild animals play an important part/role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem.
②Bees are also one of the most interesting animals in the world.(教材p.36 1b)
句型:主语+be+one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数.
仿写:野生动物是我们星球上最珍贵的财富之一。
Wild animals are one of the most precious treasures of our planet.
③However, the number of bees is dropping, and scientists are worried.(教材p.36 1b)
句型:the number of ... is dropping
仿写:由于人类活动的影响,野生动物物种的数量正在急剧减少。
The number of wild animal species is dropping rapidly due to human activities.
连句成篇
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger.
The number of wild animal species is dropping rapidly due to human activities. Moreover, many wild animals don't have enough habitats.
Wild animals are one of the most precious treasures of our planet. They play an important part/role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem. If there were no wild animals, there would be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy clothes made of wild animal fur. Second, we should raise awareness of the importance of wild animals. Last but not least, the government should pass laws to protect them.
答案:【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①the biggest land animal
②be connected with/to
③in fact ④for this reason
⑤in order to
⑥play a part (in sth)
⑦be home to sb/sth
⑧play a role (in) ⑨a symbol of
⑩weigh up to/as much as ...
2. 句型仿写
①Wild animals play an important part/role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem.
②Wild animals are one of the most precious treasures of our planet.
③The number of wild animal species is dropping rapidly due to human activities.
【连句成篇】
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger. The number of wild animal species is dropping rapidly due to human activities. Moreover, many wild animals don't have enough habitats.
Wild animals are one of the most precious treasures of our planet. They play an important part/role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem. If there were no wild animals, there would be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy clothes made of wild animal fur. Second, we should raise awareness of the importance of wild animals. Last but not least, the government should pass laws to protect them.
1. 主题词块
①the biggest land animal
②be connected with/to
③in fact ④for this reason
⑤in order to
⑥play a part (in sth)
⑦be home to sb/sth
⑧play a role (in) ⑨a symbol of
⑩weigh up to/as much as ...
2. 句型仿写
①Wild animals play an important part/role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem.
②Wild animals are one of the most precious treasures of our planet.
③The number of wild animal species is dropping rapidly due to human activities.
【连句成篇】
Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger. The number of wild animal species is dropping rapidly due to human activities. Moreover, many wild animals don't have enough habitats.
Wild animals are one of the most precious treasures of our planet. They play an important part/role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem. If there were no wild animals, there would be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy clothes made of wild animal fur. Second, we should raise awareness of the importance of wild animals. Last but not least, the government should pass laws to protect them.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语征文写作题,主题是“Saving Wild Animals”,需遵循给定的思维导图结构(开头点题、主体阐述保护原因、结尾说明措施),结合提示的三个核心问题(野生动物面临的危险、保护的必要性、学生可采取的行动)完成写作。首先开头承接已给内容,点明野生动物濒危现状;主体部分先说明其面临的具体危险(如数量锐减、栖息地不足),再阐述保护的原因(生态平衡、珍贵财富等);结尾需给出具体可操作的保护措施,同时运用积累的主题词块和句型,确保语法正确、条理清晰、符合字数要求。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开头:承接已给句子,运用“the number of...is dropping”句型说明野生动物数量因人类活动急剧减少,补充栖息地不足的危险;2. 主体:用“one of the most precious treasures”句型点明野生动物的珍贵性,再用“play an important part in...”句型说明其对生态平衡的作用,强调保护的必要性;3. 结尾:用“therefore”引出措施,分点说明学生可做的(不买野生动物皮毛制品、提高保护意识)及相关行动(政府立法),覆盖所有提示信息,语句通顺,时态统一为一般现在时。
【答案】Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger. The number of wild animal species is dropping rapidly due to human activities. Moreover, many wild animals don't have enough habitats.
Wild animals are one of the most precious treasures of our planet. They play an important part/role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem. If there were no wild animals, there would be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy clothes made of wild animal fur. Second, we should raise awareness of the importance of wild animals. Last but not least, the government should pass laws to protect them.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、主题词汇运用、句型仿写
【点评】本题围绕保护野生动物主题,考查学生的篇章结构搭建能力、主题词汇与句型的运用能力,要求覆盖所有提示要点,符合字数要求,是初中英语常见的写作题型,注重语言的实用性和逻辑性。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤:1. 开头:承接已给句子,运用“the number of...is dropping”句型说明野生动物数量因人类活动急剧减少,补充栖息地不足的危险;2. 主体:用“one of the most precious treasures”句型点明野生动物的珍贵性,再用“play an important part in...”句型说明其对生态平衡的作用,强调保护的必要性;3. 结尾:用“therefore”引出措施,分点说明学生可做的(不买野生动物皮毛制品、提高保护意识)及相关行动(政府立法),覆盖所有提示信息,语句通顺,时态统一为一般现在时。
【答案】Saving Wild Animals
Humans live together with wild animals on earth, but many of them are in danger. The number of wild animal species is dropping rapidly due to human activities. Moreover, many wild animals don't have enough habitats.
Wild animals are one of the most precious treasures of our planet. They play an important part/role in maintaining the balance of the ecosystem. If there were no wild animals, there would be no humans.
Therefore, we must take action to save wild animals. First, we shouldn't buy clothes made of wild animal fur. Second, we should raise awareness of the importance of wild animals. Last but not least, the government should pass laws to protect them.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、主题词汇运用、句型仿写
【点评】本题围绕保护野生动物主题,考查学生的篇章结构搭建能力、主题词汇与句型的运用能力,要求覆盖所有提示要点,符合字数要求,是初中英语常见的写作题型,注重语言的实用性和逻辑性。
【难度系数】0.6