五、小练笔
If your friend Tom wants to go on an online travel, please recommend a city and the must-do activities to him. (At least 5 sentences ______ )
Exercise 4 of Unit 3 of 8B Grammar
If your friend Tom wants to go on an online travel, please recommend a city and the must-do activities to him. (At least 5 sentences ______ )
Exercise 4 of Unit 3 of 8B Grammar
答案：Hi, Tom! I'd like to recommend you to have an online travel of Nanjing. Nanjing is an
ancient city in the east of China. It is such a beautiful and historic city! A visit to the
Confucius Temple is a must if you love traditional Chinese culture. You can take a boat trip
along the Qinhuai River and enjoy the old-time feel. Zhongshan Mountain National Park is
also one of the most visited tourist attractions. I'm sure you'll love this city and even want
to visit Nanjing in person someday.
ancient city in the east of China. It is such a beautiful and historic city! A visit to the
Confucius Temple is a must if you love traditional Chinese culture. You can take a boat trip
along the Qinhuai River and enjoy the old-time feel. Zhongshan Mountain National Park is
also one of the most visited tourist attractions. I'm sure you'll love this city and even want
to visit Nanjing in person someday.
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们要明确题目要求：给朋友Tom推荐一个适合线上旅行的城市，还要介绍必做活动，且至少写5句话。思考步骤如下：第一步，选择一个兼具历史底蕴与特色景点的城市，比如南京，这类城市有丰富的线上游览内容；第二步，以友好的问候开篇，贴合朋友间的交流语境；第三步，简单介绍城市的基本信息，让Tom对城市有初步认知；第四步，逐一推荐必做的线上活动，搭配具体的体验描述，突出活动亮点；最后，用总结性语句收尾，表达对Tom线上旅行的期待，确保满足句子数量要求且内容连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇问候并点明推荐：用“Hi, Tom! I'd like to recommend you to have an online travel of Nanjing.”开启对话，直接明确推荐内容，符合日常交流语气。
2. 介绍城市概况：“Nanjing is an ancient city in the east of China. It is such a beautiful and historic city!”两句分别点明南京的地理位置和核心特质，快速让读者建立对城市的印象。
3. 推荐首个必体验活动：“A visit to the Confucius Temple is a must if you love traditional Chinese culture.”结合文化喜好给出推荐，明确活动的吸引力所在。
4. 描述特色活动体验：“You can take a boat trip along the Qinhuai River and enjoy the old-time feel.”具体描绘秦淮河游船的感受，让线上旅行的场景更具象。
5. 补充热门景点：“Zhongshan Mountain National Park is also one of the most visited tourist attractions.”增加中山陵景区，丰富推荐内容，展现南京的多元游览价值。
6. 收尾表达期待：“I'm sure you'll love this city and even want to visit Nanjing in person someday.”用肯定的语气收尾，让内容完整且充满温度，同时满足题目至少5句话的要求。
【答案】
Hi, Tom! I'd like to recommend you to have an online travel of Nanjing. Nanjing is an
ancient city in the east of China. It is such a beautiful and historic city! A visit to the
Confucius Temple is a must if you love traditional Chinese culture. You can take a boat trip
along the Qinhuai River and enjoy the old-time feel. Zhongshan Mountain National Park is
also one of the most visited tourist attractions. I'm sure you'll love this city and even want
to visit Nanjing in person someday.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、城市景点描述、建议类表达
【点评】
这篇小练笔结构清晰，从问候开篇到城市介绍、活动推荐，再到收尾祝愿，逻辑连贯自然，符合朋友间的交流语境。内容紧扣题目要求，不仅推荐了合适的城市，还详细介绍了特色活动，句子数量达标，语言地道易懂，能有效完成线上旅行的推荐任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要明确题目要求：给朋友Tom推荐一个适合线上旅行的城市，还要介绍必做活动，且至少写5句话。思考步骤如下：第一步，选择一个兼具历史底蕴与特色景点的城市，比如南京，这类城市有丰富的线上游览内容；第二步，以友好的问候开篇，贴合朋友间的交流语境；第三步，简单介绍城市的基本信息，让Tom对城市有初步认知；第四步，逐一推荐必做的线上活动，搭配具体的体验描述，突出活动亮点；最后，用总结性语句收尾，表达对Tom线上旅行的期待，确保满足句子数量要求且内容连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇问候并点明推荐：用“Hi, Tom! I'd like to recommend you to have an online travel of Nanjing.”开启对话，直接明确推荐内容，符合日常交流语气。
2. 介绍城市概况：“Nanjing is an ancient city in the east of China. It is such a beautiful and historic city!”两句分别点明南京的地理位置和核心特质，快速让读者建立对城市的印象。
3. 推荐首个必体验活动：“A visit to the Confucius Temple is a must if you love traditional Chinese culture.”结合文化喜好给出推荐，明确活动的吸引力所在。
4. 描述特色活动体验：“You can take a boat trip along the Qinhuai River and enjoy the old-time feel.”具体描绘秦淮河游船的感受，让线上旅行的场景更具象。
5. 补充热门景点：“Zhongshan Mountain National Park is also one of the most visited tourist attractions.”增加中山陵景区，丰富推荐内容，展现南京的多元游览价值。
6. 收尾表达期待：“I'm sure you'll love this city and even want to visit Nanjing in person someday.”用肯定的语气收尾，让内容完整且充满温度，同时满足题目至少5句话的要求。
【答案】
Hi, Tom! I'd like to recommend you to have an online travel of Nanjing. Nanjing is an
ancient city in the east of China. It is such a beautiful and historic city! A visit to the
Confucius Temple is a must if you love traditional Chinese culture. You can take a boat trip
along the Qinhuai River and enjoy the old-time feel. Zhongshan Mountain National Park is
also one of the most visited tourist attractions. I'm sure you'll love this city and even want
to visit Nanjing in person someday.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、城市景点描述、建议类表达
【点评】
这篇小练笔结构清晰，从问候开篇到城市介绍、活动推荐，再到收尾祝愿，逻辑连贯自然，符合朋友间的交流语境。内容紧扣题目要求，不仅推荐了合适的城市，还详细介绍了特色活动，句子数量达标，语言地道易懂，能有效完成线上旅行的推荐任务。
【难度系数】
0.6