同学们，我们每个人都应该遵守交通规则。那么你知道哪些交通规则呢？请你想一想，以“Traffic rules”为题来写一写。
要求：条理清晰，语意连贯，语句通顺；书写规范，不少于 50 个词。
Traffic rules
要求：条理清晰，语意连贯，语句通顺；书写规范，不少于 50 个词。
Traffic rules
There are many traffic rules on the road.
When we want to cross a road, we should look for a zebra crossing and look at the traffic lights. The red man means we must stop. The yellow man means we should slow down and wait. The green man means we can go. If we can't find a zebra crossing around us, we can wait on the pavement and look out for cars and bikes. We must look left first, then right and then left again. After that, we can cross the road. We mustn't play on the road or walk in front of the bus.
Let's follow the traffic rules to keep safe.
答案：主题写作提优
Traffic rules
There are many traffic rules on the road.
When we want to cross a road, we should look for a zebra crossing and look at the traffic lights. The red man means we must stop. The yellow man means we should slow down and wait. The green man means we can go. If we can't find a zebra crossing around us, we can wait on the pavement and look out for cars and bikes. We must look left first, then right and then left again. After that, we can cross the road. We mustn't play on the road or walk in front of the bus.
Let's follow the traffic rules to keep safe.
（答案不唯一）
Traffic rules
There are many traffic rules on the road.
When we want to cross a road, we should look for a zebra crossing and look at the traffic lights. The red man means we must stop. The yellow man means we should slow down and wait. The green man means we can go. If we can't find a zebra crossing around us, we can wait on the pavement and look out for cars and bikes. We must look left first, then right and then left again. After that, we can cross the road. We mustn't play on the road or walk in front of the bus.
Let's follow the traffic rules to keep safe.
（答案不唯一）
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇以“Traffic rules”为主题的说明文写作，核心是介绍交通规则，帮助读者明确如何遵守规则保障安全。解题思路如下：第一步，开头总起，点明道路上存在诸多交通规则，引出下文；第二步，详细阐述过马路的核心规则，先讲走斑马线、看红绿灯的具体要求，再补充没有斑马线时的正确做法；第三步，明确指出禁止的危险行为；最后结尾呼吁大家遵守规则，升华主题。写作时要注意条理清晰，语句连贯，确保满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头引入：用“There are many traffic rules on the road.”直接点明主题，总起全文，引出对具体交通规则的介绍。
2. 详细说明过马路规范：
讲解走斑马线与看红绿灯的要求：“When we want to cross a road, we should look for a zebra crossing and look at the traffic lights. The red man means we must stop. The yellow man means we should slow down and wait. The green man means we can go.”清晰解释不同信号灯对应的行为准则。
补充无斑马线时的做法：“If we can't find a zebra crossing around us, we can wait on the pavement and look out for cars and bikes. We must look left first, then right and then left again. After that, we can cross the road.”覆盖特殊场景，让内容更全面。
3. 强调禁止行为：“We mustn't play on the road or walk in front of the bus.”明确指出违规危险行为，强化规则意识。
4. 结尾呼吁：“Let's follow the traffic rules to keep safe.”总结全文，传递遵守规则的意义，使文章结构完整。
【答案】
Traffic rules
There are many traffic rules on the road.
When we want to cross a road, we should look for a zebra crossing and look at the traffic lights. The red man means we must stop. The yellow man means we should slow down and wait. The green man means we can go. If we can't find a zebra crossing around us, we can wait on the pavement and look out for cars and bikes. We must look left first, then right and then left again. After that, we can cross the road. We mustn't play on the road or walk in front of the bus.
Let's follow the traffic rules to keep safe.
（答案不唯一）
【知识点】
1. 交通场景英语表达
2. 情态动词表建议/禁止
3. 说明文写作结构
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，从总起介绍到具体规则说明，再到结尾呼吁，逻辑连贯。内容覆盖了过马路的核心规则，包括信号灯识别、斑马线使用、特殊情况处理及危险行为规避，语言准确规范，符合题目“条理清晰、语意连贯”的要求，能有效引导读者了解并遵守交通规则。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇以“Traffic rules”为主题的说明文写作，核心是介绍交通规则，帮助读者明确如何遵守规则保障安全。解题思路如下：第一步，开头总起，点明道路上存在诸多交通规则，引出下文；第二步，详细阐述过马路的核心规则，先讲走斑马线、看红绿灯的具体要求，再补充没有斑马线时的正确做法；第三步，明确指出禁止的危险行为；最后结尾呼吁大家遵守规则，升华主题。写作时要注意条理清晰，语句连贯，确保满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头引入：用“There are many traffic rules on the road.”直接点明主题，总起全文，引出对具体交通规则的介绍。
2. 详细说明过马路规范：
讲解走斑马线与看红绿灯的要求：“When we want to cross a road, we should look for a zebra crossing and look at the traffic lights. The red man means we must stop. The yellow man means we should slow down and wait. The green man means we can go.”清晰解释不同信号灯对应的行为准则。
补充无斑马线时的做法：“If we can't find a zebra crossing around us, we can wait on the pavement and look out for cars and bikes. We must look left first, then right and then left again. After that, we can cross the road.”覆盖特殊场景，让内容更全面。
3. 强调禁止行为：“We mustn't play on the road or walk in front of the bus.”明确指出违规危险行为，强化规则意识。
4. 结尾呼吁：“Let's follow the traffic rules to keep safe.”总结全文，传递遵守规则的意义，使文章结构完整。
【答案】
Traffic rules
There are many traffic rules on the road.
When we want to cross a road, we should look for a zebra crossing and look at the traffic lights. The red man means we must stop. The yellow man means we should slow down and wait. The green man means we can go. If we can't find a zebra crossing around us, we can wait on the pavement and look out for cars and bikes. We must look left first, then right and then left again. After that, we can cross the road. We mustn't play on the road or walk in front of the bus.
Let's follow the traffic rules to keep safe.
（答案不唯一）
【知识点】
1. 交通场景英语表达
2. 情态动词表建议/禁止
3. 说明文写作结构
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰，从总起介绍到具体规则说明，再到结尾呼吁，逻辑连贯。内容覆盖了过马路的核心规则，包括信号灯识别、斑马线使用、特殊情况处理及危险行为规避，语言准确规范，符合题目“条理清晰、语意连贯”的要求，能有效引导读者了解并遵守交通规则。
【难度系数】
0.6