五、书面表达。
假设你是李华，你参观了“南通二十年变迁”的经济文化展览，对南通翻天覆地的变化有了更深刻的了解，你想和笔友 Andy 分享这些变化。请根据以下表格信息完成一封 90 词左右的信，已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear Andy,
I can't wait to tell you what I have learned about Nantong in the exhibition.
There have been great changes in Nantong during the past 20 years.
Hope you can visit Nantong soon. You're sure to love this city.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华，你参观了“南通二十年变迁”的经济文化展览，对南通翻天覆地的变化有了更深刻的了解，你想和笔友 Andy 分享这些变化。请根据以下表格信息完成一封 90 词左右的信，已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear Andy,
I can't wait to tell you what I have learned about Nantong in the exhibition.
There have been great changes in Nantong during the past 20 years.
There used to be only narrow roads here. People used to go to school or work by bicycle. If they wanted to travel around, they usually took a coach. It could take a long time. In people's free time, they spent much time playing chess. But now, Nantong has changed a lot. The roads have become wide and clean. It's fast and easy to take the underground to go anywhere. People enjoy square dancing after dinner. Life here is getting better and better. However, pollution is a big problem. The government has taken action to improve the environment. I'm sure people here will make Nantong a better place to live.
Hope you can visit Nantong soon. You're sure to love this city.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：五、One possible version:
Dear Andy,
I can't wait to tell you what I have learned about Nantong in the exhibition.
There have been great changes in Nantong during the past 20 years. There used to be only narrow roads here. People used to go to school or work by bicycle. If they wanted to travel around, they usually took a coach. It could take a long time. In people's free time, they spent much time playing chess. But now, Nantong has changed a lot. The roads have become wide and clean. It's fast and easy to take the underground to go anywhere. People enjoy square dancing after dinner. Life here is getting better and better. However, pollution is a big problem. The government has taken action to improve the environment. I'm sure people here will make Nantong a better place to live.
Hope you can visit Nantong soon. You're sure to love this city.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Andy,
I can't wait to tell you what I have learned about Nantong in the exhibition.
There have been great changes in Nantong during the past 20 years. There used to be only narrow roads here. People used to go to school or work by bicycle. If they wanted to travel around, they usually took a coach. It could take a long time. In people's free time, they spent much time playing chess. But now, Nantong has changed a lot. The roads have become wide and clean. It's fast and easy to take the underground to go anywhere. People enjoy square dancing after dinner. Life here is getting better and better. However, pollution is a big problem. The government has taken action to improve the environment. I'm sure people here will make Nantong a better place to live.
Hope you can visit Nantong soon. You're sure to love this city.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
这道题是写给笔友的分享类书信写作，解题时首先要理清写作逻辑：按照时间先后顺序，先介绍过去南通的情况，再对比当下的变化，最后补充个人观点。首先要把表格里“In the past”对应的所有提示元素（窄路、自行车、长途客车、下棋）全部自然融入过去场景的描述，用used to的结构来体现过去的状态；接着用转折过渡词转到“At present”部分，把宽马路、地铁、广场舞这些当下的元素串联起来，体现现在生活的便利丰富；最后在“Your opinion”部分，既可以肯定生活变好，也可以合理补充小的现存问题和对城市未来的期待，让内容更真实完整，同时控制总词数符合要求，注意书信的口语化分享语气，时态对应准确即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，先描述过去的南通：用There used to be only narrow roads引出过去的路况，接着说明过去人们日常出行靠自行车，长途出行乘坐长途客车，空闲娱乐活动以下棋为主，完整覆盖过去部分的所有提示信息，时态用一般过去时/used to结构。
2. 用转折词But now过渡，描述当下的变化：说明现在道路变得宽阔整洁，乘坐地铁可以快速便捷去往各处，人们晚饭后喜欢跳广场舞，完整覆盖当下部分的所有提示元素，时态用一般现在时体现当前的状态。
3. 补充个人观点：先感慨当下生活越来越好，同时合理点出现存的污染问题，说明政府已经采取行动改善环境，表达对南通未来发展的美好期许，自然衔接题干给出的结尾句，最后通读检查语法错误、时态是否统一，确认所有提示要点都已覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
There used to be only narrow roads here. People used to go to school or work by bicycle. If they wanted to travel around, they usually took a coach. It could take a long time. In people's free time, they spent much time playing chess. But now, Nantong has changed a lot. The roads have become wide and clean. It's fast and easy to take the underground to go anywhere. People enjoy square dancing after dinner. Life here is getting better and better. However, pollution is a big problem. The government has taken action to improve the environment. I'm sure people here will make Nantong a better place to live.
【知识点】
英语书信写作，时态对比运用，提示类作文写作
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的提示类应用文写作，要点给出清晰明确，重点考察学生对过去和现在不同时态的区分使用能力，以及信息整合、语句衔接的能力，学生只要覆盖全部给定提示信息，逻辑通顺，就能完成合格的作文，适当补充合理的个人观点还能让作文更出彩。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是写给笔友的分享类书信写作，解题时首先要理清写作逻辑：按照时间先后顺序，先介绍过去南通的情况，再对比当下的变化，最后补充个人观点。首先要把表格里“In the past”对应的所有提示元素（窄路、自行车、长途客车、下棋）全部自然融入过去场景的描述，用used to的结构来体现过去的状态；接着用转折过渡词转到“At present”部分，把宽马路、地铁、广场舞这些当下的元素串联起来，体现现在生活的便利丰富；最后在“Your opinion”部分，既可以肯定生活变好，也可以合理补充小的现存问题和对城市未来的期待，让内容更真实完整，同时控制总词数符合要求，注意书信的口语化分享语气，时态对应准确即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 承接题干给出的开头句，先描述过去的南通：用There used to be only narrow roads引出过去的路况，接着说明过去人们日常出行靠自行车，长途出行乘坐长途客车，空闲娱乐活动以下棋为主，完整覆盖过去部分的所有提示信息，时态用一般过去时/used to结构。
2. 用转折词But now过渡，描述当下的变化：说明现在道路变得宽阔整洁，乘坐地铁可以快速便捷去往各处，人们晚饭后喜欢跳广场舞，完整覆盖当下部分的所有提示元素，时态用一般现在时体现当前的状态。
3. 补充个人观点：先感慨当下生活越来越好，同时合理点出现存的污染问题，说明政府已经采取行动改善环境，表达对南通未来发展的美好期许，自然衔接题干给出的结尾句，最后通读检查语法错误、时态是否统一，确认所有提示要点都已覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
There used to be only narrow roads here. People used to go to school or work by bicycle. If they wanted to travel around, they usually took a coach. It could take a long time. In people's free time, they spent much time playing chess. But now, Nantong has changed a lot. The roads have become wide and clean. It's fast and easy to take the underground to go anywhere. People enjoy square dancing after dinner. Life here is getting better and better. However, pollution is a big problem. The government has taken action to improve the environment. I'm sure people here will make Nantong a better place to live.
【知识点】
英语书信写作，时态对比运用，提示类作文写作
【点评】
本题属于初中阶段常见的提示类应用文写作，要点给出清晰明确，重点考察学生对过去和现在不同时态的区分使用能力，以及信息整合、语句衔接的能力，学生只要覆盖全部给定提示信息，逻辑通顺，就能完成合格的作文，适当补充合理的个人观点还能让作文更出彩。
【难度系数】
0.7