Ⅶ. 书面表达(满分19分)
假设你的家乡在政府的帮助下,坚持创建美丽新农村,近几年发生了巨大的变化。请以"The Changes in My Hometown"为题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文(开头已给出,不计入总词数),描述你的家乡从过去到现在的变化以及你对未来的期望。
The Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
假设你的家乡在政府的帮助下,坚持创建美丽新农村,近几年发生了巨大的变化。请以"The Changes in My Hometown"为题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文(开头已给出,不计入总词数),描述你的家乡从过去到现在的变化以及你对未来的期望。
The Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
答案：One possible version：
The Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old, with rubbish everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown.
Now, with the help of the government, great changes have taken place. People have grown many flowers and trees. It has become cleaner and cleaner. Many people have moved into bigger and brighter new houses. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.
I hope my hometown will always stay clean and beautiful, so more people will be willing to come back home and build our hometown together.
思路梳理 总体分析：①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主，适当使用现在完成时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
写作步骤：第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍家乡过去与现在的不同，并谈谈自己的感受。第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
The Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old, with rubbish everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown.
Now, with the help of the government, great changes have taken place. People have grown many flowers and trees. It has become cleaner and cleaner. Many people have moved into bigger and brighter new houses. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.
I hope my hometown will always stay clean and beautiful, so more people will be willing to come back home and build our hometown together.
思路梳理 总体分析：①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主，适当使用现在完成时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
写作步骤：第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍家乡过去与现在的不同，并谈谈自己的感受。第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
解析：
【分析】
首先审题明确这是一篇家乡变化主题的书面表达，需涵盖过去面貌、现在变化、未来期望三个核心要点。第一步确定时态：描述过去用一般过去时，展现现在变化结合现在完成时与一般现在时，表达期望用一般将来时。第二步搭建结构：依托给定开头，先写过去家乡的贫困与环境脏乱，再借助“政府帮助”过渡到现在环境、住房、生活水平及旅游业的改善，最后抒发对家乡未来的美好期许。第三步组织语言时，注意衔接自然，控制词数在要求范围内，确保要点无遗漏。
【解析】
1. 承接开头：直接围绕“家乡变化”展开写作，无需额外引入。
2. 描绘过去：使用一般过去时，从经济、居住环境、人气等角度刻画落后状态，如“In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old, with rubbish everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown.”
3. 展现现在：以“with the help of the government”点明变化动因，结合现在完成时和一般现在时，从环境美化、住房升级、生活水平提升、旅游业发展等方面呈现变化，如“Now, with the help of the government, great changes have taken place. People have grown many flowers and trees. It has become cleaner and cleaner. Many people have moved into bigger and brighter new houses. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.”
4. 表达期望：用一般将来时传递对家乡未来的期许，如“I hope my hometown will always stay clean and beautiful, so more people will be willing to come back home and build our hometown together.”
5. 整体逻辑连贯，词数符合要求，要点完整。
【答案】
One possible version：
The Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old, with rubbish everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown.
Now, with the help of the government, great changes have taken place. People have grown many flowers and trees. It has become cleaner and cleaner. Many people have moved into bigger and brighter new houses. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.
I hope my hometown will always stay clean and beautiful, so more people will be willing to come back home and build our hometown together.
【知识点】
1. 时态综合运用
2. 话题类书面表达
3. 记叙文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，按照“过去-现在-未来”的顺序层层推进，逻辑连贯。时态使用精准，不同时段对应合适的时态，准确传递信息。内容紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖家乡变化的原因、具体表现及未来期望，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先审题明确这是一篇家乡变化主题的书面表达，需涵盖过去面貌、现在变化、未来期望三个核心要点。第一步确定时态：描述过去用一般过去时，展现现在变化结合现在完成时与一般现在时，表达期望用一般将来时。第二步搭建结构：依托给定开头，先写过去家乡的贫困与环境脏乱，再借助“政府帮助”过渡到现在环境、住房、生活水平及旅游业的改善，最后抒发对家乡未来的美好期许。第三步组织语言时，注意衔接自然，控制词数在要求范围内，确保要点无遗漏。
【解析】
1. 承接开头：直接围绕“家乡变化”展开写作，无需额外引入。
2. 描绘过去：使用一般过去时，从经济、居住环境、人气等角度刻画落后状态，如“In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old, with rubbish everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown.”
3. 展现现在：以“with the help of the government”点明变化动因，结合现在完成时和一般现在时，从环境美化、住房升级、生活水平提升、旅游业发展等方面呈现变化，如“Now, with the help of the government, great changes have taken place. People have grown many flowers and trees. It has become cleaner and cleaner. Many people have moved into bigger and brighter new houses. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.”
4. 表达期望：用一般将来时传递对家乡未来的期许，如“I hope my hometown will always stay clean and beautiful, so more people will be willing to come back home and build our hometown together.”
5. 整体逻辑连贯，词数符合要求，要点完整。
【答案】
One possible version：
The Changes in My Hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old, with rubbish everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown.
Now, with the help of the government, great changes have taken place. People have grown many flowers and trees. It has become cleaner and cleaner. Many people have moved into bigger and brighter new houses. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.
I hope my hometown will always stay clean and beautiful, so more people will be willing to come back home and build our hometown together.
【知识点】
1. 时态综合运用
2. 话题类书面表达
3. 记叙文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，按照“过去-现在-未来”的顺序层层推进，逻辑连贯。时态使用精准，不同时段对应合适的时态，准确传递信息。内容紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖家乡变化的原因、具体表现及未来期望，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.7