五、书面表达
暑假来临之际，学校拟举办征文活动，以鼓励学生亲近自然，乐享户外。请以“Outdoor fun”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你所经历的记忆深刻的户外活动。包含所有要点，词数80左右。
1. When and where did you go?
2. What activities did you do?
3. How did you feel?
Outdoor fun
暑假来临之际，学校拟举办征文活动，以鼓励学生亲近自然，乐享户外。请以“Outdoor fun”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你所经历的记忆深刻的户外活动。包含所有要点，词数80左右。
1. When and where did you go?
2. What activities did you do?
3. How did you feel?
Outdoor fun
答案：One possible version:
Outdoor fun
Last Saturday, our class went camping together.
We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m., and then took a bus to the Wetland Park. We brought food, drinks, tents, sleeping bags and warm clothes with us. We arrived at the Wetland Park at 9:00 a.m. After we got off the bus, Daniel and Simon put up the tents. Kitty and Amy went to the lake to carry water and then started a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating on the lake. In the evening, we gathered around a campfire, singing and dancing.
We had an amazing time. The camping trip was so much fun that we will never forget it.
Outdoor fun
Last Saturday, our class went camping together.
We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m., and then took a bus to the Wetland Park. We brought food, drinks, tents, sleeping bags and warm clothes with us. We arrived at the Wetland Park at 9:00 a.m. After we got off the bus, Daniel and Simon put up the tents. Kitty and Amy went to the lake to carry water and then started a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating on the lake. In the evening, we gathered around a campfire, singing and dancing.
We had an amazing time. The camping trip was so much fun that we will never forget it.
解析：
【解析】
本文需围绕题目要求的三个要点展开写作：首先点明户外活动的时间和地点；接着详细描述所进行的活动；最后表达活动后的感受。写作时注意使用一般过去时，内容要连贯，词数控制在要求范围内。参考范文完整覆盖所有要点，先交代活动时间与地点，再依次描述各项活动，最后抒发内心感受，逻辑清晰。
【答案】
One possible version:
Outdoor fun
Last Saturday, our class went camping together.
We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m., and then took a bus to the Wetland Park. We brought food, drinks, tents, sleeping bags and warm clothes with us. We arrived at the Wetland Park at 9:00 a.m. After we got off the bus, Daniel and Simon put up the tents. Kitty and Amy went to the lake to carry water and then started a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating on the lake. In the evening, we gathered around a campfire, singing and dancing.
We had an amazing time. The camping trip was so much fun that we will never forget it.
【知识点】
1. 一般过去时运用
2. 户外活动类词汇
3. 记叙文写作结构
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容充实具体，时态运用准确，语言表达流畅自然，生动展现了露营活动的乐趣，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的英语记叙文范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本文需围绕题目要求的三个要点展开写作：首先点明户外活动的时间和地点；接着详细描述所进行的活动；最后表达活动后的感受。写作时注意使用一般过去时，内容要连贯，词数控制在要求范围内。参考范文完整覆盖所有要点，先交代活动时间与地点，再依次描述各项活动，最后抒发内心感受，逻辑清晰。
【答案】
One possible version:
Outdoor fun
Last Saturday, our class went camping together.
We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m., and then took a bus to the Wetland Park. We brought food, drinks, tents, sleeping bags and warm clothes with us. We arrived at the Wetland Park at 9:00 a.m. After we got off the bus, Daniel and Simon put up the tents. Kitty and Amy went to the lake to carry water and then started a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating on the lake. In the evening, we gathered around a campfire, singing and dancing.
We had an amazing time. The camping trip was so much fun that we will never forget it.
【知识点】
1. 一般过去时运用
2. 户外活动类词汇
3. 记叙文写作结构
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目所有要点，内容充实具体，时态运用准确，语言表达流畅自然，生动展现了露营活动的乐趣，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的英语记叙文范文。
【难度系数】
0.7