[经典例题]
阳光中学的八年级学生李华即将前往英国,成为一名短期交换生。他性格温和、乐于助人,尤其热爱读书和旅行,现写信询问英国学校的联系人 Andy 能否报名参加当地的社区志愿服务活动。假设你是李华,请用英文写一份自荐信。内容应包括：
1. 基本情况介绍；
2. 简述一次志愿服务经历；
3. 对交换生活表示期待。
注意：1. 词数 90,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
阳光中学的八年级学生李华即将前往英国,成为一名短期交换生。他性格温和、乐于助人,尤其热爱读书和旅行,现写信询问英国学校的联系人 Andy 能否报名参加当地的社区志愿服务活动。假设你是李华,请用英文写一份自荐信。内容应包括：
1. 基本情况介绍；
2. 简述一次志愿服务经历；
3. 对交换生活表示期待。
注意：1. 词数 90,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
答案：[高分范文]
Dear Andy,
I am Li Hua. I now study in Sunshine Middle school. I will come to your school as a short - term exchange student. I am writing to ask if I can take part in some voluntary work in your community or school.
I’m familiar with different kinds of sports events, and I am good at communicating with others. The most importantly, I have rich experience in doing voluntary work. For example, last summer holiday, I volunteered in old people’s home with my friends. We sang and danced for the old. This experience not only brought me happiness but also made me more confident.
I hope to get a reply soon. As a Chinese student, I haven’t been to any foreign schools before. So I can’t wait to pack my bag and get on board. Look forward to meeting you guys.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
短文首先介绍自己的基本情况,然后简述一次志愿服务经历,最后表达对交换生活的期待,让读者体会到作者想做志愿者的急迫心情。
① 短文开篇点题,表明了自己写信的目的,想做志愿者；
② 短文使用了 the most importantly、for example 等词汇,使短文层次丰富,更具有说服力；
③ if 引导的宾语从句彰显了作者扎实的语法功底；
④ 固定短语 be familiar with、“not only... but also...”和 look forward to 的使用,是短文的加分项。
Dear Andy,
I am Li Hua. I now study in Sunshine Middle school. I will come to your school as a short - term exchange student. I am writing to ask if I can take part in some voluntary work in your community or school.
I’m familiar with different kinds of sports events, and I am good at communicating with others. The most importantly, I have rich experience in doing voluntary work. For example, last summer holiday, I volunteered in old people’s home with my friends. We sang and danced for the old. This experience not only brought me happiness but also made me more confident.
I hope to get a reply soon. As a Chinese student, I haven’t been to any foreign schools before. So I can’t wait to pack my bag and get on board. Look forward to meeting you guys.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
短文首先介绍自己的基本情况,然后简述一次志愿服务经历,最后表达对交换生活的期待,让读者体会到作者想做志愿者的急迫心情。
① 短文开篇点题,表明了自己写信的目的,想做志愿者；
② 短文使用了 the most importantly、for example 等词汇,使短文层次丰富,更具有说服力；
③ if 引导的宾语从句彰显了作者扎实的语法功底；
④ 固定短语 be familiar with、“not only... but also...”和 look forward to 的使用,是短文的加分项。