实战演练
假设你是Daniel，你的英国笔友John计划来你的家乡盐城游玩，并给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡盐城。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信。
How are you? Glad to hear from you. I am planning my trip to China these days. I’m thinking about travelling to your hometown—Yancheng. I have some questions here. Would you please tell me?
1. What do you think of the environment (环境) in your hometown?
2. What are people in your neighbourhood like? Why do you think so?（至少举两个例子）
3. What can I do when I travel in Yancheng?
Please write back.
Best wishes,
【注意】1. 回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
3. 词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Yancheng. It is a good place to visit.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Yancheng!
Best wishes,
Daniel
作业26 Assessment & Further study（单元知识复习）
假设你是Daniel，你的英国笔友John计划来你的家乡盐城游玩，并给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡盐城。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信。
How are you? Glad to hear from you. I am planning my trip to China these days. I’m thinking about travelling to your hometown—Yancheng. I have some questions here. Would you please tell me?
1. What do you think of the environment (环境) in your hometown?
2. What are people in your neighbourhood like? Why do you think so?（至少举两个例子）
3. What can I do when I travel in Yancheng?
Please write back.
Best wishes,
【注意】1. 回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
3. 词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Yancheng. It is a good place to visit.
Yancheng is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. There are many lakes. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean.
The people in Yancheng are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents.
What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand.
If you come to Yancheng, you can go to the Jinsha Lake to see the biggest freshwater beach in China.
I believe that you will have a great time in playing with the sand.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Yancheng!
Best wishes,
Daniel
作业26 Assessment & Further study（单元知识复习）
答案：实战演练
One possible version
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown-Yancheng. It is a good place to visit.
Yancheng is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. There are many lakes. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean.
The people in Yancheng are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand.
If you come to Yancheng, you can go to the Jinsha Lake to see the biggest freshwater beach in China. I believe that you will have a great time in playing with the sand.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Yancheng!
Best wishes,
Daniel
One possible version
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown-Yancheng. It is a good place to visit.
Yancheng is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. There are many lakes. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean.
The people in Yancheng are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand.
If you come to Yancheng, you can go to the Jinsha Lake to see the biggest freshwater beach in China. I believe that you will have a great time in playing with the sand.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Yancheng!
Best wishes,
Daniel
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇回复类英语电子邮件写作，解题时首先要明确需要完整覆盖John提出的三个全部问题：首先第一步先回应第一个问题，介绍盐城的环境特点，突出城市干净、绿化充足、生态宜居的属性；第二步回应邻里相关的问题，先点明邻里的整体特质，再按照要求举出至少两个生活化的真实例子支撑观点，让内容更饱满；第三步介绍来盐城旅行可以体验的特色项目，贴合盐城本地的景点特色即可。写作过程中要注意控制总词数，不能出现真实人名、校名，保证语句通顺连贯，逻辑清晰。
【解析】
1. 文体与时态确定：本文是给笔友的回信，属于非正式书信，整体以一般现在时为主，使用第一人称叙事，第二人称和对方互动即可。
2. 逐一落实写作要点：
① 介绍家乡环境：点明盐城是江苏的美丽城市，河湖众多，街道两侧绿树成荫，整体干净整洁，生态环境十分舒适。
② 介绍邻里特质：先总述邻里都友善热心，再举两个具体实例：比如忘带钥匙的时候，邻居会邀请我去他家等父母；没时间遛狗的时候，热心的邻居也会主动帮忙，符合题目至少两个例子的要求。
③ 介绍旅行可体验的项目：推荐对方去金沙湖游玩，体验国内最大的淡水沙滩，玩沙戏水，也可搭配本地特色景点、美食相关的内容丰富表达。
3. 最后衔接好题目给出的首尾句，调整语句的衔接流畅度，检查有没有遗漏要点、有没有出现违规的真实信息，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown-Yancheng. It is a good place to visit.
Yancheng is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. There are many lakes. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean.
The people in Yancheng are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand.
If you come to Yancheng, you can go to the Jinsha Lake to see the biggest freshwater beach in China. I believe that you will have a great time in playing with the sand.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Yancheng!
Best wishes,
Daniel
【知识点】
英文书信写作
要点类作文写作
一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的提纲类应用文写作，所有写作要点都已经明确给出，额外的举例要求引导学生结合生活细节丰富内容，既考察学生的基础英语语句组织能力，也能让学生结合实际生活输出内容，只要不遗漏三个核心要点，举例符合逻辑，基本都能拿到合格以上的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇回复类英语电子邮件写作，解题时首先要明确需要完整覆盖John提出的三个全部问题：首先第一步先回应第一个问题，介绍盐城的环境特点，突出城市干净、绿化充足、生态宜居的属性；第二步回应邻里相关的问题，先点明邻里的整体特质，再按照要求举出至少两个生活化的真实例子支撑观点，让内容更饱满；第三步介绍来盐城旅行可以体验的特色项目，贴合盐城本地的景点特色即可。写作过程中要注意控制总词数，不能出现真实人名、校名，保证语句通顺连贯，逻辑清晰。
【解析】
1. 文体与时态确定：本文是给笔友的回信，属于非正式书信，整体以一般现在时为主，使用第一人称叙事，第二人称和对方互动即可。
2. 逐一落实写作要点：
① 介绍家乡环境：点明盐城是江苏的美丽城市，河湖众多，街道两侧绿树成荫，整体干净整洁，生态环境十分舒适。
② 介绍邻里特质：先总述邻里都友善热心，再举两个具体实例：比如忘带钥匙的时候，邻居会邀请我去他家等父母；没时间遛狗的时候，热心的邻居也会主动帮忙，符合题目至少两个例子的要求。
③ 介绍旅行可体验的项目：推荐对方去金沙湖游玩，体验国内最大的淡水沙滩，玩沙戏水，也可搭配本地特色景点、美食相关的内容丰富表达。
3. 最后衔接好题目给出的首尾句，调整语句的衔接流畅度，检查有没有遗漏要点、有没有出现违规的真实信息，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown-Yancheng. It is a good place to visit.
Yancheng is a beautiful city in Jiangsu. There are many lakes. Green trees are on each side of the city streets, which makes the whole city green and clean.
The people in Yancheng are nice. My neighbours are friendly and helpful. If I forget my keys, Uncle Ming, one of my neighbours, will invite me to his house to wait for my parents. What's more, if I have no time to walk my dog, there will be warm-hearted neighbours to give me a hand.
If you come to Yancheng, you can go to the Jinsha Lake to see the biggest freshwater beach in China. I believe that you will have a great time in playing with the sand.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Yancheng!
Best wishes,
Daniel
【知识点】
英文书信写作
要点类作文写作
一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的提纲类应用文写作，所有写作要点都已经明确给出，额外的举例要求引导学生结合生活细节丰富内容，既考察学生的基础英语语句组织能力，也能让学生结合实际生活输出内容，只要不遗漏三个核心要点，举例符合逻辑，基本都能拿到合格以上的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7