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中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家,在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。假如你是李华,请你写一封信,向外国友人 Sam 介绍下面两种传统艺术,要求包含以下要点。

Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
Yours,
Li Hua
中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家,在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。假如你是李华,请你写一封信,向外国友人 Sam 介绍下面两种传统艺术,要求包含以下要点。
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often mean happiness.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often mean happiness.
I think traditional Chinese art forms are precious art treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often mean happiness.
I think traditional Chinese art forms are precious art treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析:
【分析】
这是一篇介绍中国传统艺术的书信写作题,解题思路如下:第一步,先明确写作核心要求:向外国友人Sam完整介绍中国结、剪纸两项传统民间艺术,同时补充对传统艺术的看法和个人期望。第二步,先梳理所有给定的提示信息,先按顺序介绍中国结:依次点明它的属性、制作材料、颜色、造型特点、背后的寓意,保证所有提示点不遗漏。第三步,用过渡句衔接,再介绍剪纸,依次说明它的创作材料、工艺特点、日常用途、承载的寓意。第四步,最后补充符合主题的看法和期望,逻辑上先谈对传统艺术的价值认知,再写合理的期许,整体语气友好自然,符合给外国友人写信的交流语境,最后检查语法和表达通顺度即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 承接题干给出的开头句,首先介绍中国结:点明中国结是中国传统艺术形式之一,依次说明它由丝线制作,通常为红色,造型有花、动物等样式,寓意是为人们带来好运。
2. 使用过渡语衔接,引出第二项传统艺术剪纸:说明剪纸是另一项经典传统艺术,创作只需要纸和剪刀,就可以剪出各式各样的图案,人们通常将剪纸张贴在门、窗等位置,用来传递喜悦的情绪。
3. 最后补充对传统艺术的看法:点明中国传统艺术是非常珍贵的艺术宝藏,承载着深厚的文化底蕴。再补充个人期望:希望越来越多的年轻人喜爱、传承并发扬这些传统艺术,也让更多外国友人了解中国文化。
最终整合出的完整书信内容符合所有要点要求,表达通顺准确。
【答案】
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often mean happiness.
I think traditional Chinese art forms are precious art treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作,传统文化表达,要点整合
【点评】
本题属于基础应用类写作,所有核心要点都给出了明确提示,学生只需要将提示信息准确转化为正确的英文表达,再补充符合主题的观点即可,既考察了学生的英语书面表达能力,也引导学生了解中国传统民间艺术,建立文化自信。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇介绍中国传统艺术的书信写作题,解题思路如下:第一步,先明确写作核心要求:向外国友人Sam完整介绍中国结、剪纸两项传统民间艺术,同时补充对传统艺术的看法和个人期望。第二步,先梳理所有给定的提示信息,先按顺序介绍中国结:依次点明它的属性、制作材料、颜色、造型特点、背后的寓意,保证所有提示点不遗漏。第三步,用过渡句衔接,再介绍剪纸,依次说明它的创作材料、工艺特点、日常用途、承载的寓意。第四步,最后补充符合主题的看法和期望,逻辑上先谈对传统艺术的价值认知,再写合理的期许,整体语气友好自然,符合给外国友人写信的交流语境,最后检查语法和表达通顺度即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 承接题干给出的开头句,首先介绍中国结:点明中国结是中国传统艺术形式之一,依次说明它由丝线制作,通常为红色,造型有花、动物等样式,寓意是为人们带来好运。
2. 使用过渡语衔接,引出第二项传统艺术剪纸:说明剪纸是另一项经典传统艺术,创作只需要纸和剪刀,就可以剪出各式各样的图案,人们通常将剪纸张贴在门、窗等位置,用来传递喜悦的情绪。
3. 最后补充对传统艺术的看法:点明中国传统艺术是非常珍贵的艺术宝藏,承载着深厚的文化底蕴。再补充个人期望:希望越来越多的年轻人喜爱、传承并发扬这些传统艺术,也让更多外国友人了解中国文化。
最终整合出的完整书信内容符合所有要点要求,表达通顺准确。
【答案】
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often mean happiness.
I think traditional Chinese art forms are precious art treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作,传统文化表达,要点整合
【点评】
本题属于基础应用类写作,所有核心要点都给出了明确提示,学生只需要将提示信息准确转化为正确的英文表达,再补充符合主题的观点即可,既考察了学生的英语书面表达能力,也引导学生了解中国传统民间艺术,建立文化自信。
【难度系数】
0.7