主题写作提优
主题分析
同学们，新的学期又开始啦！本单元我们学习了一些形容词，还学习了用“There be...”句型表达某处有某物。让我们用这些词汇和句型来介绍一下我们的教室吧！
思路点拨
注意：1. 描述物品时需确定主语是可数名词单数、不可数名词还是可数名词复数。
2. 这类短文的时态通常用一般现在时。
佳作欣赏
My classroom
Welcome to my classroom! It is big and bright.
There is a large blackboard in the front of the classroom. It is very clean. There is a yellow teacher's desk near the blackboard. There are many desks and chairs in the room. They are nice. There are some beautiful pictures on the wall. They are colourful and fun.
I like my classroom! What about your classroom? Do you like it?
小试身手
同学们，你的教室是什么样的？请你也来介绍一下吧！
主题分析
同学们，新的学期又开始啦！本单元我们学习了一些形容词，还学习了用“There be...”句型表达某处有某物。让我们用这些词汇和句型来介绍一下我们的教室吧！
思路点拨
注意：1. 描述物品时需确定主语是可数名词单数、不可数名词还是可数名词复数。
2. 这类短文的时态通常用一般现在时。
佳作欣赏
My classroom
Welcome to my classroom! It is big and bright.
There is a large blackboard in the front of the classroom. It is very clean. There is a yellow teacher's desk near the blackboard. There are many desks and chairs in the room. They are nice. There are some beautiful pictures on the wall. They are colourful and fun.
I like my classroom! What about your classroom? Do you like it?
小试身手
同学们，你的教室是什么样的？请你也来介绍一下吧！
解
主题写作提优
One possible version:
My classroom
My classroom is big and bright. Let me tell you about it.
There are forty desks and chairs in it. There is a blackboard in the front of the classroom. There are some beautiful pictures on the wall. There is also a bookshelf in the corner, and there are many interesting books on it.
I like my classroom very much.
主题写作提优
One possible version:
My classroom
My classroom is big and bright. Let me tell you about it.
There are forty desks and chairs in it. There is a blackboard in the front of the classroom. There are some beautiful pictures on the wall. There is also a bookshelf in the corner, and there are many interesting books on it.
I like my classroom very much.
答案：解
主题写作提优
One possible version:
My classroom
My classroom is big and bright. Let me tell you about it.
There are forty desks and chairs in it. There is a blackboard in the front of the classroom. There are some beautiful pictures on the wall. There is also a bookshelf in the corner, and there are many interesting books on it.
I like my classroom very much.
主题写作提优
One possible version:
My classroom
My classroom is big and bright. Let me tell you about it.
There are forty desks and chairs in it. There is a blackboard in the front of the classroom. There are some beautiful pictures on the wall. There is also a bookshelf in the corner, and there are many interesting books on it.
I like my classroom very much.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇小学英语主题写作题，我们可以按照题目给出的思维导图三步构思：第一步先写开头，用"My classroom is..."的句式从整体上描述教室的外观特征，比如大小、明亮度这类直观特点，直接点明写作主题；第二步写主体中间段，要牢记there be句型的就近原则，单数/不可数名词搭配there is，可数名词复数搭配there are，按空间顺序依次介绍教室内的桌椅、黑板、墙面装饰等陈设，同时给物品搭配合适的形容词让描述更生动；第三步写结尾，用"I like my classroom..."的句式直接抒发对教室的喜爱之情，全程使用要求的一般现在时，避免复杂句式，保证语句通顺符合语法规则即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：首先用整体描述句引出主题，说明教室的整体特点，自然过渡到后续的细节介绍。
2. 主体细节描写：按照从整体到局部的空间顺序，依次用there be句型介绍教室内的各类物品，注意主谓一致，给每个物品搭配对应的形容词修饰，让内容更丰富。
3. 收尾抒情：直接表达自己对教室的喜爱，完成整篇短文的结构闭环，全文保持一般现在时，没有多余的错误表达。
【答案】
My classroom
My classroom is big and bright. Let me tell you about it.
There are forty desks and chairs in it. There is a blackboard in the front of the classroom. There are some beautiful pictures on the wall. There is also a bookshelf in the corner, and there are many interesting books on it.
I like my classroom very much.
【知识点】
there be句型，一般现在时，景物描写
【点评】
这篇参考习作完全贴合题目给出的写作框架，结构清晰完整，开篇整体介绍教室特征，主体部分正确使用there be句型完成陈设描写，搭配的形容词让内容生动具体，结尾自然抒发真情实感，句式简单规范，完全符合小学阶段该单元的写作能力要求，是非常好的仿写范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇小学英语主题写作题，我们可以按照题目给出的思维导图三步构思：第一步先写开头，用"My classroom is..."的句式从整体上描述教室的外观特征，比如大小、明亮度这类直观特点，直接点明写作主题；第二步写主体中间段，要牢记there be句型的就近原则，单数/不可数名词搭配there is，可数名词复数搭配there are，按空间顺序依次介绍教室内的桌椅、黑板、墙面装饰等陈设，同时给物品搭配合适的形容词让描述更生动；第三步写结尾，用"I like my classroom..."的句式直接抒发对教室的喜爱之情，全程使用要求的一般现在时，避免复杂句式，保证语句通顺符合语法规则即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：首先用整体描述句引出主题，说明教室的整体特点，自然过渡到后续的细节介绍。
2. 主体细节描写：按照从整体到局部的空间顺序，依次用there be句型介绍教室内的各类物品，注意主谓一致，给每个物品搭配对应的形容词修饰，让内容更丰富。
3. 收尾抒情：直接表达自己对教室的喜爱，完成整篇短文的结构闭环，全文保持一般现在时，没有多余的错误表达。
【答案】
My classroom
My classroom is big and bright. Let me tell you about it.
There are forty desks and chairs in it. There is a blackboard in the front of the classroom. There are some beautiful pictures on the wall. There is also a bookshelf in the corner, and there are many interesting books on it.
I like my classroom very much.
【知识点】
there be句型，一般现在时，景物描写
【点评】
这篇参考习作完全贴合题目给出的写作框架，结构清晰完整，开篇整体介绍教室特征，主体部分正确使用there be句型完成陈设描写，搭配的形容词让内容生动具体，结尾自然抒发真情实感，句式简单规范，完全符合小学阶段该单元的写作能力要求，是非常好的仿写范例。
【难度系数】
0.6