五、书面表达
假如你们学校正在招募敬老院志愿服务活动的志愿者,请你根据以下要点,以学生会的名义写一份90词左右的倡议书,呼吁同学们积极参与活动,关爱和帮助老人。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点:1. What difficulties are the elderly facing? 2. What can we do to help them?
Dear schoolmates,
I'm the chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing to call on you to join our volunteer activity in the Home for the Elderly ______ .
Your love and care will bring sunshine to their lives. Let's join in this meaningful activity! The Students' Union
假如你们学校正在招募敬老院志愿服务活动的志愿者,请你根据以下要点,以学生会的名义写一份90词左右的倡议书,呼吁同学们积极参与活动,关爱和帮助老人。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点:1. What difficulties are the elderly facing? 2. What can we do to help them?
Dear schoolmates,
I'm the chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing to call on you to join our volunteer activity in the Home for the Elderly ______ .
Your love and care will bring sunshine to their lives. Let's join in this meaningful activity! The Students' Union
答案:Dear schoolmates,
I'm the chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing to call on you to join our volunteer activity in the Home for the Elderly.
The elderly there often feel lonely because their children are busy with work and can't visit them often. Many of them find it difficult to walk smoothly, hear well and go shopping by themselves. As a result, their life is not easy, and they need our care badly.
We can do a lot of meaningful things to help them. First, we can chat with them patiently to cheer them up. Then, we can give some wonderful shows like singing and dancing to bring them joy. Besides, we can clean their rooms and make their living environment nicer. What's more, we can donate some useful things for their daily life.
Your love and care will bring sunshine to their lives. Let's join in this meaningful activity!
The Students' Union
I'm the chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing to call on you to join our volunteer activity in the Home for the Elderly.
The elderly there often feel lonely because their children are busy with work and can't visit them often. Many of them find it difficult to walk smoothly, hear well and go shopping by themselves. As a result, their life is not easy, and they need our care badly.
We can do a lot of meaningful things to help them. First, we can chat with them patiently to cheer them up. Then, we can give some wonderful shows like singing and dancing to bring them joy. Besides, we can clean their rooms and make their living environment nicer. What's more, we can donate some useful things for their daily life.
Your love and care will bring sunshine to their lives. Let's join in this meaningful activity!
The Students' Union
解析:
【分析】
首先,我们要明确这是一篇以学生会名义发出的倡议书,核心目的是呼吁同学们参与敬老院志愿活动,需紧扣题目给出的两个核心要点:老人面临的困难、我们能提供的帮助。
第一步,衔接给定开头后,先从精神和身体两个层面阐述老人的困境:精神上因子女忙碌缺少陪伴而孤独,身体上存在行走、听力不便,难以独自购物等问题,让读者清晰感知老人的迫切需求;第二步,针对这些困难给出具体可行的帮助措施,用first、then等连接词分点说明,使内容条理清晰;最后呼应给定结尾,强化呼吁效果。写作时要注意语言正式且亲切,符合学生会的身份,同时控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头:承接题目给定的开头,自然引出敬老院老人的生活现状。
2. 阐述老人的困难:
精神层面:点明老人因子女工作忙碌、鲜有探望而感到孤独:*The elderly there often feel lonely because their children are busy with work and can't visit them often.*
生活与身体层面:说明老人的行动、听力障碍及购物难题,强调他们急需关爱:*Many of them find it difficult to walk smoothly, hear well and go shopping by themselves. As a result, their life is not easy, and they need our care badly.*
3. 列举帮助措施:用逻辑连接词串联具体行动,让内容层次分明:
精神陪伴:*First, we can chat with them patiently to cheer them up.*
娱乐关怀:*Then, we can give some wonderful shows like singing and dancing to bring them joy.*
生活照料:*Besides, we can clean their rooms and make their living environment nicer.*
物资捐赠:*What's more, we can donate some useful things for their daily life.*
4. 呼应给定结尾,完成倡议书的撰写。
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
I'm the chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing to call on you to join our volunteer activity in the Home for the Elderly.
The elderly there often feel lonely because their children are busy with work and can't visit them often. Many of them find it difficult to walk smoothly, hear well and go shopping by themselves. As a result, their life is not easy, and they need our care badly.
We can do a lot of meaningful things to help them. First, we can chat with them patiently to cheer them up. Then, we can give some wonderful shows like singing and dancing to bring them joy. Besides, we can clean their rooms and make their living environment nicer. What's more, we can donate some useful things for their daily life.
Your love and care will bring sunshine to their lives. Let's join in this meaningful activity!
The Students' Union
【知识点】
1. 倡议书写作格式
2. 关爱老人话题表达
3. 英语实用句型运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰、逻辑连贯。先点明老人的精神与生活困境,再针对性提出具体可行的帮助措施,用丰富的连接词使内容层次分明。语言正式得体,符合学生会的身份,能有效传递关爱老人的理念,呼吁同学们参与志愿活动,是一篇优秀的倡议书。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先,我们要明确这是一篇以学生会名义发出的倡议书,核心目的是呼吁同学们参与敬老院志愿活动,需紧扣题目给出的两个核心要点:老人面临的困难、我们能提供的帮助。
第一步,衔接给定开头后,先从精神和身体两个层面阐述老人的困境:精神上因子女忙碌缺少陪伴而孤独,身体上存在行走、听力不便,难以独自购物等问题,让读者清晰感知老人的迫切需求;第二步,针对这些困难给出具体可行的帮助措施,用first、then等连接词分点说明,使内容条理清晰;最后呼应给定结尾,强化呼吁效果。写作时要注意语言正式且亲切,符合学生会的身份,同时控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
1. 衔接开头:承接题目给定的开头,自然引出敬老院老人的生活现状。
2. 阐述老人的困难:
精神层面:点明老人因子女工作忙碌、鲜有探望而感到孤独:*The elderly there often feel lonely because their children are busy with work and can't visit them often.*
生活与身体层面:说明老人的行动、听力障碍及购物难题,强调他们急需关爱:*Many of them find it difficult to walk smoothly, hear well and go shopping by themselves. As a result, their life is not easy, and they need our care badly.*
3. 列举帮助措施:用逻辑连接词串联具体行动,让内容层次分明:
精神陪伴:*First, we can chat with them patiently to cheer them up.*
娱乐关怀:*Then, we can give some wonderful shows like singing and dancing to bring them joy.*
生活照料:*Besides, we can clean their rooms and make their living environment nicer.*
物资捐赠:*What's more, we can donate some useful things for their daily life.*
4. 呼应给定结尾,完成倡议书的撰写。
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
I'm the chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing to call on you to join our volunteer activity in the Home for the Elderly.
The elderly there often feel lonely because their children are busy with work and can't visit them often. Many of them find it difficult to walk smoothly, hear well and go shopping by themselves. As a result, their life is not easy, and they need our care badly.
We can do a lot of meaningful things to help them. First, we can chat with them patiently to cheer them up. Then, we can give some wonderful shows like singing and dancing to bring them joy. Besides, we can clean their rooms and make their living environment nicer. What's more, we can donate some useful things for their daily life.
Your love and care will bring sunshine to their lives. Let's join in this meaningful activity!
The Students' Union
【知识点】
1. 倡议书写作格式
2. 关爱老人话题表达
3. 英语实用句型运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰、逻辑连贯。先点明老人的精神与生活困境,再针对性提出具体可行的帮助措施,用丰富的连接词使内容层次分明。语言正式得体,符合学生会的身份,能有效传递关爱老人的理念,呼吁同学们参与志愿活动,是一篇优秀的倡议书。
【难度系数】
0.6