(亮点原创)请根据所给图片,适当发挥想象,用英文编写一个小故事。
参考词汇:pay ... for ...(为……支付……),return(退还)

There is a businessman in the town. He sells pearls. To attract customers(吸引顾客), he uses beautiful boxes to pack the pearls.
Oh, the customer really doesn't know what the real treasure is.
参考词汇:pay ... for ...(为……支付……),return(退还)
There is a businessman in the town. He sells pearls. To attract customers(吸引顾客), he uses beautiful boxes to pack the pearls.
One day, a customer comes to the shop. The businessman shows his beautiful pearls to the customer. The customer likes the box with a nice pearl in it so much. He pays a lot of money for it. And the businessman is very happy that someone likes his pearl. However, to his surprise, the customer comes back. He returns the pearl to the businessman.
Oh, the customer really doesn't know what the real treasure is.
答案:主题写作提优
示例:
There is a businessman in the town. He sells pearls. To attract customers, he uses beautiful boxes to pack the pearls.
One day, a customer comes to the shop. The businessman shows his beautiful pearls to the customer. The customer likes the box with a nice pearl in it so much. He pays a lot of money for it. And the businessman is very happy that someone likes his pearl. However, to his surprise, the customer comes back. He returns the pearl to the businessman.
Oh, the customer really doesn't know what the real treasure is.
示例:
There is a businessman in the town. He sells pearls. To attract customers, he uses beautiful boxes to pack the pearls.
One day, a customer comes to the shop. The businessman shows his beautiful pearls to the customer. The customer likes the box with a nice pearl in it so much. He pays a lot of money for it. And the businessman is very happy that someone likes his pearl. However, to his surprise, the customer comes back. He returns the pearl to the businessman.
Oh, the customer really doesn't know what the real treasure is.
解析:
【分析】
首先,梳理图片的逻辑顺序:图1是商人拿着珍珠,图2是精美的盒子,图3是顾客来购买商品,商人递出盒子,图4是盒子里装着珍珠,图5是顾客把珍珠退给商人,留下了盒子。
接下来,结合参考词汇构建故事情节:先承接开头商人用精美盒子包装珍珠的设定,接着写顾客到来,被盒子吸引,支付钱款买下商品,之后顾客返回退还珍珠、留下盒子,最后用题目给出的结尾点明顾客没认清真正宝物的核心。
思考时要保证故事连贯性,合理运用指定参考词汇,贴合图片内容的同时,确保英文表达通顺自然。
【解析】
1. 承接开头引入顾客:One day, a customer comes to the shop. The businessman shows his beautiful pearls to the customer.
2. 描述顾客的购买行为,运用参考词汇pay...for...:The customer likes the box with a nice pearl in it so much. He pays a lot of money for it. And the businessman is very happy that someone likes his pearl.
3. 推进转折情节,运用参考词汇return:However, to his surprise, the customer comes back. He returns the pearl to the businessman.
4. 用题目给出的结尾收束,点明故事寓意。
【答案】
There is a businessman in the town. He sells pearls. To attract customers, he uses beautiful boxes to pack the pearls.
One day, a customer comes to the shop. The businessman shows his beautiful pearls to the customer. The customer likes the box with a nice pearl in it so much. He pays a lot of money for it. And the businessman is very happy that someone likes his pearl. However, to his surprise, the customer comes back. He returns the pearl to the businessman.
Oh, the customer really doesn't know what the real treasure is.
【知识点】
英语看图写作,记叙文写作,词汇运用
【点评】
这篇小故事紧密贴合图片内容,合理运用了指定参考词汇,情节连贯自然,清晰呈现图片场景的同时,点明了舍本逐末的寓意,英文表达通顺准确。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先,梳理图片的逻辑顺序:图1是商人拿着珍珠,图2是精美的盒子,图3是顾客来购买商品,商人递出盒子,图4是盒子里装着珍珠,图5是顾客把珍珠退给商人,留下了盒子。
接下来,结合参考词汇构建故事情节:先承接开头商人用精美盒子包装珍珠的设定,接着写顾客到来,被盒子吸引,支付钱款买下商品,之后顾客返回退还珍珠、留下盒子,最后用题目给出的结尾点明顾客没认清真正宝物的核心。
思考时要保证故事连贯性,合理运用指定参考词汇,贴合图片内容的同时,确保英文表达通顺自然。
【解析】
1. 承接开头引入顾客:One day, a customer comes to the shop. The businessman shows his beautiful pearls to the customer.
2. 描述顾客的购买行为,运用参考词汇pay...for...:The customer likes the box with a nice pearl in it so much. He pays a lot of money for it. And the businessman is very happy that someone likes his pearl.
3. 推进转折情节,运用参考词汇return:However, to his surprise, the customer comes back. He returns the pearl to the businessman.
4. 用题目给出的结尾收束,点明故事寓意。
【答案】
There is a businessman in the town. He sells pearls. To attract customers, he uses beautiful boxes to pack the pearls.
One day, a customer comes to the shop. The businessman shows his beautiful pearls to the customer. The customer likes the box with a nice pearl in it so much. He pays a lot of money for it. And the businessman is very happy that someone likes his pearl. However, to his surprise, the customer comes back. He returns the pearl to the businessman.
Oh, the customer really doesn't know what the real treasure is.
【知识点】
英语看图写作,记叙文写作,词汇运用
【点评】
这篇小故事紧密贴合图片内容,合理运用了指定参考词汇,情节连贯自然,清晰呈现图片场景的同时,点明了舍本逐末的寓意,英文表达通顺准确。
【难度系数】
0.6