七、书面表达(30分)
A. 句子翻译。(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
1. 大学生去农村志愿当老师。
2. 这个男孩让水龙头一直流着水,真是太粗心了。
3. 许多志愿者去帮助贫穷地区的孩子们。
4. 我们买不起这么贵的电脑。
5. 她为向他人伸出援手而感到自豪。
A. 句子翻译。(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
1. 大学生去农村志愿当老师。
2. 这个男孩让水龙头一直流着水,真是太粗心了。
3. 许多志愿者去帮助贫穷地区的孩子们。
4. 我们买不起这么贵的电脑。
5. 她为向他人伸出援手而感到自豪。
答案:七、A. 1. College students go to villages to volunteer as teachers.
2. It's careless of the boy to leave the tap running.
3. Many volunteers went to help the children in poor areas.
4. We can't afford to buy such an expensive computer.
5. She feels proud of giving a helping hand to others.
2. It's careless of the boy to leave the tap running.
3. Many volunteers went to help the children in poor areas.
4. We can't afford to buy such an expensive computer.
5. She feels proud of giving a helping hand to others.
解析:
【分析】
做这类汉译英题目时,首先要先梳理中文句子的核心含义,先确定句子的主语、谓语主干,再判断适配的时态,优先选用符合英语表达习惯的固定短语和句型,避免逐字直译产生中式英语。遇到描述人物品质的评价句优先考虑it作形式主语的常用句型,涉及介词后接动作的情况要注意使用动名词形式,翻译完成后还要检查主谓一致、非谓语形式等细节是否符合语法规则,确保句子通顺准确。
【解析】
1. 先确定主干:主语“大学生”译为College students,“去农村”译为go to villages,用不定式结构表目的“志愿当老师”,volunteer as是固定搭配表示“志愿担任”,因此整句翻译为:College students go to villages to volunteer as teachers.
2. 本句使用固定句型It's + 描述人物品质的形容词 + of sb to do sth,“让某物一直做某事”用固定搭配leave sth doing,“水龙头一直流”译为leave the tap running,因此整句翻译为:It's careless of the boy to leave the tap running.
3. 主干主语“许多志愿者”译为Many volunteers,动作“去帮助”用一般过去时译为went to help,“贫穷地区的孩子们”译为the children in poor areas,用介词短语作后置定语,因此整句翻译为:Many volunteers went to help the children in poor areas.
4. 固定搭配can't afford to do sth表示“负担不起做某事”,“这么贵的电脑”译为such an expensive computer,因此整句翻译为:We can't afford to buy such an expensive computer.
5. 固定搭配feel proud of doing sth表示“为做某事感到自豪”,“向他人伸出援手”译为固定短语give a helping hand to others,介词of后接动名词形式,因此整句翻译为:She feels proud of giving a helping hand to others.
【答案】
1. College students go to villages to volunteer as teachers.
2. It's careless of the boy to leave the tap running.
3. Many volunteers went to help the children in poor areas.
4. We can't afford to buy such an expensive computer.
5. She feels proud of giving a helping hand to others.
【知识点】
1. 英语常用固定短语
2. it作形式主语句型
3. 非谓语动词用法
【点评】
本题属于基础翻译题型,全部选用初中阶段高频考察的核心短语和基础句型,重点检验学生对常用表达的积累情况,提醒学生翻译时不要生硬直译,要贴合英语母语表达逻辑,注意介词后接动名词、it句型中of/for的区分等细节,减少语法失误。
【难度系数】
0.7
做这类汉译英题目时,首先要先梳理中文句子的核心含义,先确定句子的主语、谓语主干,再判断适配的时态,优先选用符合英语表达习惯的固定短语和句型,避免逐字直译产生中式英语。遇到描述人物品质的评价句优先考虑it作形式主语的常用句型,涉及介词后接动作的情况要注意使用动名词形式,翻译完成后还要检查主谓一致、非谓语形式等细节是否符合语法规则,确保句子通顺准确。
【解析】
1. 先确定主干:主语“大学生”译为College students,“去农村”译为go to villages,用不定式结构表目的“志愿当老师”,volunteer as是固定搭配表示“志愿担任”,因此整句翻译为:College students go to villages to volunteer as teachers.
2. 本句使用固定句型It's + 描述人物品质的形容词 + of sb to do sth,“让某物一直做某事”用固定搭配leave sth doing,“水龙头一直流”译为leave the tap running,因此整句翻译为:It's careless of the boy to leave the tap running.
3. 主干主语“许多志愿者”译为Many volunteers,动作“去帮助”用一般过去时译为went to help,“贫穷地区的孩子们”译为the children in poor areas,用介词短语作后置定语,因此整句翻译为:Many volunteers went to help the children in poor areas.
4. 固定搭配can't afford to do sth表示“负担不起做某事”,“这么贵的电脑”译为such an expensive computer,因此整句翻译为:We can't afford to buy such an expensive computer.
5. 固定搭配feel proud of doing sth表示“为做某事感到自豪”,“向他人伸出援手”译为固定短语give a helping hand to others,介词of后接动名词形式,因此整句翻译为:She feels proud of giving a helping hand to others.
【答案】
1. College students go to villages to volunteer as teachers.
2. It's careless of the boy to leave the tap running.
3. Many volunteers went to help the children in poor areas.
4. We can't afford to buy such an expensive computer.
5. She feels proud of giving a helping hand to others.
【知识点】
1. 英语常用固定短语
2. it作形式主语句型
3. 非谓语动词用法
【点评】
本题属于基础翻译题型,全部选用初中阶段高频考察的核心短语和基础句型,重点检验学生对常用表达的积累情况,提醒学生翻译时不要生硬直译,要贴合英语母语表达逻辑,注意介词后接动名词、it句型中of/for的区分等细节,减少语法失误。
【难度系数】
0.7
B. 写作(满分20分)
每年五月的第三个星期日是我国助残日(National Disability Day),某地举行了"关爱残疾孩子,发展特殊教育(special education)"慈善晚会,你作为组织者之一,写了一份英文报告,介绍此次活动。
| 基本信息 | 时间:五月的第三个星期日(助残日)

地点:某剧院
主题:关爱残疾孩子与特殊教育 |
【要求】1. 短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
3. 词数100左右。
每年五月的第三个星期日是我国助残日(National Disability Day),某地举行了"关爱残疾孩子,发展特殊教育(special education)"慈善晚会,你作为组织者之一,写了一份英文报告,介绍此次活动。
| 基本信息 | 时间:五月的第三个星期日(助残日)
地点:某剧院
主题:关爱残疾孩子与特殊教育 |
【要求】1. 短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
3. 词数100左右。
答案:B. One possible version
National Disability Day is on the third Sunday of every May. On that day, we held a charity show at Sunshine Theatre. It started at 7 p. m. and finished at 9 p. m.
Many people came to the show. There were many performances, like songs, dances and dramas. We also accepted donations from kind people.
We wanted to call on more people to care about the disabled children and special education. We hope more people can give them food, clothes and chances to study. We also hope people will do more voluntary work to make a better world for them.
Finally, we want to thank everyone who helped us. Your kindness will bring warmth and hope to the disabled children.
National Disability Day is on the third Sunday of every May. On that day, we held a charity show at Sunshine Theatre. It started at 7 p. m. and finished at 9 p. m.
Many people came to the show. There were many performances, like songs, dances and dramas. We also accepted donations from kind people.
We wanted to call on more people to care about the disabled children and special education. We hope more people can give them food, clothes and chances to study. We also hope people will do more voluntary work to make a better world for them.
Finally, we want to thank everyone who helped us. Your kindness will bring warmth and hope to the disabled children.
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道题,先明确写作任务是作为活动组织者写一篇介绍助残日慈善晚会的英文报告。第一步先梳理所有必须覆盖的得分要点:①活动基本信息:时间为五月第三个星期日(全国助残日)、地点在剧院、活动主题是关爱残疾孩子与特殊教育;②活动内容包含文艺表演、捐赠环节;③活动意义:呼吁大众关注残疾儿童与特殊教育,号召大家提供力所能及的帮助;④结尾向所有活动支持者表达感谢。第二步确定文体为活动介绍类报告,介绍已经举办完的活动统一用一般过去时,以第一人称叙述即可,适当补充合理的细节比如活动时长、表演的具体类型、帮助的具体形式,让内容连贯自然,同时控制总词数在100左右,注意不要出现真实人名、校名、地名,就可以完成符合要求的作文。
【解析】
写作可按照四步走完成:
1. 开篇引入:先点明全国助残日的时间,顺理成章引出本次我们在剧院举办慈善晚会的事件,补充合理的活动起止时长,让基本信息更饱满。
2. 介绍活动流程:说明本次活动吸引了大量热心市民到场,具体安排了歌曲、舞蹈、短剧等丰富的文艺表演,同时设置了公开捐赠环节,接收爱心人士的善款、特殊教育教具等各类捐赠物资。
3. 点明活动目的:阐述本次活动的初衷是号召更多人关注残疾儿童群体和特殊教育事业,呼吁大家可以通过捐赠物资、提供学习机会、参与志愿服务等多种方式为残疾孩子提供帮助。
4. 收尾致谢:向所有为本次活动提供支持的工作人员、到场观众、爱心人士表达诚挚感谢,点明大家的善意会为残疾孩子带去温暖与希望。
最后通读全文,确认所有题干给出的要点都已覆盖,时态统一没有语法错误,词数符合100左右的要求,也没有出现真实隐私信息即可。
【答案】
One possible version
National Disability Day is on the third Sunday of every May. On that day, we held a charity show at Sunshine Theatre. It started at 7 p. m. and finished at 9 p. m.
Many people came to the show. There were many performances, like songs, dances and dramas. We also accepted donations from kind people.
We wanted to call on more people to care about the disabled children and special education. We hope more people can give them food, clothes and chances to study. We also hope people will do more voluntary work to make a better world for them.
Finally, we want to thank everyone who helped us. Your kindness will bring warmth and hope to the disabled children.
【知识点】
活动类英文写作
一般过去时应用
应用文写作规范
【点评】
本题属于提纲类应用文写作,所有得分要点都明确给出,难度较低,学生只需要逐一覆盖全部要点,适当补充符合场景的细节让行文连贯,注意时态统一,规避真实个人信息,很容易写出符合要求的作文,同时也能引导学生关注公益相关的话题,贴合现实生活。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题,先明确写作任务是作为活动组织者写一篇介绍助残日慈善晚会的英文报告。第一步先梳理所有必须覆盖的得分要点:①活动基本信息:时间为五月第三个星期日(全国助残日)、地点在剧院、活动主题是关爱残疾孩子与特殊教育;②活动内容包含文艺表演、捐赠环节;③活动意义:呼吁大众关注残疾儿童与特殊教育,号召大家提供力所能及的帮助;④结尾向所有活动支持者表达感谢。第二步确定文体为活动介绍类报告,介绍已经举办完的活动统一用一般过去时,以第一人称叙述即可,适当补充合理的细节比如活动时长、表演的具体类型、帮助的具体形式,让内容连贯自然,同时控制总词数在100左右,注意不要出现真实人名、校名、地名,就可以完成符合要求的作文。
【解析】
写作可按照四步走完成:
1. 开篇引入:先点明全国助残日的时间,顺理成章引出本次我们在剧院举办慈善晚会的事件,补充合理的活动起止时长,让基本信息更饱满。
2. 介绍活动流程:说明本次活动吸引了大量热心市民到场,具体安排了歌曲、舞蹈、短剧等丰富的文艺表演,同时设置了公开捐赠环节,接收爱心人士的善款、特殊教育教具等各类捐赠物资。
3. 点明活动目的:阐述本次活动的初衷是号召更多人关注残疾儿童群体和特殊教育事业,呼吁大家可以通过捐赠物资、提供学习机会、参与志愿服务等多种方式为残疾孩子提供帮助。
4. 收尾致谢:向所有为本次活动提供支持的工作人员、到场观众、爱心人士表达诚挚感谢,点明大家的善意会为残疾孩子带去温暖与希望。
最后通读全文,确认所有题干给出的要点都已覆盖,时态统一没有语法错误,词数符合100左右的要求,也没有出现真实隐私信息即可。
【答案】
One possible version
National Disability Day is on the third Sunday of every May. On that day, we held a charity show at Sunshine Theatre. It started at 7 p. m. and finished at 9 p. m.
Many people came to the show. There were many performances, like songs, dances and dramas. We also accepted donations from kind people.
We wanted to call on more people to care about the disabled children and special education. We hope more people can give them food, clothes and chances to study. We also hope people will do more voluntary work to make a better world for them.
Finally, we want to thank everyone who helped us. Your kindness will bring warmth and hope to the disabled children.
【知识点】
活动类英文写作
一般过去时应用
应用文写作规范
【点评】
本题属于提纲类应用文写作,所有得分要点都明确给出,难度较低,学生只需要逐一覆盖全部要点,适当补充符合场景的细节让行文连贯,注意时态统一,规避真实个人信息,很容易写出符合要求的作文,同时也能引导学生关注公益相关的话题,贴合现实生活。
【难度系数】
0.7