五、书面表达
懂礼仪、守规矩是每一名学生必备的良好素养。无论身处何地，我们都要时刻规范自身的言行举止。请根据以下图片提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈一谈我们应当如何在校园和公共场所践行文明礼仪。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are ______ .
Exercise 7 of Unit 5 of 8B Assessment & Further study
懂礼仪、守规矩是每一名学生必备的良好素养。无论身处何地，我们都要时刻规范自身的言行举止。请根据以下图片提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈一谈我们应当如何在校园和公共场所践行文明礼仪。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are ______ .
Exercise 7 of Unit 5 of 8B Assessment & Further study
答案：Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这篇书面表达的主题是“学生在校园和公共场所践行文明礼仪”，开头和结尾已给出，需围绕图片提示的内容展开并合理补充。解题思路如下：
1. 拆分结构：文章分为校园礼仪和公共场所礼仪两部分，分别展开论述。
2. 紧扣提示：先落实图片里的核心要点，校园部分要包含按时到校、尊敬老师；公共场所部分要包含遵守交通规则、排队等候。
3. 合理拓展：结合日常礼仪常识，补充校园里互助同学、保持校园整洁、不在走廊奔跑等内容，公共场所里不大声喧哗、不推搡他人等内容，让内容更充实饱满。
4. 衔接连贯：使用first of all, also, besides等衔接词，让段落逻辑清晰，语句通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯，最后衔接给定的结尾，使文章完整闭环。
【解析】
1. 校园礼仪板块：以“first of all, also, besides”等衔接词串联内容，先点明按时到校的基本要求，再通过礼貌问候老师体现对师长的尊重，接着补充帮助同学、维护校园整洁、不在走廊奔跑避免意外等符合校园场景的礼仪内容，让内容有条理且贴近校园生活。
2. 公共场所礼仪板块：先强调遵守交通规则的安全性，再列举等公交、购物时排队等候的场景，补充不推搡他人、公共场所低声交谈不打扰他人等公共礼仪细节，用“when, also”衔接，丰富场景的同时强化礼仪主题。
3. 最后衔接给定结尾，呼应开头的“good manners and follow rules”，强调文明礼仪的意义，使文章主题突出。
【答案】
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
【知识点】
1. 礼仪话题英语写作
2. 英语段落衔接技巧
3. 日常行为规范英语表达
【点评】
本文结构清晰，将内容分为校园和公共场所两个板块展开，逻辑分明；使用了first of all, besides, also等衔接词，使行文流畅自然；内容上既覆盖了题目提示的要点，又合理拓展了符合主题的礼仪内容，语言规范地道，很好地呼应了“懂礼仪、守规矩”的主题，符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要明确这篇书面表达的主题是“学生在校园和公共场所践行文明礼仪”，开头和结尾已给出，需围绕图片提示的内容展开并合理补充。解题思路如下：
1. 拆分结构：文章分为校园礼仪和公共场所礼仪两部分，分别展开论述。
2. 紧扣提示：先落实图片里的核心要点，校园部分要包含按时到校、尊敬老师；公共场所部分要包含遵守交通规则、排队等候。
3. 合理拓展：结合日常礼仪常识，补充校园里互助同学、保持校园整洁、不在走廊奔跑等内容，公共场所里不大声喧哗、不推搡他人等内容，让内容更充实饱满。
4. 衔接连贯：使用first of all, also, besides等衔接词，让段落逻辑清晰，语句通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯，最后衔接给定的结尾，使文章完整闭环。
【解析】
1. 校园礼仪板块：以“first of all, also, besides”等衔接词串联内容，先点明按时到校的基本要求，再通过礼貌问候老师体现对师长的尊重，接着补充帮助同学、维护校园整洁、不在走廊奔跑避免意外等符合校园场景的礼仪内容，让内容有条理且贴近校园生活。
2. 公共场所礼仪板块：先强调遵守交通规则的安全性，再列举等公交、购物时排队等候的场景，补充不推搡他人、公共场所低声交谈不打扰他人等公共礼仪细节，用“when, also”衔接，丰富场景的同时强化礼仪主题。
3. 最后衔接给定结尾，呼应开头的“good manners and follow rules”，强调文明礼仪的意义，使文章主题突出。
【答案】
Students with Good Manners
As students, we should have good manners and follow rules. It's important for us to behave correctly no matter where we are.
At school, first of all, we must come to school on time every day. We should also show respect for our teachers by greeting them politely. We need to be kind and ready to help our classmates as well. Besides, we need to keep the school clean and tidy. We shouldn't run in the hallway to avoid accidents.
In public places, we have to follow traffic rules carefully to stay safe. When we are waiting for a bus or shopping in the store, we should wait in line patiently. Also, we shouldn't push past others even if someone is in our way. We should keep our voice down in public places to avoid troubling people around us.
In a word, good manners can make us better students and help build a nicer world.
【知识点】
1. 礼仪话题英语写作
2. 英语段落衔接技巧
3. 日常行为规范英语表达
【点评】
本文结构清晰，将内容分为校园和公共场所两个板块展开，逻辑分明；使用了first of all, besides, also等衔接词，使行文流畅自然；内容上既覆盖了题目提示的要点，又合理拓展了符合主题的礼仪内容，语言规范地道，很好地呼应了“懂礼仪、守规矩”的主题，符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7