典型例题
假如你是李华,你的笔友 Peter 想了解中国的传统手工艺术。请用英语给他写一封80词左右的邮件,向他介绍一种你最喜欢的中国传统手工艺术形式,对其做简要描述,并谈谈你最喜欢它的原因。
提示词语: paper-cutting, sky lantern,
history, luck, wishes
提示问题: · What is your favourite
traditional Chinese art form? Please describe it.
· Why is it your favourite?
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
1. 体裁:本文要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的一种传统手工艺术形式,应是一篇说明文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏"要点"中你喜欢的原因,注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,由于短文开头已给出,故接下来介绍写邮件的目的;第二步,具体介绍自己最喜欢的中国传统艺术形式——孔明灯;第三步,介绍喜欢
孔明灯的原因。
范文欣赏
Dear Peter,
How is it going? Today I'd like to tell you
something about sky lanterns.
My favourite traditional Chinese art is sky
lanterns. We use colourful paper, bamboo and
candles to make them. When lit, they fly into
the sky like small stars.
People write wishes on the lanterns before
releasing them. I love them because they're
beautiful and meaningful. My wish last year was
"good health for my family". Watching my
lantern fly away made me happy and hopeful.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的笔友 Peter 想了解中国的传统手工艺术。请用英语给他写一封80词左右的邮件,向他介绍一种你最喜欢的中国传统手工艺术形式,对其做简要描述,并谈谈你最喜欢它的原因。
提示词语: paper-cutting, sky lantern,
history, luck, wishes
提示问题: · What is your favourite
traditional Chinese art form? Please describe it.
· Why is it your favourite?
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
1. 体裁:本文要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的一种传统手工艺术形式,应是一篇说明文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏"要点"中你喜欢的原因,注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步,由于短文开头已给出,故接下来介绍写邮件的目的;第二步,具体介绍自己最喜欢的中国传统艺术形式——孔明灯;第三步,介绍喜欢
孔明灯的原因。
范文欣赏
Dear Peter,
How is it going? Today I'd like to tell you
something about sky lanterns.
My favourite traditional Chinese art is sky
lanterns. We use colourful paper, bamboo and
candles to make them. When lit, they fly into
the sky like small stars.
People write wishes on the lanterns before
releasing them. I love them because they're
beautiful and meaningful. My wish last year was
"good health for my family". Watching my
lantern fly away made me happy and hopeful.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：Today I'd like to tell you something about sky lanterns.
My favourite traditional Chinese art is sky lanterns. We use colourful paper, bamboo and candles to make them. When lit, they fly into the sky like small stars.
People write wishes on the lanterns before releasing them. I love them because they're beautiful and meaningful. My wish last year was "good health for my family". Watching my lantern fly away made me happy and hopeful.
My favourite traditional Chinese art is sky lanterns. We use colourful paper, bamboo and candles to make them. When lit, they fly into the sky like small stars.
People write wishes on the lanterns before releasing them. I love them because they're beautiful and meaningful. My wish last year was "good health for my family". Watching my lantern fly away made me happy and hopeful.
解析：
本文为说明文体裁的邮件写作，需以一般现在时为主。需完成三个写作任务：点明最喜欢的中国传统手工艺术形式并描述它，说明喜欢该艺术形式的原因。写作时要合理运用提示词，控制词数在80词左右，遵循邮件的正确格式。
1. 你最喜欢的一种艺术形式(如绘画、书法、戏剧、摄影等);2. 讲述一次你与这种艺术形式的难忘经历;3. 你的感受。
写作要求:1. 词数80左右。2. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥。3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。4. 参考词汇:painting 绘画;calligraphy 书法;drama 戏剧;photography 摄影;traditional music 传统音乐。
My Art Story
写作要求:1. 词数80左右。2. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥。3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。4. 参考词汇:painting 绘画;calligraphy 书法;drama 戏剧;photography 摄影;traditional music 传统音乐。
My Art Story
One possible version:
My Art Story
Calligraphy is my favourite art form. But I didn't like it
years ago.
One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach
me calligraphy, but I didn't agree. My father didn't say a
word. He put a piece of paper on the desk and picked up a
Chinese writing brush. I could feel something amazing was
形容词修饰不定代词时要后置
happening. Shortly after, a special smell of ink filled the
room. Calligraphy attracted me at that moment.
After that, I started to learn calligraphy from my father.
I like it very much because it can always bring me happiness
and peace.
My Art Story
Calligraphy is my favourite art form. But I didn't like it
years ago.
One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach
me calligraphy, but I didn't agree. My father didn't say a
word. He put a piece of paper on the desk and picked up a
Chinese writing brush. I could feel something amazing was
形容词修饰不定代词时要后置
happening. Shortly after, a special smell of ink filled the
room. Calligraphy attracted me at that moment.
After that, I started to learn calligraphy from my father.
I like it very much because it can always bring me happiness
and peace.
答案：写作能力突破
One possible version:
My Art Story
Calligraphy is my favourite art form. But I didn't like it
years ago.
One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach
me calligraphy, but I didn't agree. My father didn't say a
word. He put a piece of paper on the desk and picked up a
Chinese writing brush. I could feel something amazing was
形容词修饰不定代词时要后置
happening. Shortly after, a special smell of ink filled the
room. Calligraphy attracted me at that moment.
After that, I started to learn calligraphy from my father.
I like it very much because it can always bring me happiness
and peace.
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文要求学生描述一次自己与某种艺术形式的难
忘经历,应是一篇记叙文。②时态:一般现在时和一般过
去时。③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适
当增加细节,完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式;第二步,分享一个
与之相关的故事;第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点短语]
①pick up拿起 ②at that moment就在那时 ③learn sth
from sb向某人学习某物
[高分句型]
①One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach
me calligraphy, but I didn't agree. (含有but的并列句)
②I like it very much because it can always bring me
happiness and peace. (because引导的原因状语从句)
One possible version:
My Art Story
Calligraphy is my favourite art form. But I didn't like it
years ago.
One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach
me calligraphy, but I didn't agree. My father didn't say a
word. He put a piece of paper on the desk and picked up a
Chinese writing brush. I could feel something amazing was
形容词修饰不定代词时要后置
happening. Shortly after, a special smell of ink filled the
room. Calligraphy attracted me at that moment.
After that, I started to learn calligraphy from my father.
I like it very much because it can always bring me happiness
and peace.
思路引导
[总体分析]
①体裁:本文要求学生描述一次自己与某种艺术形式的难
忘经历,应是一篇记叙文。②时态:一般现在时和一般过
去时。③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适
当增加细节,完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式;第二步,分享一个
与之相关的故事;第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点短语]
①pick up拿起 ②at that moment就在那时 ③learn sth
from sb向某人学习某物
[高分句型]
①One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach
me calligraphy, but I didn't agree. (含有but的并列句)
②I like it very much because it can always bring me
happiness and peace. (because引导的原因状语从句)
解析：
【分析】
首先，明确这是一篇记叙文写作题，需覆盖三个核心要点：点明最喜欢的艺术形式、讲述相关难忘经历、表达个人感受。解题时，第一步先选定一种艺术形式（如参考范文中的书法），开篇直接点明；第二步构思难忘经历，要加入具体细节（如炎热夏日、父亲的示范、墨香等）让故事更生动，注意时态切换，讲述经历用一般过去时，表达喜好和感受用一般现在时；第三步结合经历写出感受，说明喜欢这种艺术形式的原因。同时要控制词数在80左右，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接说明最喜欢的艺术形式是书法，同时用转折引出过去的态度，制造小悬念，吸引读者。
2. 讲述经历：选取具体场景（炎热夏日午后），描述父亲示范书法的细节（铺纸、拿毛笔、墨香弥漫），体现自己态度的转变，从抗拒到被吸引，这是经历的核心部分，用一般过去时叙述。
3. 表达感受：说明之后开始向父亲学习书法，用because引导的原因状语从句点明喜欢书法的理由，呼应主题，用一般现在时表达当下的感受。
【答案】
My Art Story
Calligraphy is my favourite art form. But I didn't like it years ago.
One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach me calligraphy, but I didn't agree. My father didn't say a word. He put a piece of paper on the desk and picked up a Chinese writing brush. I could feel something amazing was happening. Shortly after, a special smell of ink filled the room. Calligraphy attracted me at that moment.
After that, I started to learn calligraphy from my father. I like it very much because it can always bring me happiness and peace.
【知识点】
记叙文写作、时态切换运用、原因状语从句
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格按照题目要求完成三个要点，开篇点题，中间经历有具体细节支撑，结尾感受真挚自然。文中运用了“pick up”“at that moment”等亮点短语，还使用了含but的并列句和because引导的原因状语从句，提升了文章的表达水平，符合词数要求，且未出现真实信息，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，明确这是一篇记叙文写作题，需覆盖三个核心要点：点明最喜欢的艺术形式、讲述相关难忘经历、表达个人感受。解题时，第一步先选定一种艺术形式（如参考范文中的书法），开篇直接点明；第二步构思难忘经历，要加入具体细节（如炎热夏日、父亲的示范、墨香等）让故事更生动，注意时态切换，讲述经历用一般过去时，表达喜好和感受用一般现在时；第三步结合经历写出感受，说明喜欢这种艺术形式的原因。同时要控制词数在80左右，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接说明最喜欢的艺术形式是书法，同时用转折引出过去的态度，制造小悬念，吸引读者。
2. 讲述经历：选取具体场景（炎热夏日午后），描述父亲示范书法的细节（铺纸、拿毛笔、墨香弥漫），体现自己态度的转变，从抗拒到被吸引，这是经历的核心部分，用一般过去时叙述。
3. 表达感受：说明之后开始向父亲学习书法，用because引导的原因状语从句点明喜欢书法的理由，呼应主题，用一般现在时表达当下的感受。
【答案】
My Art Story
Calligraphy is my favourite art form. But I didn't like it years ago.
One hot summer afternoon, my father wanted to teach me calligraphy, but I didn't agree. My father didn't say a word. He put a piece of paper on the desk and picked up a Chinese writing brush. I could feel something amazing was happening. Shortly after, a special smell of ink filled the room. Calligraphy attracted me at that moment.
After that, I started to learn calligraphy from my father. I like it very much because it can always bring me happiness and peace.
【知识点】
记叙文写作、时态切换运用、原因状语从句
【点评】
本文结构清晰，严格按照题目要求完成三个要点，开篇点题，中间经历有具体细节支撑，结尾感受真挚自然。文中运用了“pick up”“at that moment”等亮点短语，还使用了含but的并列句和because引导的原因状语从句，提升了文章的表达水平，符合词数要求，且未出现真实信息，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6