五、书面表达
随着世界的持续发展与进步，你的家乡在这三十年间也发生了日新月异的变迁。请根据表格所提供的信息，写一篇约90词的英语短文，向大家介绍家乡这些年的变化，并分享你从中获得的感悟。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years ______ .
Exercise 7 of Unit 1 of 8B Assessment & Further study
随着世界的持续发展与进步，你的家乡在这三十年间也发生了日新月异的变迁。请根据表格所提供的信息，写一篇约90词的英语短文，向大家介绍家乡这些年的变化，并分享你从中获得的感悟。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years ______ .
Exercise 7 of Unit 1 of 8B Assessment & Further study
答案：Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years. People used to live in small, old houses. The roads were narrow dirt paths, and people mainly traveled by bike or on foot. They had little entertainment in free time.
Now, we live in tall, bright buildings with beautiful gardens. Wide, clean roads are everywhere, and high-speed trains take us to far places easily. We have cinemas and shopping malls to enjoy. I feel proud of these changes and believe our hometown will keep getting better.
Now, we live in tall, bright buildings with beautiful gardens. Wide, clean roads are everywhere, and high-speed trains take us to far places easily. We have cinemas and shopping malls to enjoy. I feel proud of these changes and believe our hometown will keep getting better.
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确写作任务：介绍家乡30年的变化并分享感悟。解题思路如下：
1. 先梳理表格给出的对比信息：过去的住房（破旧小屋）、道路（土路）、出行方式（自行车/步行）；现在的住房（高楼花园）、道路（宽阔马路）、出行方式（高铁）。
2. 按照题目要求自拟一组对比内容，比如过去休闲娱乐匮乏，现在有影院、商场等娱乐场所，丰富写作内容。
3. 写作时，先用used to句型描述过去的状态，再用一般现在时描述现在的情况，最后加入个人感悟，紧扣主题，控制词数在约90词。
【解析】
1. 开篇利用题目给出的开头，自然引入家乡变迁的话题。
2. 描述过去：用“People used to live in small, old houses.”对应过去的住房；“The roads were narrow dirt paths, and people mainly traveled by bike or on foot.”对应道路和出行方式；补充自拟内容“They had little entertainment in free time.”丰富过去的生活状态。
3. 描述现在：用“Now, we live in tall, bright buildings with beautiful gardens.”对应现在的住房；“Wide, clean roads are everywhere, and high-speed trains take us to far places easily.”对应道路和出行；补充“We have cinemas and shopping malls to enjoy.”对应自拟的现在娱乐情况。
4. 结尾加入感悟：“I feel proud of these changes and believe our hometown will keep getting better.”升华主题，完成写作。
【答案】
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years. People used to live in small, old houses. The roads were narrow dirt paths, and people mainly traveled by bike or on foot. They had little entertainment in free time.
Now, we live in tall, bright buildings with beautiful gardens. Wide, clean roads are everywhere, and high-speed trains take us to far places easily. We have cinemas and shopping malls to enjoy. I feel proud of these changes and believe our hometown will keep getting better.
【知识点】
used to用法、对比类写作、时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“家乡变迁”的主题，通过过去与现在的清晰对比，完整涵盖表格信息并合理补充自拟内容，语言表达流畅自然，时态运用准确，结尾的感悟真挚，符合题目要求的词数，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要明确写作任务：介绍家乡30年的变化并分享感悟。解题思路如下：
1. 先梳理表格给出的对比信息：过去的住房（破旧小屋）、道路（土路）、出行方式（自行车/步行）；现在的住房（高楼花园）、道路（宽阔马路）、出行方式（高铁）。
2. 按照题目要求自拟一组对比内容，比如过去休闲娱乐匮乏，现在有影院、商场等娱乐场所，丰富写作内容。
3. 写作时，先用used to句型描述过去的状态，再用一般现在时描述现在的情况，最后加入个人感悟，紧扣主题，控制词数在约90词。
【解析】
1. 开篇利用题目给出的开头，自然引入家乡变迁的话题。
2. 描述过去：用“People used to live in small, old houses.”对应过去的住房；“The roads were narrow dirt paths, and people mainly traveled by bike or on foot.”对应道路和出行方式；补充自拟内容“They had little entertainment in free time.”丰富过去的生活状态。
3. 描述现在：用“Now, we live in tall, bright buildings with beautiful gardens.”对应现在的住房；“Wide, clean roads are everywhere, and high-speed trains take us to far places easily.”对应道路和出行；补充“We have cinemas and shopping malls to enjoy.”对应自拟的现在娱乐情况。
4. 结尾加入感悟：“I feel proud of these changes and believe our hometown will keep getting better.”升华主题，完成写作。
【答案】
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years. People used to live in small, old houses. The roads were narrow dirt paths, and people mainly traveled by bike or on foot. They had little entertainment in free time.
Now, we live in tall, bright buildings with beautiful gardens. Wide, clean roads are everywhere, and high-speed trains take us to far places easily. We have cinemas and shopping malls to enjoy. I feel proud of these changes and believe our hometown will keep getting better.
【知识点】
used to用法、对比类写作、时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“家乡变迁”的主题，通过过去与现在的清晰对比，完整涵盖表格信息并合理补充自拟内容，语言表达流畅自然，时态运用准确，结尾的感悟真挚，符合题目要求的词数，是一篇优秀的话题作文。
【难度系数】
0.7