五、书面表达
假如你们社区正组织一次互助活动来团结邻里,现在还缺少一些热心志愿者。你需要代表社区中心写一封邮件,向全社区招募志愿者。以下是邮件需包含的主要内容:
Where and when (community centre, this Saturday)
Volunteers in need (neighbours with skills like ...)
Why we have the activity (...)
Dear neighbours,
The community centre
Exercise 7 of Unit 2 of 7B Assessment & Further study
假如你们社区正组织一次互助活动来团结邻里,现在还缺少一些热心志愿者。你需要代表社区中心写一封邮件,向全社区招募志愿者。以下是邮件需包含的主要内容:
Where and when (community centre, this Saturday)
Volunteers in need (neighbours with skills like ...)
Why we have the activity (...)
Dear neighbours,
We're going to have a "Helping Hands" activity at the community centre this Saturday. And we hope you can take part in it.
Now we need some volunteers with different kinds of skills. If you are good at taking things apart and repairing them, please come to help others in need.
If you're a lawyer or a doctor, you can help deal with some problems. We'll be very happy if any of you is willing to help.
I'm sure this activity will help lots of neighbours with problems.
And we will be very glad to have you as the volunteers.
I'm sure you will make our community a better place.
The community centre
Exercise 7 of Unit 2 of 7B Assessment & Further study
答案：Dear neighbours,
We're going to have a "Helping Hands" activity at the community centre this Saturday. And we hope you can take part in it.
Now we need some volunteers with different kinds of skills. If you are good at taking things apart and repairing them, please come to help others in need. If you're a lawyer or a doctor, you can help deal with some problems. We'll be very happy if any of you is willing to help.
I'm sure this activity will help lots of neighbours with problems. And we will be very glad to have you as the volunteers. I'm sure you will make our community a better place.
The community centre
We're going to have a "Helping Hands" activity at the community centre this Saturday. And we hope you can take part in it.
Now we need some volunteers with different kinds of skills. If you are good at taking things apart and repairing them, please come to help others in need. If you're a lawyer or a doctor, you can help deal with some problems. We'll be very happy if any of you is willing to help.
I'm sure this activity will help lots of neighbours with problems. And we will be very glad to have you as the volunteers. I'm sure you will make our community a better place.
The community centre
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确写作身份是社区中心，受众是全体社区居民，核心任务是招募互助活动志愿者，首先要把题干给出的三个必写要点全部覆盖：第一步先开篇直接点明活动的举办地点（社区中心）和时间（本周六），快速把核心基础信息传递给居民；第二步要清晰说明我们需要的志愿者类型，结合提示里的“有各类技能的邻居”做合理拓展，列举不同技能可以提供的服务，让居民清楚自己是否符合招募要求；第三步要讲清楚举办本次互助活动的原因，说明活动既能帮有困难的邻居解决实际问题，也能拉近邻里关系打造更好的社区，最后发出友好的邀约即可，全程语气要亲切友善，符合社区通知的调性，适配七年级的英语表达难度。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：直接告知全体邻居社区将在本周六于社区中心举办“Helping Hands”互助主题活动，顺势引出本次志愿者招募的事由，开门见山不冗余。
2. 说明招募要求：明确提出我们需要拥有不同技能的志愿者，分别举例说明擅长维修的居民可以帮邻里修理物件，拥有医生、律师等专业背景的居民可以为大家提供对应专业协助，清晰传递招募需求。
3. 阐述活动意义收尾：点明举办本次活动的目的是帮助有困难的邻居解决各类问题，同时呼吁大家报名参与，共同把社区建设得更美好，逻辑完整，要点无遗漏。
【答案】
Dear neighbours,
We're going to have a "Helping Hands" activity at the community centre this Saturday. And we hope you can take part in it.
Now we need some volunteers with different kinds of skills. If you are good at taking things apart and repairing them, please come to help others in need. If you're a lawyer or a doctor, you can help deal with some problems. We'll be very happy if any of you is willing to help.
I'm sure this activity will help lots of neighbours with problems. And we will be very glad to have you as the volunteers. I'm sure you will make our community a better place.
The community centre
【知识点】
英文邮件写作；提纲类作文要点整合；活动通知常用表达
【点评】
本篇习作完全覆盖题干给出的所有必填要点，行文逻辑流畅自然，从告知活动基础信息，到说明志愿者招募标准，再到阐述活动价值发出邀约层层递进，语气亲切贴合面向居民的社区通知场景，用词简单地道，完全符合七年级下册的英语写作能力要求，没有语法错误，是一篇规范合格的志愿者招募邮件。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先要明确写作身份是社区中心，受众是全体社区居民，核心任务是招募互助活动志愿者，首先要把题干给出的三个必写要点全部覆盖：第一步先开篇直接点明活动的举办地点（社区中心）和时间（本周六），快速把核心基础信息传递给居民；第二步要清晰说明我们需要的志愿者类型，结合提示里的“有各类技能的邻居”做合理拓展，列举不同技能可以提供的服务，让居民清楚自己是否符合招募要求；第三步要讲清楚举办本次互助活动的原因，说明活动既能帮有困难的邻居解决实际问题，也能拉近邻里关系打造更好的社区，最后发出友好的邀约即可，全程语气要亲切友善，符合社区通知的调性，适配七年级的英语表达难度。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：直接告知全体邻居社区将在本周六于社区中心举办“Helping Hands”互助主题活动，顺势引出本次志愿者招募的事由，开门见山不冗余。
2. 说明招募要求：明确提出我们需要拥有不同技能的志愿者，分别举例说明擅长维修的居民可以帮邻里修理物件，拥有医生、律师等专业背景的居民可以为大家提供对应专业协助，清晰传递招募需求。
3. 阐述活动意义收尾：点明举办本次活动的目的是帮助有困难的邻居解决各类问题，同时呼吁大家报名参与，共同把社区建设得更美好，逻辑完整，要点无遗漏。
【答案】
Dear neighbours,
We're going to have a "Helping Hands" activity at the community centre this Saturday. And we hope you can take part in it.
Now we need some volunteers with different kinds of skills. If you are good at taking things apart and repairing them, please come to help others in need. If you're a lawyer or a doctor, you can help deal with some problems. We'll be very happy if any of you is willing to help.
I'm sure this activity will help lots of neighbours with problems. And we will be very glad to have you as the volunteers. I'm sure you will make our community a better place.
The community centre
【知识点】
英文邮件写作；提纲类作文要点整合；活动通知常用表达
【点评】
本篇习作完全覆盖题干给出的所有必填要点，行文逻辑流畅自然，从告知活动基础信息，到说明志愿者招募标准，再到阐述活动价值发出邀约层层递进，语气亲切贴合面向居民的社区通知场景，用词简单地道，完全符合七年级下册的英语写作能力要求，没有语法错误，是一篇规范合格的志愿者招募邮件。
【难度系数】
0.7