典型例题
阳光中学七年级(6)班有自己的网络论坛,在论坛上,大家可以畅所欲言。本周大家谈论的主题是"What can we do for our neighbourhood?",大家谈论了自己家所在街区的美好与不足,尤其是对卫生问题深表担忧。
假如你住在长江路上的城市花园小区,请你写一篇70词左右的英语短文参与讨论。要求涵盖以下三个要点:
1. What do you think of your neighbourhood?
2. What do you like and dislike about it?
3. What will you do to make it more beautiful?
参考词组:drop litter 乱扔垃圾
思路点拨
本篇文章的主题是谈论自己所在小区的美好与不足,并提出自己的看法,是夹叙夹议文。本文主要介绍自己对小区的看法以及自己的计划,所以应以第一人称为主;介绍小区的现状时应用一般现在时,介绍自己未来的计划时应用一般将来时。第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己对于小区喜欢和不喜欢的方面;第三段介绍自己计划为小区做什么。
范文欣赏
I live in City Garden on Changjiang Road. I
think our neighbourhood is modern and
wonderful.
There are supermarkets, restaurants, a
school and a hospital in it. People here are
helpful. I like living in a neighbourhood like
that, but I just think the place is a little dirty.
I think I can do something to help. I will
never drop litter everywhere, and I will clean up
the streets in my free time. I am sure if
everyone here does something for our
neighbourhood, it will be a more beautiful
place.
阳光中学七年级(6)班有自己的网络论坛,在论坛上,大家可以畅所欲言。本周大家谈论的主题是"What can we do for our neighbourhood?",大家谈论了自己家所在街区的美好与不足,尤其是对卫生问题深表担忧。
假如你住在长江路上的城市花园小区,请你写一篇70词左右的英语短文参与讨论。要求涵盖以下三个要点:
1. What do you think of your neighbourhood?
2. What do you like and dislike about it?
3. What will you do to make it more beautiful?
参考词组:drop litter 乱扔垃圾
思路点拨
本篇文章的主题是谈论自己所在小区的美好与不足,并提出自己的看法,是夹叙夹议文。本文主要介绍自己对小区的看法以及自己的计划,所以应以第一人称为主;介绍小区的现状时应用一般现在时,介绍自己未来的计划时应用一般将来时。第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己对于小区喜欢和不喜欢的方面;第三段介绍自己计划为小区做什么。
范文欣赏
I live in City Garden on Changjiang Road. I
think our neighbourhood is modern and
wonderful.
There are supermarkets, restaurants, a
school and a hospital in it. People here are
helpful. I like living in a neighbourhood like
that, but I just think the place is a little dirty.
I think I can do something to help. I will
never drop litter everywhere, and I will clean up
the streets in my free time. I am sure if
everyone here does something for our
neighbourhood, it will be a more beautiful
place.
答案：I live in City Garden on Changjiang Road. I think our neighbourhood is modern and wonderful.
There are supermarkets, restaurants, a school and a hospital in it. People here are helpful. I like living in a neighbourhood like that, but I just think the place is a little dirty.
I think I can do something to help. I will never drop litter everywhere, and I will clean up the streets in my free time. I am sure if everyone here does something for our neighbourhood, it will be a more beautiful place.
There are supermarkets, restaurants, a school and a hospital in it. People here are helpful. I like living in a neighbourhood like that, but I just think the place is a little dirty.
I think I can do something to help. I will never drop litter everywhere, and I will clean up the streets in my free time. I am sure if everyone here does something for our neighbourhood, it will be a more beautiful place.
解析：
这是一篇夹叙夹议的英语短文写作，需以第一人称为主，介绍街区现状用一般现在时，阐述未来计划用一般将来时。写作需涵盖对所在街区的评价、喜爱与不满之处、改善街区的具体行动这三个要点，围绕主题“What can we do for our neighbourhood?”展开，注意控制词数在70词左右。
根据下表提供的信息,完成关于该俱乐部活动的通知,词数70左右。
This week's "Helping Hands" meeting is
coming soon. We are going to have it
This week's "Helping Hands" meeting is
coming soon. We are going to have it
答案：One possible version:
This week's "helping hands" meeting is coming soon.
We are going to have it this Saturday morning at our
community centre. We are ready to help you from 7:00 a. m.
to 11:30 a. m.
If you don't know how to keep slim, you can come and
talk about it with Mrs Lin. She is a dietician. And Mrs Lee
will be ready to tell you what to wear because she is a good
designer. If you are interested in English, you can come and
meet John Smith. He is an American teacher and he is good
at teaching English.
This week's "helping hands" meeting is coming soon.
We are going to have it this Saturday morning at our
community centre. We are ready to help you from 7:00 a. m.
to 11:30 a. m.
If you don't know how to keep slim, you can come and
talk about it with Mrs Lin. She is a dietician. And Mrs Lee
will be ready to tell you what to wear because she is a good
designer. If you are interested in English, you can come and
meet John Smith. He is an American teacher and he is good
at teaching English.
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确任务是根据表格信息完成“Helping Hands”俱乐部活动的通知，要涵盖表格里的时间、地点以及三位成员的服务内容。解题思路如下：
1. 第一步，先补充活动的时间和地点：根据表格，时间是周六上午7:00到11:30，地点是社区中心，把这些信息用通顺的英语表达出来，承接已给出的开头句子。
2. 第二步，依次介绍三位成员的身份和能提供的帮助：分别对应营养师Mrs Lin帮保持苗条、设计师Mrs Lee指导穿搭、美国老师John Smith擅长教英语，每个部分用简洁的句子说明，注意衔接自然，符合通知的语气。
3. 最后检查内容是否完整，词数是否符合要求，语言是否通顺，时态是否正确，用一般将来时，因为是即将举办的活动。
【解析】
1. 补充活动的时间与地点：结合表格信息，写出“We are going to have it this Saturday morning at our community centre. We are ready to help you from 7:00 a. m. to 11:30 a. m.”，明确活动的基本信息，让读者清晰知晓活动的时间和地点。
2. 分别介绍三位成员的服务：
针对Mrs Lin，说明她的营养师身份和帮助保持苗条的服务，写成“If you don't know how to keep slim, you can come and talk about it with Mrs Lin. She is a dietician.”
针对Mrs Lee，说明她的设计师身份和指导穿搭的服务，写成“And Mrs Lee will be ready to tell you what to wear because she is a good designer.”
针对John Smith，说明他的美国教师身份和擅长教英语的服务，写成“If you are interested in English, you can come and meet John Smith. He is an American teacher and he is good at teaching English.”
3. 整合所有内容，确保语句连贯，符合通知正式且友好的语气，同时覆盖表格所有信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
This week's "helping hands" meeting is coming soon.
We are going to have it this Saturday morning at our
community centre. We are ready to help you from 7:00 a. m.
to 11:30 a. m.
If you don't know how to keep slim, you can come and
talk about it with Mrs Lin. She is a dietician. And Mrs Lee
will be ready to tell you what to wear because she is a good
designer. If you are interested in English, you can come and
meet John Smith. He is an American teacher and he is good
at teaching English.
【知识点】
通知写作、信息整合、一般将来时运用
【点评】
本题考查学生提取表格信息并转化为英语通知的能力，要求学生掌握通知的基本格式和常用表达，同时能准确运用一般将来时描述即将开展的活动，既考查信息提取能力，也考查英语写作的综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要明确任务是根据表格信息完成“Helping Hands”俱乐部活动的通知，要涵盖表格里的时间、地点以及三位成员的服务内容。解题思路如下：
1. 第一步，先补充活动的时间和地点：根据表格，时间是周六上午7:00到11:30，地点是社区中心，把这些信息用通顺的英语表达出来，承接已给出的开头句子。
2. 第二步，依次介绍三位成员的身份和能提供的帮助：分别对应营养师Mrs Lin帮保持苗条、设计师Mrs Lee指导穿搭、美国老师John Smith擅长教英语，每个部分用简洁的句子说明，注意衔接自然，符合通知的语气。
3. 最后检查内容是否完整，词数是否符合要求，语言是否通顺，时态是否正确，用一般将来时，因为是即将举办的活动。
【解析】
1. 补充活动的时间与地点：结合表格信息，写出“We are going to have it this Saturday morning at our community centre. We are ready to help you from 7:00 a. m. to 11:30 a. m.”，明确活动的基本信息，让读者清晰知晓活动的时间和地点。
2. 分别介绍三位成员的服务：
针对Mrs Lin，说明她的营养师身份和帮助保持苗条的服务，写成“If you don't know how to keep slim, you can come and talk about it with Mrs Lin. She is a dietician.”
针对Mrs Lee，说明她的设计师身份和指导穿搭的服务，写成“And Mrs Lee will be ready to tell you what to wear because she is a good designer.”
针对John Smith，说明他的美国教师身份和擅长教英语的服务，写成“If you are interested in English, you can come and meet John Smith. He is an American teacher and he is good at teaching English.”
3. 整合所有内容，确保语句连贯，符合通知正式且友好的语气，同时覆盖表格所有信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
This week's "helping hands" meeting is coming soon.
We are going to have it this Saturday morning at our
community centre. We are ready to help you from 7:00 a. m.
to 11:30 a. m.
If you don't know how to keep slim, you can come and
talk about it with Mrs Lin. She is a dietician. And Mrs Lee
will be ready to tell you what to wear because she is a good
designer. If you are interested in English, you can come and
meet John Smith. He is an American teacher and he is good
at teaching English.
【知识点】
通知写作、信息整合、一般将来时运用
【点评】
本题考查学生提取表格信息并转化为英语通知的能力，要求学生掌握通知的基本格式和常用表达，同时能准确运用一般将来时描述即将开展的活动，既考查信息提取能力，也考查英语写作的综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.7